Douluo Dalu: A Bewitching Life

Um, that's weird. It basically copies the original text. The plot is unclear.

I'm shocked (ー_ー)!!

Why are the names always repeated? Many of them are original works.

Uh... It makes me look confused.

I like it very much. I hope that the next article can be more serious. Based on copying and pasting the original article, check it and at least change the names to the characters you wrote.

It's good that the writing is not confusing, but the main line of the story is really confusing. The protagonist Che appears like an invisible man when he thinks about it, and disappears without noticing. Even Xiao Wu appears a lot in the text (but it should be Che who was there at that time). The character names are all mixed up. Even if the original text is used, it needs to be revised! The plot is not novel either, overall it's just so-so.

Can't the soul bones of a hundred thousand year old soul beast automatically turn into soul bones that are not in the body? . .

Alas, Douluo usually reads too much. I thought this book was good, but it turned out to be another 99% copy.

What is the difference between this article and copying it?

. . . It can only be said that there is a visual sense of watching the original work. Basically, it is no different from Douluo Dalu. It simply brings the plot of Xiao Wu in the original work into Che's body. It feels like it is just a name change compared with the original work. I hope the author will add more original plots here. Come on, I look forward to the author's follow-up^ω^