Douluo Dalu: Together Through Life and Death

There are a lot of words, and I feel like they are all spelled out randomly. I don't know what they mean, and there are still a lot of typos. The overall feeling is that they are just used to make up the words, not one or two, but because there are many, that's why I say it. (Don't complain, thank you)

Ke Lan's sense of presence is too low, right? You can only describe Conan in this whole book in less than 2,000 words. He's just like a supporting character.

So this is what happened between Ke Lan and Sect Master Ning? At least explain it to me.

Red soul ring? Where did it come from?

The copying of the original text was too serious. It was obviously a good setting, but it was made into a mess. The guilt of Sect Leader Ning was forced on! This chapter also writes about Xiao Wu on the carriage. She was clearly said not to go in the previous chapter. It is simply unreasonable for her not to go. It is better to leave this article without Xiao Wu. Ke Lan is even more strange. When he participated in the finals, he had two hundred thousand year soul rings. Others were not surprised. In the end, Bibi Dong only had one hundred thousand year soul ring. The author directly copied the original work and wrote everything It was shocking to death, and in the third or fourth Death God test, it was said that the reward was a million-year soul ring, but it was not true. Even if it was written wrong, Ke Lan already had a hundred thousand-year soul ring in the Killing City, and Tang San had a hundred-thousand-year soul ring when he killed the Crypt Demon Spider. After all, he should have three, one is the Shrek Seven Monsters, and the other is the Shrek Eight Monsters, this is too confusing!

Damn it, sometimes I like Ke Lan and sometimes I like Tang San. Author, your writing style is mediocre. After so many chapters, even the basic logic is almost gone. I vomited. Come on, I don't want to say any words of encouragement. I don't respect my profession at all.

Awesome, Xiao Wu made a surprise appearance!

There is a bug here, Xiao Wu did not appear, and the previous chapter said that Xiao Wu's soul ring gave Tang San a boost.

It's pretty good to watch, but the plot is a bit confusing. But if you don't watch it carefully and don't pay attention to the details, such as the time and the color of the soul ring, nothing will happen.

How can I see if I'm locked...