The Right Way to Find Redemption

I rushed to watch it quickly, but the result is that there are two worlds. The female protagonist is set to have read thousands of sails and countless people, but she cannot understand the male protagonist's feelings. She always loves her so much that she feels that the male protagonist who longs for her to get close to her does not love her to the point where she can't help but then tortures the male protagonist to the core. When he realized that the other party was in love with him, he had already become emotional for a long time. First, he quickly broke into the plot and tried to kill himself, and then when it came to the plot here, he couldn't move and watched the delicious male protagonist being tortured. He said it was because he was afraid of being punished by the system, and because he loved life so much...? ? I sat there and said that the planned follow-up world structure was too big, so I discussed it with the editor and started it alone... Except for the final stage, the relationship and plot progress were kind of draggy and boring... Compared with the low number of words, a concise, short and interesting story is better for people to watch...

I love this type of male protagonist very much. No matter whether he is gentle or cold on the surface, he is very possessive in his heart. Moreover, the ignorant love shown by the male protagonist in Little Wolf Dog is really great! ! The most fascinating part is when the two people just expressed their heartfelt feelings to each other. I love this kind of fierce emotion. Woohoo.

,, The author's writing style and content are both to my liking

I really like the heroine... I can handle her clearly, and when I realize I like her, I stay decisively. Why do some people think the heroine is indecisive? Are you okay? For the male protagonist, the female protagonist is everything, but for the female protagonist, it is just an experience in life. If you look at a relationship in an ordinary person's life, is it possible that the female protagonist has many lives? Career and enjoyment are much more important in the female protagonist's life. Why should the male protagonist live and die for the female protagonist, and the female protagonist must also live and die for the male protagonist? From my point of view, the two male protagonists are really lucky! There are so many miserable characters in the world, who is so lucky to meet such a good heroine and be redeemed by her? Tsk, I don't know what's good and what's good

I got into this book from the author's "Sweet Cookie Story Anthology", and then read many of the author's articles about fast-traveling, female supporting characters, and male supporting characters. After reading this book, I felt that the author's writing style has improved. The heroine is finally not the kind of female character who is different on the surface but actually has the same core. However, after the second reading, I have some different feelings. This work is a redemption story. On the surface, the first one is like an anti-Stockholm story. The heroine is very sad and angry at the misfortune of the hero falling in love with her as a "violator". However, if you look closely, the heroine is still shouting slogans. It has the nature of a mission, with a clear purpose of being good to one person, redeeming people who have been tortured and abused, and being saved. It is normal for the Redeemer to fall in love with the heroine. The background is ancient times. The heroine became husband and wife with the hero because she wanted to redeem him. Later, she realized that she was heartbroken and began to have double standards. The stories in these two worlds felt to me that they were torture for the sake of torture. The hero must be tortured to prove his deep love for the heroine. The heroine saw the hero's Self-abuse behavior, she has always been "smart" before she realized, oh, that's what he thought, so now I can stay in this world and be with him... I'm a little speechless, I really hate this type of heroine, she is portrayed as being serious and responsible in everything she does, but in fact the heroine is very cold. She wears a shell of redemption, but her status is not equal to that of the male protagonists. I am actually very curious whether the male protagonists will have so-called "love" for her if they know that she is just completing tasks and doing this. Love should only occur when both parties have equal identities, right to speak, and other statuses. Maybe what makes me uncomfortable in the second review is the heroine's "superiority". In my humble opinion, welcome to exchange and discuss

Spread flowers, delicious cookies

Is this the end? Okay, although it feels a bit perfunctory_(:з∠)_

It would be nice if the second story was changed to no cp. The second half felt like a forced twist, and I thought it would return to modern times.

! ! ! Nice! It's over. I really like the ending.

So pretty! ! ! I love it so much!