[Harry Potter] Elegance Vs. Elegance: A Crown of Thorns

The most important thing is to get rid of Lily as soon as possible. Will it be over if this continues?

The grade A given for the assignment here seems to mean passing in the original work? I can't remember this clearly, but I remember that the best one was O (outstanding), and the worst one was P or T.

Looking at it now, I found a few obvious typos or unreasonable places. The first few were able to come up with their own ideas for the author, but when I saw this, I couldn't help but talk about it. I mentioned both the things that I could figure out and the things that I couldn't. Although it is not timely (I just saw the article), since the author seems to want to continue writing, I took the liberty to mention it, not to throw a brick and hope there will be no misunderstanding. 1. The paramecium that the professor dealt with earlier is a single-celled animal that requires a microscope to see. I wonder how the professor "dealt" with such a tiny creature? However, there are many ways to "deal with it", or the author created a magic potion based on this name. But as someone who already knows something about paramecium, it still looks weird. 2. Can Lucius easily hold the Golden Snitch? First of all, the golden snitch should be a private or school property, not a common wild insect that Lucius could break a wing of. Secondly, they were indoors. How could the Golden Snitch fly in by chance? In the end, Lucius was really powerful, or his hormones were so strong that he could easily catch a golden snitch that jumped in front of him that others would have to chase quickly on a broomstick. That's not to say that this scenario is completely impossible, but the chance of it happening is too small. 3. In this chapter, why did the professor, the foursome, and the others, despite the rule that minors are not allowed to use magic outside the school, engage in a fight with magic at the entrance of Knockturn Alley? 4. In this chapter, the professor calls Lucius "Lucius", but Lucius only calls the professor "Snape", which is an unequal title. 5. In my impression, only the light emitted by Avada is green. Harry mentioned it several times when he had nightmares and encountered dementors. But because I haven't read the entire original work, I've only seen Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire, so I can't be sure about this. If this is the author's setting, it doesn't matter. After all, it is fan fiction and is a re-creation.

The professor protected those little animals, but they didn't show any sign of it...

Xiaolei, will you be punished by LV for sleeping with the professor in the future?

I hope that the professor can stay away from the hustle and bustle of the world and brew potions safely without worrying about anything. Demon King Lily Foursome Old Bee Savior Go and Give Me Floating Clouds

Becoming a pure-blood should bring about other changes besides magical power, but I thought he would no longer be a half-blood prince, but a true pure-blood.

I think Lily is so annoying

The second part is there. I can't find the address at all. I can't find it on Baidu. Is there a second part? It's so troublesome to write it directly here. You don't even give me an accurate address. I can't find it. I'm stuck at the halfway point and can't get up or down.

The address is invalid... To be honest, I think this article is well written. In fact, the so-called weakness is just a one-sided view. In the past, young professors were easy to be provoked when they were young, so there was opposition. Now, the professor has experienced life and death and is able to understand, otherwise he would give all his memories to Potter. What I do is for relief, so it is normal to have such a low-key reaction after rebirth, and it is also to avoid attracting special attention from the two parties. Although the inheritance part is a bit high-profile, but some people can't stand it, it doesn't represent everyone's thoughts. I still like the original text.