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It was probably Douglas's other personality that did it. The system couldn't scan it because the current personality as an upright police sergeant knew nothing about it.

I finished reading it in one go, and to be honest I was a little tired... This article is more about emotional analysis than logical reasoning, and it was very enjoyable to read. The first time I read Yangzai's stories was from the comic series. I felt it was somewhat similar to this one, dealing with different people and using various means to achieve their goals. The difference is that this article is relatively clean. Well, maybe the previous style might have been blocked by Jinjiang? ? ? The prince has also read it, and it's a different article than this one, but that one is really cute! ! ! I like it very much. What I like most is that when Yang Zai writes, he writes about things from many different angles. It is eye-opening, refreshing and can resonate with people. Even though this article contains a large number of criminals and various mental abnormalities, the protagonist conveys positive thoughts from beginning to end. I have read some comments saying that writing about dead people is too joyful and irresponsible, so I think she did not insist on reading it. The protagonist's outlook on life is very upright! Speaking of which, I want to complain. The plots and chapters after entering v are obviously more exciting and exciting than the free chapters. I don't know if it's because Yangzai is too excited or something, but this is very detrimental to yourself. Most people use the free chapters to determine whether they want to follow the article. As a result, you leave the excitement for later and there is no bait at all to attract readers! As for the plot, let me talk about my feelings when I first started chasing the story. In the first story, Ning Zhe did not officially appear. The description of the doctor was so delicate that I doubted who Gong was... Although I later learned that he was described so hard because he was a doctor. Please forgive me for always thinking that the first good-looking man who appeared was Gong. Forgive my superficiality... When I talk about how good someone looks, I always think it's offensive... And until the middle period, Ning Zhe didn't have many scenes. Even though there was a foreshadowing of his seemingly extraordinary character, he was lost among the many criminals. After all, your criminals have too much personality, right? You know the criminals you wrote about... When I was analyzing Ning Zhe's childhood experience, I was thinking that he was definitely a top criminal, and I even vaguely expected what he would do. I didn't expect that he would really become a good person! In the later period, I had a great time solving the case with the protagonist. At the end, I wanted to compare the last big boss with Ning Zhe [Why are we obviously the same kind of people...] [Because I have Xiao Mu] I understand how to improve Ning Zhe's level, but I can't bring it in at all! It is true that Ning Zhe is already very unfair in other stories, but the criminals in Yangzai are so... The only time I feel that Ning Zhe has a sense of presence is during the fierce offensive in the middle and late stages. Seeing the two gradually warming up, another mark... My favorites are the story of the twins and the story of the psychiatrist who is a necrophiliac. I feel that the plot is very coherent and has no sense of dissonance. Speaking of this, I just want to say that the appearance of the final boss is too sudden! It was said to be the main plot, but I thought it was a character who appeared from beginning to end, but unexpectedly, it turned out to be a suspicious person who appeared halfway! I've gotten used to it. New characters have appeared. They have a good attitude toward the protagonist. I wonder if there's something wrong with it... Yangzai, please give me back my innocence... Also, I think the protagonist is a very powerful person. Most people, even if they have a system, don't know where the criminal's points are or how to poke them, so I think he is a capable person in his own right. In the end, it was quite obvious that the boss was abnormal and the protagonist had to rely on Ning Zhe to guide him. I realized that it was not reasonable and that he was not a person who could not do without a system. The ending is so sudden... Speaking of this, I thought of the verbal hint that I particularly like sheep! Sometimes one or two simple words can remind me of what type of criminal the criminal is, and the seamless connection is great! In fact, it is very easy to guess who the criminal is in this article. What is difficult is to carefully observe the descriptions and details given by Yangzi to deduce the criminal's criminal psychology. I think this is very exciting and interesting! Watching the protagonist improve his level of assimilation is definitely the most exciting part. It feels like a good exercise in thinking skills, great! There are many types of perversions and broken worldviews in this article, but it does a good job of covering up the past with a slightly cheerful writing style. It allows people to think about problems without feeling very depressed. In the cheerful writing style, as a representative of the author's thoughts - the principles and bottom line that the protagonist always adheres to, I personally feel that the atmosphere is very good! In fact, I'm so sleepy right now that I want to leave a comment after reading the article. I guess I'm confused and don't know if I can understand it, hahaha, I'm going to complain, I really like this article! ! ! Super! ! ! The above comments are not based on a censorship attitude. They are the true thoughts of a reader after being addicted to the story. Thank you Yangzai for bringing me such a wonderful article, and I am looking forward to your new article! ! ! It's almost April in 2017. Where are you? ! !

Just to reply to the friend whose ID is "". I don't know why I can't reply to you directly. My wife's other two ancient novels are also related to Zong Man, called [Zong Man] Atypical Facial Paralysis and [Zong Man] Conquer the World, Sao Nian!

The big boss is so lacking in appearance.

How can it be so sweet? It's so damn sweet.

Finished with flowers. Although I always feel that the ending is a bit rushed

Nice. I really couldn't stop and read it in one sitting. When I read the copy, I thought it was very good (??ω??)?? Lasting forever, a message will last forever!

I watched it in one sitting... It was a blast... Is this really a refreshing and refined crime? Detective? Novel…

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