I've crawled out of my lazy-fish bed... This story needs work... a major overhaul. I'm wondering whether I should start a new one, since even I think this one's writing is awful... And a lot of it has been locked, too. If anyone's still reading, leave me a couple of words: should I start over or revise it? I'm a lazy fish turned spirit and don't want to move.
I went to deal with a rift in the netherworld and transmigrated again. That's right, "again"! Seimei thought that having an Onmyoji System and transmigrating into Abe no Seimei wouldn't be so bad, but why did he transmigrate to Douluo Dalu again?! His Martial Soul is a talisman! His Soul Ring even comes with a slot! Heavens, the settings are completely different, so what are you trying to pull?!
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The fact that you sucked at the end made me want to beat up the author. If they are together or not, add 1 if they are.
Emmmm, are you finished repairing it now?
Although the ending sucks and there is a very messy section at the end, it looks good and looks good.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yyyy, unfinished ending!
What a messy ending! The content is pretty good but it's very messy?
I can't quite understand it, especially the last part.
I just want to ask if the contents of the two books are the same?
Ah ah ah, that's too much. If you have the ability, you will fail. If you have the ability, come out and I promise not to beat you!!!
It looks good, but there are a lot of locks and seals
It's good, but there are too many locks.