A Hoarder's Life in Another World [System]

The last chapter was so well written. So good that even after many years I still want to come back and leave a review. Technology changes the world, and philosophy changes a person's perspective on the world. Ayan's departure and the release of the wolf have infinitely elevated this book. I don't agree with everyone who is against this ending, and I don't agree with "there is a better way to handle it". I think this is the best ending.

I find that in the author's articles, I am often not very interested at the beginning, full of interest in the middle, and disappointed at the end. And the most important thing is not to have expectations, otherwise you have to constantly adjust expectations. But every book is really wonderful

Hahaha, this was the only book I had ever read that had 0 subscriptions on the sleeve. I gave up after reading 10 chapters. The progress was as slow as the ant moving version of "Minecraft". It was really boring. I picked it up again because I have been obsessed with "Meow Me and Me" recently. I felt that my wife was good at writing about operations and farming, so I bit the bullet and started watching it, and I still absorbed it bit by bit. I still wanted to give up countless times in the middle. The system of the female protagonist is too unnatural, which makes the farming a little watery. The development and operation flow have become unchallenged. The writing is very low-end, and the upgrade flow of the male channel is not a mistake that would be made. It does not feel like a mistake that the sleeves will make. Confused but keep reading. When I saw the back, I felt that the side of this book was really different. I was really trying to write a male-style female novel. It was pure and refreshing. Sometimes it felt like I typed the words without even using my brain [laughing and crying]. When I saw the part about Night Walk, I laughed. Isn't this the way that male authors often say that their small heads control their big heads when they write? Hahaha, I am really convinced. What happened to you when you were writing this book? After reading the last 40 chapters, the plot suddenly ran wild, and the familiar sleeve ending came. It's indeed quite shocking. From the ants moving at the beginning to the sea of ​​stars at the end, I really feel like I'm in a trance when I think back on it. Shou's imagination is still awesome. Even if he uses a small head to control the big head's writing, it's still fascinating. I'm really out of ideas. After reading the article for so many years, only Sode Dai can always bring something fresh to people. As long as you continue to write, I will always be your reader. Xiu, please be healthy. I will be waiting for your update in the zombie book ~ Bye

After reading it, tell me what you think ①The hostess's question Many readers think that the heroine's character is very wrong, especially in 419, when the personality collapse is particularly severe. However, in my opinion, the heroine's character has always been like this. She is kind and selfish, easy to control her appearance, and cares about her head rather than her body in many things. She is a very standard "modern college student with a gold finger" character. In addition, the heroine also has a certain degree of childhood trauma, so many times the heroine's behavior will be inconsistent. The heroine is not born with social phobia, or he is not socially phobic in the popular sense. She is afraid of being disappointed, so she has made herself a prisoner of social phobia. Especially during the period when the heroine chose 419, the heroine was affected by hormones, which amplified her character weaknesses and flaws. Although this does not meet the readers' expectations, it is very consistent with the heroine's character. It was not until later that the heroine experienced more and more things that she gradually began to complete her childhood and her personality. All in all, I think the heroine's character is not broken. (Ps, whether the character collapses and whether the reader can accept the character are two issues. The latter is the reader's personal choice, and the former is the author's writing issue. I think the author does not have this problem here) ②The rhythm of the article For me personally, my favorite content is when the heroine survives in the wilderness in the mountains, because the theme of this section is hard work -> reward, research -> gain I really like this kind of content where as long as you work hard, you will be rewarded And when the heroine begins to enter the world, the theme of the plot becomes to show herself to others and grow up. Of course, this content cannot be said to be wrong, but it is not attractive to me personally, and to be fair, the development of this part is too fast, especially in the later stages. This snowball development model is actually in line with the laws of capital development, but it is obviously not in line with readers' psychological expectations (I see many readers complaining about this part) And I also believe that many readers will think that this is an infrastructure book when they first read this book. Most of what they want to read is about infrastructure construction. But in fact, after the completion of the fairy palace, the infrastructure part basically went offline and was gradually outsourced. It was replaced by the communication and interaction between the heroine and the local people. I spent some time thinking about why I was so unhappy with this part, and then I discovered that the real social fear was not the heroine, but me. I really miss the days when the heroine only dealt with wild beasts in the early stage. (PS, there are some very criticized operations in this paragraph, that is, the author actively makes the heroine make some mistakes in order to let the heroine gain something. Sometimes this kind of mistake is still within the scope of "mistakes that college students easily make", and sometimes this mistake is a bit outrageous. At this point, I really can't tell whether the author's writing skills are not mature enough, or whether the author is really engaging in the reader's mentality) ③Ending problem There is nothing wrong with the ending. The problem with Zheng Yan that many people criticize is not a problem, because the appearance of Zheng Yan is one of the seeds of fire sown by the heroine in the world. It is a spark that appears under the careful cultivation of the heroine. The reader's inability to accept Zheng Yan's appearance is actually the same as the reader's inability to accept the departure of the wolves, that is, the reader cannot accept "betrayal" and "loss". In readers' minds, servants like Zheng Yan and pets like wolves are accessories to the heroine, so when they have the idea of leaving the heroine, readers will have such a big reaction. Of course, I think there should be a certain problem of insufficient foreshadowing here, and there is not enough psychological preparation for the readers. For example, when I roughly read two reviews and read the book with the mentality of "the heroine ends up betraying all her relatives and losing everything", I was surprised to find that the ending of the heroine was actually pretty good, and she actually found the future that the heroine really wanted. ④The wolf problem What does it mean that the heroine raises a group of wolves that once ate humans, feeds them with good food and drinks, helps them develop their talents and push them beyond their limits, and then releases them back into the mountains in the end? I'm not saying that I can't stand the release of wild animals, but this is obviously a wild animal! They are wolves that can eat people and have really eaten people. They cannot be defeated by ordinary people. With the help of the heroine, they have evolved to a pack of wolves that cannot be defeated by ordinary warriors! Just releasing a pack of wolves like this back into the mountains, the heroine is really not afraid that the wolves will turn around and eat the people in the village below! Yes, the natural ecology in the mountains has its own laws, but hasn't the heroine cleaned up all the powerful beasts around her over the years? All the natural enemies of the wolves are dead, and then the wolves are still so close to the village? So many people are complaining about Zheng Yan's problem, but I think the problem of wolves is really the biggest problem! (Ps, but this is in line with the heroine's personality of being easily hot-headed and caring about her head rather than her buttocks) All in all, this is a book with reasonable characters and characters, but it may not meet readers' expectations.

The pace in the later stages was so fast that it felt uncoordinated. Overall, this is a great novel, and you can feel the author's thoughts. Not all supporting characters revolve around the heroine, and most of them are shaped to some extent. But there is still one regret for me: the male content is too high anyway. The heroine's lover, the heroine's children who play a role, the people whom the heroine trusts, and the people who are close to the heroine are mostly men. The most important and central ones are Hu Xiang, Jingui and Xiaoquan. They are all men. The close female characters Yushu, Weiyue and Sister Bianguan either end after a few chapters or have too few scenes. If the background is a super feudal social environment that favors boys over girls, it would be fine, but in the background, women have a certain status. To be honest, if I hadn't seen the paid stamp, I would have subscribed to it all, but I would have given up on reading it after seeing half of it containing male content. Of course, I don't want to accuse the author of loving men or anything else. All the female characters in this novel are well-created and very good. It's just that the core female protagonist team is all men and that's not my personal taste.

The height of the article is always there, not just at the end. 1?? In the beginning, Lili was just a college student who was inexperienced in the world. She achieved self-sufficiency through her own hands. This was the first step to establish her character. She was hardworking and kind. Her subsequent growth trajectory actually tells the story of the transformation of college students after graduation and a logical growth; 2?? The second shock to me was that Hu Xiang persuaded her to start a tung oil garden but was persuaded. Lili began to wake up from it. She began to want to be a useful person to society, so she started a series of subsequent actions to stabilize food prices. Even the description of a wave of silver shortages made me feel real, absurd and funny. This part of the plot is basically a dialogue between Hu Xiang and Lili, implying a dialogue between capital and conscience (it feels a bit like doing high school Chinese reading comprehension) 3?? The subsequent trip allowed Lili to see the gaps in the social system, which made her determined to side with Yanbi, not because she was in Yanbi, but because she recognized Yanbi, which is a reflection of social values; 4?? Last point, regarding Ayan, I really want to say that he died early in the morning. If there were no awakening of some people, we would not be here today. Some people think that being a slave is good, but a slave is a slave, no matter how good he is, he is still a slave. Ayan's ideological awakening also plays a very important role in the entire society. At the beginning of the article, it is written that ordinary people have awe and admiration for warriors, and there is a difference between heaven and earth, while thinkers are trying to make people stand up mentally. Just think of the child who came to the Immortal Palace as a servant to eat, drink, and have stable economic conditions. Aqiao was also a child when he first came and turned out to be a warrior. The other servants naturally accepted that he should live a better life than us. People do not stand up mentally and remain slaves all their lives. Wake up, everyone, they died early in the morning! Finally, I would like to thank Sodebian for letting me see such a wonderful world again.

Seeing Ayan, I can't help but think, if the feudal system is still there, what will happen to us ordinary people? As a pioneer of ideological awakening, he is always not understood by others, but this does not mean that freedom is wrong. It is great to discover injustice and free yourself from servility.

One thing to say, I still like the time when the heroine is pioneering in the early stage, how beautiful it is! It reminds me of the small raft, forest, and Minecraft I played with. It was very real. I stocked up on goods, and everything I built was also very detailed. Later, when I came across that the male protagonist was pregnant, I started to violate the rules. Hey... I really enjoyed the writing, but the development was weird. I'd better continue chasing more gold.

I am extremely glad that I was not affected by some negative comments a few days ago and continued to read it. This is the fantasy world I want to see. The writing style is not important, but the core must be exquisite. The heroine's code of conduct is unique enough, and her growth path is also sad. The ease with which her children and lovers can be taken care of makes me envious. In this article, I have rekindled the fire in my heart after a long absence. I see the brilliance of human nature and the brilliance of freedom. It is the enlightenment at the beginning of the birth of thought and my original intention of reading novels.

To be honest, I read the whole article with a smile, but when I saw Zheng Yan at the end, I couldn't help but cry, because human thought is always the greatest crystallization. Thank you to the author for creating such a character [Orange Heart]