Everyday Life Spoiling My Husband

The ending is pretty good, overall. It was really attractive at the beginning, but the ending and extras were a bit not very good. The ending may have been intended to leave a blank space, but I felt it was a bit too hasty, and the blank space felt a bit forced. In fact, the ending was about them reuniting the army and giving birth to a baby, and I think the ending would have been better. The extras, especially the previous ones, are really messy. The main reason is that the exchanges between the three time and space are really easy to mess up after being dealt with in a few chapters. I also think the pairing of the second brother was not handled very well. Although I prefer blue eyes, there are really many scenes with the suitor in the front. I originally thought it was the second brother's CP, but it turned out not to be the case. Then the appearance of the blue eyes was really abrupt. If most of the scenes with the suitor in the front were cut off and changed to blue eyes, I personally think it would be better. Finally, I hope that DaDa is prosperous and getting better and better!

The ending was so abrupt, I skipped a large section of the plot while I was watching it, just randomly wrote a sentence or two, and then skipped a large chapter. The timeline is also a mess, and it feels like it was forced to fill in a hole.

Etc! Is it over? ? ? Does it feel too rushed?

Ever since the turbulence of time and space began, it has been as chaotic as a pot of porridge.

It feels a bit incoherent from the beginning of the extra chapter. The plot jumps in the second half, which is not as good as the first half. It is a pity. Overall, it is still a warm and sweet story. It is rare to see a male insect with a sense of responsibility. It is really rare to say that true Zerg literature is popular. It is well received.

After a long time, I looked it up and found that the final timeline was in a mess, but there were filters there. I wonder if I can fill it in again x

I saw it online, followed it to Jinjiang, and bought the entire book. Although there is some confusion, there are really few Zerg favorites. It's still pretty good-looking, I like it???

I seem to have seen a lot of bad reviews... I actually scanned the article. Now that I have no money, I will add the v in front. Don't mind the author... The article feels a little messy and a bit cliche, but this is completely understandable. The writing style can also be gradually improved. It's not that bad. Come on, author! I sincerely look forward to your next works. Of course, sometimes the world line doesn't need to be so complicated... Although the time travel is very interesting, and I personally like the part where Gong saved Shou in the past, but what happens happens, I have to say that I was a little confused when I watched that part... Then the ending felt a bit too rushed. I don't know what happened without reading the comments, but overall it was really good! The writing style can be gradually improved. The protagonist will always encounter a lot of bad guys and so on... In fact, it is very common. You don't have to stick to scumbags. In fact, if you only write sweet stories, there will definitely be no shortage of people to read them. Although it's a bit strange to say it's sweet, but that sentence is generally nothing... I don't know if it counts as a long review, it's the first time I write it... The author just enjoys writing, I give you a thumbs up, and I look forward to your support in the future...?

. . . Why is it over? We agreed to go to another place? He stopped working as soon as he became a military adviser? What happened to the second brother and Blue Eyes?

Well, I saw the update and came over to take a look, but the previous title ended. Author, are you kidding me?