Rose of No Man's Land

Waiting for Mumu to scold Ji Xiaoyu. After all, if you use your mental power too much, you will definitely get scolded.

Hahahahahahahaha Mumu is going to be pissed to death

Ji Xiaoyu: Show affection, I am professional.

Congratulations, I finally finished reading it and have some small comments. The author is a novice, I guess, and the writing style is a bit childish. I felt sleepy in the early stage, but in the later stage, I can see obvious progress. However, there are some problems in the character creation. In the early stage, it was said that Mumu is an ice cube that has lived for thousands of years. Later, it is straight up. The second little Jiji, I can see that the author wants to create a childish marshal or a little wolf dog at home. But I didn't understand it well. My feeling is that this marshal is too childish. Thirdly, I think this problem is that we have different views on love. During the process of getting along, I felt that Marshal Ji was a bit of a bigot, but he would go back every time. Then, with Mu Mu, I felt a little unbearable. A person who has lived for thousands of years still gets angry at every turn? Some things are obviously meant to be a joke, but I feel very awkward about this. (My wife is very good, she is sweet and soft) There are still some logical inconsistencies in the article, but as a newcomer, it is still very good. Keep up the good work.

Nice! Come on, author!

58.7 Signed in hand

Looking forward to the next chapter being sweeter

24.4 Always ignore her? What's the meaning

17.2, There are too many of them

Real or fake? Are you kidding me about getting divorced?