[Harry Potter] Just a Lover

Good writing style The character creation is also good Overall pretty good The male protagonist's repressed and crazy love is well written. It's pretty good that the male and female protagonists are pulling each other back and forth. The male protagonist is really good when facing the female protagonist But... I feel physically nauseous when I think of the male protagonist who, while deeply in love with the female protagonist, married another woman in front of the female protagonist on her birthday and later had a child together. The male protagonist's behavior is understandable, logical and has his own reasons, but it doesn't stop me from feeling physically nauseous as if I were seeing a fetishist. When the heroine gets married and has children, she does it when she lets go of the hero. The hero loves the heroine so much that he can't help but have a baby with someone else. I really feel that it's very disconnected... There is a kind of shitty feeling of a scumbag holding his girlfriend and shouting "I only have a relationship with her, and I only love you mentally" while having sex... (The specific situation in the article is very logical, but I personally think it's really weird) Overall, it's okay, but it's something to consider if you have severe mysophobia.

What can I say? This may not be the love I long for. After reading it, when I think about it, I feel aggrieved in every sense of the word. First of all, I feel that the heroine doesn't love Sirius at all. She is attracted to him but still doesn't love him. But at this time, many people want to say that Sirius plays a very warm role in the heroine when she is heartbroken. Plus, he is so handsome. How could the heroine not love him? I think the heroine thought the same thing. One was that she really needed comfort at that time, and the other was that not accepting it seemed a bit ungrateful. So I understand that her not forgiving Sirius in the end was not because she didn't love him anymore, but because she originally thought that she could have a happy family as long as she accepted Sirius, but Sirius ruined it with his own hands. So I can't forgive it. But do you want to say that the heroine knows that she doesn't love Sirius? I think she has been taming and numbing herself. She just thinks that she loves Sirius because she is too tired. Hey, the eighteen-year-old Lucius can't make changes, but I think the heroine can. In short, it's a pity that no one knows about their relationship for so many years, especially Lucius. His love is too humble, but it's his own doing. Thank you for writing this article, otherwise I would not have the above feelings.

I really can't stand the remaining two chapters... The plot is very interesting, maybe the author's writing skills are insufficient. Vanessa and Sirius in this article are just tool people born to complete this XP. They have no souls. I really don't understand why they are still together with Lucius. Being alone is the best ending. Lucius is a typical example of wanting both and wanting everything. Neither of the two men is a good choice for the female protagonist, but Sirius at least still has his virginity, and I don't see what's attractive about Lucius. (Actually, Lucius' conflicting struggle between his love for the heroine and his support for the pure-blood theory when he was a student is a good starting point, but it's a pity that it was not written out)

It's been a long time since I read this book, but I still think it's well written. Some people may say that Lucius is not a good person before choosing love after getting everything. I think this is the love of an adult. When faced with the choice between bread and love, I will still choose bread. Love is not actually a necessity in life, but bread is. Only a good life is worthy of love. Maybe it's because I'm too realistic? I actually appreciate this kind of love very much.

The heroine is placed in Slytherin. Taking advantage of the fact that TV dramas always advertise the so-called big heroine, let me ask. What is the heroine's ambition? Could it be that the heroine's biggest ambition is to become Malfoy's second wife? Well, how should I put it? What do you think of your ambition as something that you can freely realize? Why can't ambition be to be a second wife? My ambition was to be a pug raised by a rich man!

Why do fanfics where the male protagonist is not Sirius like to have him as the male supporting character? I have read many stories like this, because it is very fulfilling to have a bohemian prodigal fall in love with her.

Let me just say that I think Rey and Cena are a good match (orthopedics! Screaming)

After reading it, I think the author's writing is good and the characters are reasonable and there is no OOC, but from my point of view, this kind of love is really not loyal. The relationship between the heroine and Narcissa has become good friends later. I frowned when I saw the male protagonist having a child with Narcissa for the pure-blood heir. But I have thought about whether there is a better way to let the two of them find out without OOC. What is written in the article is already the best solution. I also have a sense of sourness in reality. This is the only article I have read that pushed my moral bottom line. I can't help but the author is good at writing. It's beautiful.

Adult love entanglements, profit-oriented and shrewd Malfoy let profit serve love, the heroine is very Slytherin, to put it bluntly, it is actually a fairy tale, but we who are struggling in real life need fairy tales so damn much. So pretty, highly recommended!

It looks like three dimensions. A three-person marriage from Camilla's perspective. They separated and reunited, each had children, and stayed together after the divorce. The heroine will not have any more children,