1. There are some upsetting elements, and this is not a sweet romance! If you’re looking for a sweet story, please look elsewhere! The ending is happy.
2. The heroine is not all-powerful.
5. This is my first story, so the writing is very immature.
It's a bit unfinished, and there are still many issues that haven't been explained clearly. . . . . Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Didn't the legend say there were three extra episodes??
Just the first one…
What about the other two???
Don't you want to explain little Sif's wonderful life?? He should be able to have a very wonderful life in this world without the brain-dead soul movie Lord V and the Muggle alcoholic dad!!! (So he can proudly say that he is a Prince!!! Daxin)
After reading the article~make up for it~
I read it in one sitting ~ awesome! Such V University, Lao Deng, and professors are actually very happy. Very nice.
Although it's a bit late to tell now, "The Greatest Achievement of the Twenty-first Century" is a bit of a problem. The story of Harry Potter took place in the 1990s, which was still the 20th century. And no matter how late Tom was born, he should have been in the early 20th century.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++U
I really want to know what the big V's child is called~~
Support~~
Although some parts feel very vague and not explained clearly~ but I love HE the most~~
Touching, tenderness, etc., I'm the easiest to fall for.
It's a bit unfinished, and there are still many issues that haven't been explained clearly. . . . . Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Didn't the legend say there were three extra episodes?? Just the first one… What about the other two??? Don't you want to explain little Sif's wonderful life?? He should be able to have a very wonderful life in this world without the brain-dead soul movie Lord V and the Muggle alcoholic dad!!! (So he can proudly say that he is a Prince!!! Daxin)
After reading the article~make up for it~
I read it in one sitting ~ awesome! Such V University, Lao Deng, and professors are actually very happy. Very nice.
Although it's a bit late to tell now, "The Greatest Achievement of the Twenty-first Century" is a bit of a problem. The story of Harry Potter took place in the 1990s, which was still the 20th century. And no matter how late Tom was born, he should have been in the early 20th century.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++U
I really want to know what the big V's child is called~~
Support~~ Although some parts feel very vague and not explained clearly~ but I love HE the most~~
Touching, tenderness, etc., I'm the easiest to fall for.
Take it away with a bunch of flowers