Diary of a Madhouse

I feel like the plot is a mess. I just need to sort it out. I still don't understand what I want to express.

Although, there are some inconsistencies between the chapters. It may be that I didn't understand it very well. The ending was so perfunctory. He Jiu still didn't "eat" the mint. Personally, I felt that the article was anticlimactic. After all, the writing was really attractive~

I understand, you want to write that He Jiu drags Mint into the loop, and whenever Mint wants to wake up, he deletes the memory and changes to the next scene. Thinking carefully about what the patient sister and the ghost student said, it shows that Mint has been in those copies and it should have only been cycled once, so I didn't expect it to be a cycle. I used to think that Mint was an aboriginal fished out by He Jiu from the ghost academy. He unknowingly encountered a terrifying creature on the way to love, and there will be a very scary plot later!!!

I figured it out and found out that the lunatic asylum was made up of He Jiu's resentment. Then one time Bo Bo saw He Jiu doing something terrible, so He Jiu wiped Bo Bo's memory and trapped everyone to trap Bo Bo. How did Mint come to the game earlier? I remember going to see my best friend, and then fell in love with Lao He at first sight? Then there's being trapped in a madhouse. In fact, I didn't find any difference between He Jiu during the day and He Jiu at night. I didn't even notice the plot of whether he wore glasses or not... He Jiu can use his shadow as a soldier, and the madhouse has some kind of close connection with him. Will the shadows that are stripped off after the player enters the madhouse become a wrangler and can be used by He Jiu? But the bully would hurt Mint, and He Jiu was reluctant to hurt Mint. The shadow pretending to be He Zuo has been abducting Mint, saying that he is Mint's memory, but I don't think it is like it, nor does it look like He Zuo's dark side. I can't figure out what it is specifically...

I feel like I can't understand it!

Make her cry!!! (Repeat aloud)

Will you always accompany me? You should accompany me.

With the addition of He Jiu's perspective, we can probably guess how He Jiu abducted Mint and was discovered by Mint to kill him. The shadow monster may really be Mint's lost memory.

The main reason is that Mint from the main perspective did not deliberately look for doubts (or did it, but the readers couldn't see it?), So it was obviously a plot with a gradually clear ending, but it felt more and more scary as we got to the ending, just like you were facing the final exam without reviewing well...

It's really beautiful. It's my type. That's why the heroine keeps losing her memory.