
[Prince of Tennis] Secret Fragrance
[网王]暗香
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 3k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
1Chapters
60Favorites
8.0Score
6.5kClicks per chapter
11Comments
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It's a very comfortable article, but it's so short.
I like it very much, luckily it's not BE
Very good, I like it very much!
What a cute meme~~ It would be nice if it was a tragedy...
Yeah, keep your claws [make fist]
Emma. . . Although the cp is a bit weird, it is still a good article. . . Is the Lord a bit Qiong Yao? . . Those inner monologues. . .
Uh-huh, it's too short, please beg for a longer one.
First of all, Mumu, thank you for this congratulatory message to me, which satisfies my longing for my two favorite characters in Netlord - Tezuka Kunimitsu and Yukimura Seiichi. In my eyes, Tezuka is a very cold guy, the type who has flowers in his heart but cannot bloom, while Yukimura is the kind of "goddess" who is so pure and admirable. There is almost no intersection between these two people in Net King, and based on their personalities, it seems that it is so difficult for these two to "pair up" to create that blushing and heart-pounding feeling. But, absolutely, Mumu, your secret fragrance really makes me admire. You connected people who were originally difficult to get together, and handled it so naturally. The hidden sweetness and sorrow buried deep in the heart of the connection gave me a warm feeling in my eyes when I read it, which was touching. (Well, I actually have a lot of emotions.) You said that you almost wrote it as a tragedy, but I don't know why I feel like "it would be better if it was a tragedy". At the beginning, Yukimura's inner emotional changes of waiting, longing and suppressing himself on the bus made me feel intoxicated. That sour touch was the happiness of secret love. At that time, I thought how great it would be if Yukimura could just keep looking at Tezuka like this. Even if the love is buried in his heart and can never be expressed to others, having such a secret love that belongs to oneself, just looking at that person and getting along with him for a short time is a touching happiness. However, the reason why the novel is called a novel rather than a perfect fairy tale is that something like this always happens in it, which impacts the beautiful atmosphere that existed from the beginning. Of course, if it hadn't been for this sudden illness, perhaps the two of them would have stayed like this forever. Yukimura only watched in silence with a hidden love, while Tezuka was too slow to discover the position of that person in his heart. Yukimura's illness became the catalyst for the relationship between the two to heat up, or the key to understanding the intentions of both parties. Searching for Yukimura alone on the bus again and again, Tezuka became more and more anxious and understood his own intentions little by little. He wanted to get close to the person who fascinated him, so God (that is, you Mumu) gave him a chance to discover his existence during an elbow check, and witnessed Yukimura's painful look that life was worse than death. He knew about his illness, and then he kissed the other person in a strange way, and got the other person's response. So, it was complete and END, but I was unhappy! Compared with Yukimura's love, I always feel that Tezuka's love is too easy to get, not as profound as Yukimura's, and his inner feelings are not as struggling and noble as Yukimura's. He is the one who is loved, and as long as he understands his own mind, he can get the love he wants. In this way, compared to Yukimura's obscure and repressed feelings, he becomes the one who gets more in an unequal relationship. If the character in this article was liked out of 100, I would happily give it to Yukimura 100, while Tezuka could only get a barely 80. Having said this, I think I finally understand why I feel like this, Mumu, the reason is that you abused Yukimura but not Tezuka in this article, which made me angry. You must know that people always sympathize with the weak, and are moved by the party who gives more and blame the party who receives. Ahem~ So, I guess I'm jealous of Tezuka. Or, Mumu, in fact, if you torture Tezuka more, I will be happier. For example, Tezuka waited for the bus for a long time for Yukimura, but did not wait. Then, he himself was tortured by Atobe, his hand was disabled, and he went to Germany. After many years, he saw Yukimura again. , His feelings became more and more profound because he couldn't get it. However, Yukimura, who had overcome the disease, became even more hardened in his heart. Even though the initial love was still buried in his heart, it was still buried in his heart, and it was no longer as warm and innocent as before. So, if you miss it, you miss it...
This Yukimura is so beautiful! Drooling, I am from the Appearance Association~~ Thank you Mumu for the birthday gift, I'm so happy! However, the one who is going to take a shower now said, "I will come see my two favorites tomorrow!" Let's do it first tonight
The pathos shown above is actually okay if it is a tragedy!! But the ending is very sweet~~