The Otherworldly Sculptor

I read the whole story in one go. How can I say it, the writing style is a bit immature, especially at the beginning, but it gradually gets better later on. The main plot is a bit unclear, and there is no climax. It is a bit too bland, but some parts in the middle are still very touching. Moreover, this is the first time I have seen such a fresh and refined Xiao Gong. I would say he is too soft-hearted. Not entirely, but he is still too soft-hearted. In many ways, it is not annoying. I even think it is a blessing to have such a lover. Xiao Shou's golden finger is open from beginning to end. Compared to Xiao Gong, Xiao Shou's character feels like it has more shortcomings. Overall, the entire film is a bit bland, and the writing style still needs to be improved, but it can be seen that it is slowly getting better, so keep up the good work.

Congratulations on the completion! ! ! After reading the comments below, I decided to say a few more words. As for this article, generally speaking, the author's writing is quite peaceful. It does not mean that Gongshou has a bad character or is too holy or something. I didn't feel much about these two points, I just felt that the plot was too flat. The battle at the end was supposed to be the climax, but ┐(?-`)┌, And the transformation that was supposed to be the focus of everyone's attention was a bit faded. However, writing is a gradual process. No one can be a good person at the beginning and become fat in one go. Finally, let me say a few words of praise. Finally, the character is no longer static. That Tongxi really has all the conditions for the current mainstream attacker. But he didn't attack the emperor, and he also wrote about his own shortcomings. Let us stay away from the "mentally retarded tyrannical president". Wen Yu's existence also tells us that affection and mutual respect are the cornerstone of everything. Maybe in the real world there will be many factors of one kind or another that influence your decision, but in the virtual world, just allow yourself to daydream! Overall, the flaws outweigh the flaws. The small problem is that the plot control is not very good, but the character design is okay. Maybe not a mainstream character. But whoever stipulates that you must follow the crowd, you can't write your own articles based on your own preferences!

Ah ah ah, the final battle is so exciting, congratulations on finishing Mingda

That's it.😢

It would be best for Tongxi to join the organization

I hope nothing happens to Luo Die

Butterfly... I thought of Xin Yaoguang...

Haha I finally found it!

It seems like they are getting together again, haha

Is this Tongxi and Lanxi trying to get together?