
After Becoming the Immortal Venerable's Dao Companion, His Disciple Seized Me for Himself
穿成仙尊道侣后我被徒弟强取豪夺了
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 228k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
66Chapters
6.4kFavorites
8.5Score
2.1kNutrient gifts
12.5kClicks per chapter
1.6kComments
In booklists 5
Transmigrated and Reborn: Bottom Leads, Faithful Couples ①
I love these! Whenever I run out of things to read, I often come back and reread them! They are all sweet stories! I only read sweet stories! Continuously updating~ There is also a second collection.
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All Kinds of BL I Love
I have a soft spot for strong couples who make a great team. I rarely read stories with overly delicate protagonists~
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Danmei, Mpreg
All completed novels. I've read at least half of them twice or more.
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Everything I Bought
Sweet and satisfying stories, including Fourth Calamity, palace and household intrigue, and stories about transmigrating into a book or transmigrating. Mostly danmei, and only with a pursuing male lead.
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The Fifth Hundred
Too expensive to afford
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Reader comments 34
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It feels like it was a bit rushed from the beginning of the collection ceremony... There is no clear narrative at both ends. It is unclear about the progress of the Bad Immortal Lord, and it is also unclear how the relationship between the master's wife and the senior brother can be candid all of a sudden. Including the inner demon of the previous senior brother suddenly appeared, maybe I missed it. The same goes for the ending. I can understand fighting the boss while chatting with my friends, but if I can't catch anyone for 10 years, it's a bit too comfortable. The bad immortal (I just made up my mind) increased his mana probably because he ate other flesh and blood. The master wife also has to take care of it. It was a bit inappropriate to meet her in the end when she was having children in Nanhai.
Can there be more extras? I want to see more of the second generation of immortals who are so cool and handsome
Sprinkle flowers ~ Thanks to jio Xie Ze and Cang Qi have a little relationship hehe
I would rather keep waiting for them than tell them all in four chapters now, which is too hasty.
Hmm, I feel like it was written too hastily at the end. It's quite interesting. It would have been nice if there were more sweet plots. (°ー°)
N brush, when will the pigeons fly back?
Have you worn the book? Remember to give us a hint
I thought it was right, the protagonist is the real immortal. That thing is so useless and disgusting
I made pigeon soup today, it was delicious
The ending is great, you can finish it in one go