The Legend of the Ink Emperor

Very formal style of writing and jokes. In this imaginative and unconventional JJ, it can no longer be called a better or fascinating novel. JJ has a lot of beauty. If you want to stand out, you need to have the imagination and writing skills to keep up. Although the author's writing style is very immature, at least it will not make people feel boring. If the overall portrayal of the novel is 100 points, it may be called a 70%. Why? Listen to me. At first glance, the title and copy of the book sound like a male protagonist. However, the summary of the article in a few sentences is still too simple and cannot fundamentally let readers feel the elegance of the entire article. After all, the title and copy are quite important. Click on the article and introduce the specific background at the beginning, starting from the appearance of the characters, and gradually unfolding the characters, plot, and what needs to be done. Although it seems relatively dry, there are also some outstanding aspects. Lu Yingmo's character is a little different. On the one hand, he feels calm and reliable, but on the other hand, from the introduction of poisonous cakes, he feels that he is not very wise. It is a bit of a contrast. I don't know if it is his original style or because of other reasons. Lu Yingmo's consideration for the people is outstanding, but he is clichéd. Maybe Lu Yingmo is still growing in the early stage. Even if he loses once, is it still an experience on the way to growth? But will Lu Yingzhuan let him experience it? Will his enemies always be like this? As for the characters, the article is still a bit immature, and the character is not explained very well. As the plot gradually develops, Lu Yingmo's shaping has become very clear. It is said that the court is like a fierce tiger. If you are not careful, you will fall into the tiger's mouth. Yao Xuanxia makes people feel incredible, maybe because of his identity, maybe because he finally saw his own heart, maybe he walked into love unknowingly. From the previous article, it seems that Yao Xuanxia is just an accessory, and does not add much style to the love and love in the article. He may not even be able to walk by Lu Yingmo's side unless it is involved to a certain extent. The article supported Lu Yingmo, but it failed to support Yao Xuanxia. Yao Xuanxia's portrayal was immature, and the focus of the plot and writing was not here. However, the emotional explosion between the two people is still remarkable. Although it is a bit cliché, it is right for the readers. Jiang Huiyan is considered a wise person. She can think about what others think and worry about what others worry about. It is this kind of mind and this kind of courage to take the lead that make people look at her differently. As mentioned in the article, although Jiang Huiyan is a woman, she is a true hero. Lu Yingzhuan, as His Royal Highness the Crown Prince, should be ruthless or brave and resourceful to be able to compete with the third prince. Whether he was able to spark a spark in the entire battle for the throne or be ranked second are some of the more outstanding moments, maybe at the beginning. , The tone was set like this, but when the real battle between Lu Yingzhuan and Lu Yingmo came to light, and when the fight for heirs among the princes continued to unfold, what was right and what was wrong had just begun. Forming cliques for personal gain and being corrupt officials may not be the case in the first place, but they are forced by life. There is no family affection in the palace. Maybe he has already had such thoughts in his heart. Seizing the heir and seeking power may be the main thread of the entire article, and emotions are just the side lines. But when Lu Yingmo was about to part ways, the person he thought of, the person he wanted to meet the most, and the person he felt most sorry for was Yao Xuanxia. Only when the god of death truly came, did Lu Yingmo know his true feelings for Yao Xuanxia. But so what? After all, he chose the throne. Even if Yao Xuanxia died, it would be an unchangeable outcome. To stop fantasizing and thinking about it can be regarded as a kind of completeness, a kind of completeness given to Yao Xuanxia. "Maybe, my leaving is also a kind of love." Maybe, this is also the best ending, not for revenge, not for hatred, just for fulfillment, just for love.

Spread flowers to Da Da, come on~ o(^▽^)o Mmm~

I look at you silently, hey, come on!

The author's writing style needs to be improved. What the hell is "Purple Youth"? It's weird to use a dimple like a flower and a cute smile together!

I finished reading the author's article in one go, and I was very excited. I hereby dedicate this long review to the author! A man of power and scheming is the best who knows heaven and changes his fate, and the second best knows people and avoids disasters. If you know that God changes your fate, you will be a hero in troubled times, and in prosperous times, you will compete in the world. And this article is about the struggle for imperial power, which is very exciting. The romantic figures are all in the fingertips. Hundreds of rivals compete for power and criticize Fang Qiu. The author's machinations are written in such a precise and impeccable way that it makes people feel as if many things in ancient and modern times are all made up of jokes. First of all, there is an introduction at the beginning, which sets the tone of the article, from far to near, from broad to narrow. The world, the royal family, the Liang Kingdom, Guzang City, and the imperial palace are advanced layer by layer, analyzed one by one, and connected with each other. It can be seen that the author's writing power is profound, and a main line of the network jumps out on the paper, and a drawing seems to emerge in front of the reader's eyes. The introduction to the palace further concretized the picture, and a picture was formed in the mind, including the bustling capital city and the splendid pavilions. Secondly, the author is very thorough in the creation and characterization of the characters. The beginning of the chapter gives a brief introduction to several princes. After the background is clearly explained, the character development of the characters becomes a matter of course. By the way, I like the author's choice of words very much, especially the sentence "The wind in Kyoto always carries the smell of smoke mixed with wind and sand", with an indescribable lingering feeling. Although I know it is a fictional article, it feels like Kyoto is not far away from us. Thirdly, the author has a strong writing style, and his grasp of the strategy, the advancement of the main plot, and the characterization of the characters are all impeccable. Based on the author's description of Da Da, I can basically form a picture in my mind. Whether it is our first encounter or negotiation, I can feel Da Da's love and care for Wen. Another point is that I saw the author's big picture at the end of the article. I first looked at it on my mobile phone, and then I went to the computer to look at the character portraits, and the sense of the characters became more vivid in my mind. Overall, the author's article is indeed a masterpiece. I feel that there are still some minor problems, and the flaws do not cover up the flaws. First of all, the background and main plot are explained at the beginning, but the suspense is not enough. I know that the author's writing is a bit slow, but if the beginning is not attractive enough, some little angels will not continue reading. Secondly, the author has made great plans, but the details may need to be more meticulous. Take the matter of poisoning, for example. Not to mention that rash poisoning was a deliberate move. He was immediately targeted after poisoning. Although King Xiang had already dealt with the evidence, it was a bit far-fetched after all, and it was well known to everyone. Thirdly, although the title "The Biography of Emperor Mo" is very concise and straightforward, it always feels like a biography of a character, and the text is fictional, which may not be attractive enough. The copywriting also seems a little simpler. Finally, there is another point, which is the issue of rivalry. Yao Xuanxia's appearance is not stunning enough and does not make people's eyes shine. There are also very few antagonist scenes in the back, and the emotional line really has no sense of substitution. Especially in the early stage, there is basically no emotional line, and even less love at first sight. I watched the scene of the two's first fight several times, and it was hidden too deeply. From my experience, if I hadn't read the protagonist's name in advance, I really wouldn't know who Yao Xuanxia was. The relationship between the two of them is too plain, without any waves. Although it is a Machiavellian novel, Jin Jiang's style must be taken care of. The love is too thin and it is really not lovable. The above is my personal opinion. Generally speaking, the plot is compact and the writing is smooth, but the emotional drama is slightly lacking. I hope that the emotions can be enriched in the following stories.

A journey of intrigue and deception for imperial power, traveling across the country, recruiting civil and military figures, and the Lu family's romantic figures. This scene of indistinguishable yin and yang conspiracy makes me excited and wonder who is in charge of the ups and downs. I have nothing to say about the author's power struggle drama. It establishes the general trend, ignores human nature, separates and reunites. The law of the jungle can override blood and family ties, but in the end it cannot annihilate the heart of the characters. The characters in the article will be angry, resist, and stick to their hearts in the face of the trends set off by the author, which allowed me to see their vivid flesh and blood. But reading your article, I am always in a state of dissatisfaction, dissatisfied everywhere. When it comes to power struggles, the content is exciting, but the routines are limited. The suspicious and fair emperor mentioned by the author turned out to be a failure in my opinion - he was too trusting and seemed to have no intelligence channels of his own. As long as his ministers gave a memorial that seemed a little more reasonable, he would immediately give it credit. Therefore, the plot of the fall of the second prince was all about: preparing a strategy - calling for a memorial - the emperor launching an attack - and succeeding in the plan, it was like a tube of toothpaste squeezed a little by his sons. I don't know which dynasty the author imagined as the prototype, but the appearance of banknotes was at least after the Song Dynasty. Starting from the Tang Dynasty, the court established a special intelligence department. Although there were ups and downs in subsequent dynasties, the emperor always had channels to obtain information without going to officials. Maybe the author thought that since it was a battle for the throne, it would be most intuitive to start a strategy around the emperor, and no one except the emperor could take care of the prince's problems. But in this case, what should be the use of the civil and military officials who were divided into two factions in the Manchu Dynasty? And doesn't the current emperor have a few confidants? As for the characters, they are indeed full-bodied and flesh-and-blood, but as for the protagonist, I looked left and right and felt that sometimes he was so conceited and grandiose, and sometimes he was as innocent as a girl. The former is also a problem of too simple plot routines. The protagonist often makes empty promises to the person he is negotiating with, "What benefits will you get when I become emperor?", And the other person will willingly help the protagonist. The author may think that this is a conspiracy and the general trend. However, from the perspective of the negotiating party, the protagonist has basically achieved nothing at this time, and his great potential has been hidden by him. Is it possible that just because he has the temperament to be a successful person, he will immediately trust a disadvantaged person who has not shown anything outstanding? After talking about arrogance, let's talk about innocence. This is mainly reflected in the emotional line. Falling in love at first sight is indeed an incredible phenomenon. However, as far as I feel, the author did not vividly portray the charm of both parties, and readers cannot taste the sweetness of love at first sight at all. Why is it said that the charm is not portrayed enough? First, the two had little actual achievements in the early stage. Second, there were almost no offensive scenes in the early stage. Third, the love and hatred between the two were not very clear, and there was nothing lovable about them. Apart from their identities and ambitions, they felt relatively ordinary. In the final analysis, the author paid too little attention to the emotional line in the early stage, and their combination was too abrupt, leaving readers with no sense of involvement in the emotional line. What is the main style of Jinjiang? I believe I don't need to say more. Such a heavy strategy plot and the love story are squeezed into thin slices, which is definitely not pleasing here. In addition, the alliance between the protagonist and the prince is somewhat innocent. Of course, this may be a hurdle that the protagonist must go through when he has not grown up. However, the protagonist has no power to fight back during the entire process of being cheated. It even feels a bit like being sold to help others pay money, which is a bit conflicting with the character. The paper pen can be said to be majestic and majestic, which is difficult for anyone to match. It is a pity that the workmanship is not meticulous and the skill is hidden, so it cannot be called antique. The author promised not to add water, but he did not know that sometimes water injection is necessary. For example, when switching scenes and rendering atmosphere, description of the environment, especially the description of the natural environment, is indispensable. When the second prince rebelled, you barely used descriptions of natural scenery to show how dangerous the terrain behind Jincheng was. Let's talk about daily scenes. The place where the protagonist lives should have changing seasons and be bustling with people; the place where he makes music should be surrounded by incense curtains and graceful thrushes; the place where the music is played should be solemn and resplendent. However, in the end, it will be blank. You don't have to write down the specific scenes, at least make the atmosphere The atmosphere is set out to highlight the character's state of mind, instead of filling the lines with truths, light and dark scheming, which makes reading feel like climbing three bare mountains - right and wrong, cause and effect, and grudges. There is no singing of birds, fragrance of spring flowers and autumn moon on the way, which makes people feel more raw. And if you want to produce this kind of article that is 100% water-free, you have to work hard and can't rest for a moment. Above, this is a perfect article, but some are missing and some are flawed. This is another ill-fated article. It is really difficult for some powerful people to let girls take advantage of these machinations. The author has no other choice but to bookmark it and throw it away. I ask the author to finish the book and keep up the good work in the next one.

~(￣▽￣~)~ Make a mark and look at it tomorrow

As you can see from the introduction, the author's large copywriting is really cute, haha. I was very attracted to it, and I immediately aroused my interest and clicked in. Because the article is quite long, I spent several hours reading it. Let's talk about Wenwen's advantages first: 1. Character part The article describes Lu Yingzhen's proud and domineering character, which makes Lu Yingmo's character mature and steady. I like this character very much. Later, Yao Xuanxia's appearance made my eyes light up. The image that came to my mind was very strong. This has a lot to do with Da Da's writing power, because the writing of Gu Dan is not much different, haha. 2. Plot aspect When Lu Yingmo was first introduced, the environment and image struck a chord with me. The male protagonist aroused my affection and curiosity about him. Regarding Lu Yingmo's identity, I felt that the introduction was very detailed. 3. Writing style From the beginning, you can see that Dada has profound writing skills. The section that explains the relationship between the royal throne and the world is indeed very grand and you can feel that a lot of effort has been put into it. The title of the novel is very cheerful, but the style of the main text is completely different from the copywriting of the title... I feel that the writing of the novel is too old-fashioned, which means it is very awkward to read and not easy to resonate with. After all, reading novels nowadays is just for relaxation~~ 4. What readers love most is always the emotional line. This is the truth hahaha... As for the questions that arise in the novel: 1. Core plot Da Dada pointed out in the article that Lu Yingmo and Lu Ying are really the same biological mother, but they have already seen Lu Yingmo's true nature. Here, a small thing can be detailed, which will make readers understand better. 2. Plot setting The description is so complex that it felt like a complicated reading article for me. The number of times a character appears represents the role of the character. I was looking forward to waiting until Chapter 14, when Yao Xuanxia appeared for the second time, and I suddenly felt tired and unlovable 23333. As a reader, I thought he was just a friend and not a good friend who helped someone get ahead? Can the relationship be more ambiguous? I have previously written about a gay friend who grew up thinking that he grew up. When I saw this, I had the urge to abandon the article. It was like an ancient romance. In Chapter 23, I used a long paragraph to describe the relationship between Lu Yingzhen and Duan Ze. I think I can briefly summarize or mention it here. After all, pig's feet are true love. The large layout is very beautiful, and the words and sentences look very comfortable, but the language description of the characters is a little lacking. "Duan Ze!!!!!!!!!" "Your Majesty!!!!!!!!!!" The ellipsis here is too much. It can be changed to "Wang... Wang Ye... Wang Ye!" The effect of expression is quite different. In Chapter 27, Yao Xuanxia dared to face Lu Yingmo's feelings, but Yao Xuanxia still played less times. I hope that Yao Xuanxia can play more in the future. I hope that the emotional line will be expanded, which will keep the theme more interesting. In the subsequent article of the first part, the description of the war is too long and too cumbersome, which will make readers have the urge to abandon the article. The war is not just about heavy fighting and killing. It is in this serious style that the little sparks of ambiguity between the two can be fueled, haha. After reading the big article There are also some suggestions below: 1. The previous article can easily lead to the impulse to abandon the article. I hope that some appearances of Yao Xuanxia can be interspersed. 2. After the relationship is established later, the names of both parties can be more ambiguous. 3. The emotional line and the counterattack line can complement each other and become more interesting. 4. The relationship between Murong Zhihe and Lu Yingmo can appear a little more, so as to achieve the point of "only his people", after all, they like to eat sweets haha 5. Maximize the role of supporting roles and make the content of the article more interesting. 6. It is very important to not be too wordy, focus on highlighting the main line, and do not let readers be confused about the true intention of the article. These are small suggestions, representing my personal views. I hope you like them. At this point, here's your review. I wish you a smooth road and may you become a god as soon as possible~

Very nice!! Sprinkle flowers ~

Finally confessed! Sprinkle flowers, sprinkle flowers~