[Criminal Minds Main] Simulated Crime Scene

So in the end Edela broke through the bottom line and killed innocent people?

At first, it was acceptable to kill a serial murderer, but in the end the protagonist killed innocent people just to steal a car. The people she killed would also have painful family and friends. I think she is not qualified to live happily. People who torture and kill others should also die in pain and struggle, maybe My idealized concept of tit-for-tat. Since it cannot be realized in reality, I hope there will be relative fairness in the novel. So this may be the only novel I hope BE. Since she killed innocent people, she should be punished instead of living happily. Anyway, thank you to the author for writing a wonderful novel

Ah, I can only say that the ending is a bit sloppy. I can understand the transformation I want to express, but the three dead people are very sloppy. Maybe this treatment also shows that Edela is a bit out of control? However, two people died in the explosion, and one of them was shot. There will be no news about Mrs. Smith afterwards, and the time and place coincide. In other words, hey, there are a lot of flaws, but the overall impression is very good.

I went back and scanned it quickly again. I always feel that the "[pseudo]perversion" in the copywriting has a profound meaning... You, the author, have said before that it is absolutely impossible to go back after crossing the dividing line between normal people and dead perverts. So, Edela is not actually a real dead pervert in essence, but a pseudo-pervert who can still return to normal? But throughout the text, I feel that she is indeed a pervert... Perhaps this illusion is caused by the fact that most of the psychological portrayal in the article is from her own perspective... Forget it, since there will be a decryption chapter, I won't waste my brain cells guessing. Obediently crawl to code the term paper... Also, congratulations to the author on his graduation! ! ! I wish you a bright (money) future! ! ! !

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It took me two full days to read this article. It's great. I like the heroine's character very much.

I watched it again~ It is indeed the best fanfic I have ever read. The Moon~

I'm really glad that I have the habit of buying the ending first, Uncle Ba →_→ is actually like this... But the heroine is really cute.

Congratulations on the ending, please give me a sequel!

The ending was a little unexpected and a bit rushed I was originally looking forward to seeing more interactions between Hanbany and Aidra.