I've always felt that Oscar and Ning Rongrong ending up together wasn't really to my taste, so I wrote my own version.
The male lead is Oscar. The female lead is a goddess-like figure who has not transmigrated, has few golden fingers, and is no Mary Sue. She's not exactly gentle, but she's powerful, not very emotionally perceptive, and exceptionally intelligent, with a mysterious identity.
Theme:
Things that I personally find unreasonable:
1. The heroine's identity as a soul beast was revealed so casually to others. Are they so trusting after they just met her?
2. You two, the male and female protagonists, slept together, and then confessed to each other later. Is the order reversed? Even if the soul beast does not understand feelings, Xiao Ao is not such a frivolous person.
Emm This is too illogical, right? Is it possible to just say that the heroine is the soul beast incarnation? Also, the heroine's relationship progress is too sudden? !
How should I put it? It's a bit brainless. I didn't watch much, but when I saw the heroine taking the initiative to reveal her identity as a soul beast when she just met someone else, I was a little speechless and couldn't watch it anymore.
This timeline is so strange. If the heroine is a million-year-old soul beast, how did her parents manage to be similar to Flanders?
Why do I always have a feeling that I can't explain in words?
But author, Ma Hongjun is not normal, he is already level 30 before Tang San comes. . . .
What the hell. . . Can you tell at level 62 that she is a soul beast? Then why wasn't Xiao Wu noticed at first?
This is a bit exaggerated... After all, those four people haven't been recognized yet. It's too early to tell the secret~~ And the soul ring is too powerful. If it is the fifth ring, it is about the same level.
? ? ? Why is it so strange that Flanders' words in the original work were narrated by Bing'er?
A hybrid of a human and a soul beast is not a soul beast. Tang San is also a hybrid of a human and a soul beast. The author may have overlooked this point and hopes to get rid of the bug. After all, this is not BL. There are really not many Douluo fans who have CP Tang San...
Things that I personally find unreasonable: 1. The heroine's identity as a soul beast was revealed so casually to others. Are they so trusting after they just met her? 2. You two, the male and female protagonists, slept together, and then confessed to each other later. Is the order reversed? Even if the soul beast does not understand feelings, Xiao Ao is not such a frivolous person.
Emm This is too illogical, right? Is it possible to just say that the heroine is the soul beast incarnation? Also, the heroine's relationship progress is too sudden? !
How should I put it? It's a bit brainless. I didn't watch much, but when I saw the heroine taking the initiative to reveal her identity as a soul beast when she just met someone else, I was a little speechless and couldn't watch it anymore.
This timeline is so strange. If the heroine is a million-year-old soul beast, how did her parents manage to be similar to Flanders?
Why do I always have a feeling that I can't explain in words?
But author, Ma Hongjun is not normal, he is already level 30 before Tang San comes. . . .
What the hell. . . Can you tell at level 62 that she is a soul beast? Then why wasn't Xiao Wu noticed at first?
This is a bit exaggerated... After all, those four people haven't been recognized yet. It's too early to tell the secret~~ And the soul ring is too powerful. If it is the fifth ring, it is about the same level.
? ? ? Why is it so strange that Flanders' words in the original work were narrated by Bing'er?
A hybrid of a human and a soul beast is not a soul beast. Tang San is also a hybrid of a human and a soul beast. The author may have overlooked this point and hopes to get rid of the bug. After all, this is not BL. There are really not many Douluo fans who have CP Tang San...