The Wizards' Daily Lives [Western Crossover]

Overall, it is very groundbreaking and it can be seen that the plot line is great. The logical framework is relatively complete. The emotional line is also very logical. Of course, the shortcomings are also obvious, the article is obviously anticlimactic... The early British volume is actually quite well written, setting the stage step by step and unfolding step by step. Then I don't know why it suddenly accelerated... To be honest, the accelerated American volume lacks a bit of flavor, maybe because of the acceleration, the article is not long enough, and the characters are not so rich. Especially the vampire section, the rhythm is too tight and it feels like it is just explaining the events. From the beginning of the vampire scene to the plot of Avengers 2, how should I put it, it feels a bit like a process. However, this part does lay a lot of foreshadowing, which makes it a bit dry. Secondly, regarding the characterization of Daniel, Daniel in the early British volume was naive and even a little indifferent. The mysterious superiority of being a time traveler brought good and bad effects to him, and thus attracted Mo Niang's attention. If you want to compare, my favorite is Daniel in the British volume. He has a rich character and reconciles the conflicts between wizards and ordinary people, and between wizards and dark wizards. He is very frank and straightforward, but also a little clever, narcissistic and sensitive. He is an ordinary but extraordinary person. In the middle period, the author probably wanted to describe the process of his experiencing setbacks and then growing up, but due to the accelerated description, the description of the growth experience was somewhat lacking. The conciseness of the text when the writing power is not enough causes the reader to have doubts like "I understand what he went through, but I don't understand why he did this?" It includes a detailed description of the rivalry between BAU and Daniel. In fact, when reading this paragraph, I felt that BAU was actually foreshadowing, but they did not appear again until the final ending, which was a bit disappointing. Because the BAU part can actually write about issues of human nature in depth, especially since the previous part of the article has been emphasizing that it is a drama, that is, the main development line, it should focus more on describing Daniel's experience, growth, and description of Daniel's changes in thoughts and mood, instead of hastily summarizing, focusing on "Pink Iron Man" (something that did not even appear again in the later period) and dog transformation. I have to say that the part about transforming into a dog is really funny, humorous, interesting and interesting. But since it is about a growth-oriented protagonist, short-term daily life and comedy can be used as an adjustment. However, most of the American volume is full of soy sauce. In the final battle, there is a "big summoning of friendly forces" that uses connections, which makes it a little annoying to watch. There is no description of how Daniel socializes, how he interacts, how he persuades werewolves and vampires to help. Instead, he focuses on describing how he touches and cuddles with beautiful women after turning into a dog [if this was a light comedy that focused on love, I would think this plot is really cute], which makes people feel like "all his comrades are fighting hard, and he is eating, drinking, sleeping and playing." In the later part of the British and American comprehensive volume (I read it through the app, there is no volume title in the table of contents here, so I can only divide the volume according to my feelings), in fact, it is obvious what kind of character the author wants to portray Daniel. Generally speaking, he wants to portray Daniel as a kingsman Mason type character. That is, the man behind the Avengers, "he never appears in the media, but there is always his presence behind the Avengers events". At the same time, there is no sense that Daniel's "wizard" identity is basically weak in this part. Basically completely separated from the title. The identity of the wizard only made a strong impression on him when he broke his legs and took love potions. Similarly, at the critical moment of the climax of the plot, Daniel was imprisoned again. I can't figure out the reason for this plot at all in this volume. (It's not that he doesn't understand the logic of the article, it's that he doesn't understand the plot arrangement) Probably what the author means is that before Mo Niang started to cause trouble, Daniel had actually laid the groundwork for everything. He only had to eat and drink and wait to die to prevent Mo Niang from winning. This description contrasts with Daniel who is in a hurry in the UK, reflecting the growth of the protagonist. But it was still the same problem. It felt very subtle. His teammates were in a bloody battle, while he was eating, drinking, sleeping and having fun (of course he had done a lot of it secretly before, although he didn't describe it directly, he could only make up his mind from a few words.). And the obvious feeling in the last part is: the author doesn't want to write anymore. But I don't want it to end unfinished or be a trap, so I can only cut down on the plot in various ways, try to finish the plot, and finally get married. (The writing style of the entire article fluctuates greatly, from the main plot to the main emotion. Maybe it is because of the influence of readers when it is updated, maybe because it is influenced by following other articles while writing the article, maybe because the article is getting longer and longer, but no one reads it, and the profit is not enough, maybe because the battle line is too long and the enthusiasm is lost. As a reader who reads the article three years later, I may be a little disappointed. Maybe it was because of the initial battle of wits that my expectations were too high. The plot written by the author is really good. Compared with mature TV and movie screenwriters, it can be said to be far ahead in the fandom category. At the end, I felt uncomfortable but I didn't know what to say, but I was so confused that I couldn't say anything. I have said a lot. In fact, I understand that the author will definitely not reply to a comment on an article written three years ago. It is more like a review of the author. At the same time, I have to say that I like many of the plots of the author. For example, the description of Mo Niang is vivid; and the "everything is exchangeable" revealed in the magic world. The conflict between Tony and Barton, and even the resolution of the conflicts between Tony and Barton, Tony and Pepper. I have to say that the Italian part is too abrupt, and it can even be said that half of the protagonist's life experience is ruined. Forget it, I won't say more. I have read it and I can't change the article written three years ago. In summary, after buying it and reading it, I think it's okay even if there are some problems. The final ending is the universal fanfic ending. )

Which generation of leader has Lukes become the leader of Vongola?

Where did Avengers 3 and Avengers 4 go, a universe-killing weapon just gone?

I enjoyed reading it so much. I hope there will be more. The author is great? ('ω')?

So Lukes is Daniel and Tony's son?

I've read it three times and I really like the feel of this book. In fact, I used to like the kind of novels where the main character is powerful and uses his strength to change the tragic fate of other characters day by day. This is the first article I've read where the main character is not a DPS, but a rear support person. It can be said that this article opened the door to another kind of protagonist for me, so it's the Bai Yueguang in my heart?

It's really good to be in full circle

I read the whole book in two days and clicked my thumbs

I've read the whole book, and it's okay. The emotional line is quite interesting, and Mo Niang is really badass and charming, but I feel like there's really no need to add the scene with Stephanie (Captain America). It's too weird and useless. The last extra episode was very abrupt, as a character who hadn't appeared in a long time suddenly appeared. There is foreshadowing, but its description is slightly less. Overall, I quite like it. Mo Niang's absolute highlight.

Guardian! Daniel actually has a guardian!