[Harry Potter] The Young Dark Lord

My heart is broken. Although I like Xiaotuanzi, I am very sad that the heroine of Xiaotuanzi did not appear at all in the extra story.

Although it has been finished for a long time, I still want to say why there is almost no plot for the female protagonist in the extra story

This book is very sweet overall and very satisfying. Many couples get together. I feel great after reading it and it is super healing. For example, the happy life of Lord and the heroine is like Buckingham Palace, a beautiful manor, a son and a daughter, and the admiration of the nobles. It can be said to be quite perfect. The reason for being a good person is also very good. Lord mainly wants to control the power by himself, rather than rely entirely on killing. The stable status and dictatorial rule of the superior are enough, and the male and female protagonists reach a consensus through mutual negotiation and adjustment. Such a Lord is acceptable and indeed charming. As for the heroine, Hufflepuff is very gentle and quiet. She is infinitely tolerant in her gentleness, slowly softening and attracting Lord, and takes a complementary route. The character portrayal of the heroine is quite successful. I have a deep impression of this particularly peaceful and beautiful scene. It is as peaceful as a pastoral oil painting, and it really makes people want to cherish and cherish it. Of course, I have regrets. I feel that the heroine is not sharp enough. But after all, the four houses have their own highlights, so it is understandable that the heroine does not have the bold struggle of Gryffindor, nor the thirst for knowledge and miracle creation of Ravenclaw, nor the ambition of Slytherin. At first I wasn't too fond of Hufflepuff's gossipy philistineness, but I found this tranquility, contentment, and gentleness really attractive. Like a calm lake, calm and self-contained, it actually attracts and influences everyone who comes close, just like meditating or listening to comfortable music. The CPs that are very annoying include GGAD, the AD who sleeps and flies with his old lover and is always rejuvenated, and the AD who is cursed by the V Palace and is forever happy and overwhelmed. It's so exciting! Their love for each other is interpreted very well here, in line with the aesthetics of loving and killing each other but leaning towards a little bit of love. Secondly, Sirius of the Black family and Regulus, the white and black brother, are also super easy to fight! This wife is very good at writing complementary CP. One brother is a pure-blooded and adventurous Gryffindor, and the other brother pretends to be cute but actually protects his brother and maintains the family. Lei Gu said how difficult it was for him as the youngest son to take on family responsibilities and maintain a dysfunctional family. It was really touching. After talking about the characters, let's talk about the plot and language. In terms of plot, the characters are very vivid, which makes people want to continue watching the story of this character, arousing people's curiosity and desire to explore. The overall plot is very natural, and the interactions between the characters are not OOC, and they appear naturally one after another. Like the heroine's best friend, although she complains a little about her strength, she is cautious at the same time. It is also interesting to be forced to blow up but hold back. There are not many big and impressive plots, but there are many impressive scenes. It feels like traveling to the White Rose Manor and the Banquet Palace for a while. I have seen the beautiful scenery, clothing, and food there. These descriptions are really just right and make the experience great. Such a protagonist's character and wonderful life experience complement each other, giving people a peaceful and pleasant experience. Moreover, Lord's character is destined to have a sense of danger and excitement. It just happens that tranquility and pleasure blend with danger and excitement. The balanced beauty gives people a great experience, without feeling too high-pressure or tiring, nor boring and cumbersome. The author did a great job on this! In conclusion, the great advantages of this article are: (1) Characters: three-dimensional and natural; (2) Scenes: beautiful and joyful, in harmony with Lord's sense of darkness and danger; (3) Emotions: a pair of complementary couples are really good for each other. If we insist on writing about room for improvement, it mainly lies in the heroine and Elizabeth, who amplifies the heroine's character. She is a bit too Mary Sue. She feels that she gets everything too easily, so that readers no longer feel sorry for her and love her, but ridicule her. I just hope that the good things the characters get will be more commensurate with their abilities and efforts. They should not be too unearned, but should be earned through hard work, so that readers can also gain a sense of accomplishment and identity. Finally, in terms of language, the gorgeous but natural narrative, psychology, and description are very smooth to read, especially imaginative, like weaving a dream, with rich details, which is great! Thank you for your diligent writing, Lord, everything goes well! [Come on] [Come on] [Come on]

It's heartbreaking that the heroine of such a long side story only appears for such a small amount of time. Unexpectedly, my daughter occupied two of the three extra chapters...

Hahaha, I like the story of their ambiguous period even more. Hahaha, it's very interesting.

I've watched it many times, and now I'm curious about Riddle in another timeline. I wonder if there will be a sequel later.

Finished reading! Throw flowers! Although the writing style is old, it is written very smoothly and the plot is very heartwarming! After reading the author's column, I found that the author has not updated the column for many years, so I wish my wife a happy three-dimensional life!

I have been writing for 14 years, so I can't ask for more, but I still want to say that the previous articles are well written. Why do various characters start to complain a lot about their psychological activities after the two confirmed their relationship? It's very OOC.

This is my favorite of all the novels written by Laudou Otome that I have read! Although the writing style seems a bit immature now, I really like the love mode.

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