[Western Crossover] Let’s All Reveal Our Secret Identities

It's so confusing. Were there a few chapters in the wrong order...?

It was too confusing, the plot was not good. Each chapter of the article does not connect at all. It feels like reading a different article. In fact, the setting is quite good and the early writing is good. The plot jumps too much in the back and middle. Inexplicably, I find a partner, then I get pregnant, and then my identity is exposed inexplicably. The subsequent plot is also inexplicable. I can understand the plot, but each chapter feels almost like reading the chapter introduction.

Inexplicably, there is a feeling of "our precious cabbage was gnawed by the three-letter pig opposite"~

Wow, I'm such a big idiot. I can't even understand the timeline. What's going on? I'm crazy.

I feel like the plot changes are so abrupt.

The ending feels very good, thank you very much.

The heroine is obviously very powerful, why is she so passive?

I've been chasing after it for a long time. The vest I'm most looking forward to is dropping. I want to drop the vest handsomely...

The beginning was good, but why did you torture Sarah again later? ! ! ! What I'm looking forward to most is when Sarah takes off her vest in front of her father, and her father doesn't react at all╮(╯▽╰)╭

In fact, I quite like it, but I have to say that this article is a bit like those TV series nowadays that look good but are ruined by the editing.