
Zhen Bing and Wen Ze Become Southern Intentions
贞禀温泽成南意
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 219k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
111Chapters
8Favorites
233Clicks per chapter
65Comments
More by this author
Si Shi'er Fei: Lawyer
Si Shi Er Fei: A Lawyer Story
A Faint Smile, a Soft Murmur: I Cherish You
Only You, Always and Forever
A Journey's Scenery, As Bright as You
Young Master Jun, How Dare You Bully Me!
Who Says Love Can't Captivate a City?
A Lingering Promise in a Dream
Big Bad Wolf, Swallow the Little Bunny
Reader comments 49
Translated by Google Translate
If this kind of man can be forgiven, I really think this woman is mentally retarded! Disgusting male protagonist
Hey, dear, what age are you in? Forget about this kind of man, domestic violence...
The characters are quite good and distinct, and the author has worked hard, but the writing is very bland and the plot is draggy. I feel it is due to the writing style. It is not concise enough, but there are many characters. It is a romance novel, not a Dream of Red Mansions. It does not need so many characters. The key length is still short, so the key points are not captured and there is a lot of nonsense. From one family to another, thank you to the author. Writing is not easy.
To be honest, the emotions I wrote were really speechless. It's really a bit embarrassing.
The beginning is inexplicable, and the explanation is also inexplicable.
Hey~ Come on.
Sir, I suggest you give it more thought when writing your article. I worked hard for a long time to write it, but no one liked it, and I felt helpless.
It's time…so it needs to be replaced. I haven't used a computer for a long time.
I haven't read it, people downstairs, please don't ask for too much. The main problem is that the author has some problems with the adjustment. There are always previous stories, and the previous stories contain too many other characters. In fact, it's not civilized and I like to read it. The main reason is that the focus is not enough.
It's very mixed, and the plot has no surprises. It's going here and there, and I'm looking forward to the rest of the plot, but I'm disappointed. I know writing is hard, don't mind what I say.