[Football] AC Milan Simulator

The more I think about it, the more I get angry. You have to understand your audience when writing an article! CP fans want to play with the relationship between the protagonist and Nesta, what will people watch if you do bl and BG? The protagonist control doesn't care about BL mixed with BG. Monogamy is no problem. The premise is that the protagonist is well-shaped and the emotional line is well written. You wrote such a greasy boss with a self-centered mentality and a sober female partner with a single arrow. It hits the target of 0 protagonist control... Readers who are fans of strong women like the creation of female characters like Reina, but these readers will not read football articles with male protagonists. Evil-loving people like the fourth natural disaster players to go crazy and create people everywhere, but they don't like the protagonist to turn into a clown and have fun. Moreover, there are almost no laughs in this article, and it is not in the good zone of fun people. Then what's the point of writing the plot like this [covering face, laughing and crying]

Danmei novels should not have female supporting characters. Otherwise, do you have the guts to write male supporting characters in Baihe? Do you have the guts to write a bl cp for BG (even if it is just a background board, you are not required to write that the male protagonist falls in love with the male co-star)? Just bully Danmei, or should you bully her from the moral high ground? What, Danmei's cyberspace aborts female fetuses (no female supporting roles)? Danmei doesn't love girls! I don't love love anymore. I love my neighbor first and love myself first. My hobbies refuse to be polluted by moral kidnapping.

I can't understand what the author did at all. . . Let me state in advance that the following is only my personal opinion. I only express my opinion from the perspective of an ordinary reader. If you have other different opinions, just treat me as nonsense. First, let's not mention the character controversy. From the current plot alone, I don't see anything that attracts me in the writing. Of course, some people may refute me and say that the plot has not yet unfolded and the author is still laying the groundwork. However, it is already 16 chapters now. Generally speaking, charging starts around the 20th chapter. No matter how slow the novel is, it will start to lay the groundwork. You must have something that attracts readers to read. Anyone who does reading comprehension knows that the author wants to attract the reader's attention. Just like AC Milan in the book title and Nesta in the copywriting, these anchors are the source of motivation for readers to read. Then, the second question naturally arises, and it is also one that often appears in fan fiction - how can original characters not take over the spotlight? First of all, novels are divided into brainless novels and documentary literature, and fanfiction is right in between the two. For example, if I write a cool article, say that the male protagonist is an emperor on the court, with full physical strength, a Champions League ball in his left hand and a golden ball in his right hand, and he is also in love with a big star. After sleeping here, he will sleep with that one. So, even if I write about the protagonist and talk to 18 people at the same time, no one has any objections. If I write about him having a talk with the referee, some people will praise him for his good talk. On the contrary, to be more realistic, I wrote that the main character was always on the bench, kept losing when playing football, and finally started the game, but the main players immediately suffered from injuries. To the extreme, he was about to retire after playing for most of his life. As a result, the team went bankrupt, was relegated, and was reorganized. As long as the author's writing skills are good enough, people will support this kind of plot. The key is that the audience for this novel prefers Shuangwen rather than documentary literature. At the beginning, Joel, who is obviously very talented and has a very three-dimensional image, harassed Reina inexplicably (I'm sorry that the language is a bit extreme, but I really don't think what the player did is within the scope of normal interactions. When I play games, even B games, when I can't increase my favorability, I always choose to load the game. Bye bye, the next one will be better) Moreover, as a reader, I did not see the original supporting character Reina on the details page of the novel. So, can I understand that she is cannon fodder to promote the development of the plot? So I would like to ask, why can this cannon fodder character get as important a role as Nesta, the second male lead who appears first in both copywriting and supporting roles, or even more? In addition, I read about the portrayal of Reina, and the general summary is that she is an Asian girl who helps write love letters for the sake of being gregarious/earning money. She also likes to read books. When faced with the pursuit of the school idol, she recognizes her niche and chooses to politely refuse to avoid unnecessary disputes. A very good little girl, calm, sober and smart, to the extent that I would write a second fanfic in other novels. So, what is the meaning of writing the skill book that the player gives her? Isn't this killing the highlight of the character? If she provides any good ideas, the players will only say that they are high-level and effective, but this is obviously Reiner's own wisdom. It can be said that: After initially reading the text and the first eight chapters, my evaluation was that I was looking forward to the follow-up, four stars; If the player confuses the operation, three stars; Joel is inexplicably the goalkeeper, Nesta's role is reduced, and Reina's highlight is stifled. The current trio has no charm at all, two stars; (At that time, Milan's goalkeeper Dida was very good. He was obviously in his prime. The protagonist passed by and was sitting on the bench. There were two and three youth team training teams in front of him. Besides, if there is really a shortage of people, why should people trust you as a newcomer? Why don't you just buy other top goalkeepers? Doesn't it sound good? The goalkeeper is not like other forwards, midfielders and defenders who can play in garbage time and experience it. I have never heard that one of the four major pains is Buffon's substitute. In addition, Nesta does not show any highlights in the novel. If I change the name, I would think he is a passerby, purely starting to guide NPC) In the absence of clarification where parts of the content in the first few chapters are clearly controversial, one star; (The author did not give any specific and effective information - since the column clearly contains many completed paid novels, I think it is understandable for readers to be worried about the subsequent plot development. Don't wash your hands, the author is generating electricity for love. Maybe this book is indeed intended to be free, but there is no prior announcement/copywriting/statement of the article, and two There is a record of charging fees, so I don't blame everyone for preconceptions. If it is said to be free, people's reaction will not be so big. In addition, as an adult, the author did not explain it in advance, and he can only blame himself when he is scolded. This is the same as being humiliated by the supporting character in a slap-in-the-face novel. Who knows what you are like, but you didn't tell me earlier) Now the author pretends not to respond to the problem and chooses to give up, which has completely destroyed my last bit of goodwill, giving it zero stars. All I can say is, if you don't have that diamond, don't take this porcelain job. When readers find something wrong, remind them to make themselves look more comfortable and to attract a new batch of readers with better quality content. This is a virtuous cycle. If you think your idea is good, you can state it to the readers. For example, when Reina just appears in the comment area and just expresses doubts, you can make a patch. This character is to promote the development of the xx plot. She will be a resident NPC/go offline at the node. It is expected that she will have a role in the xxx chapter, and then mark it in the title or plot summary of the next chapter. Instead of being there to interact with the mud, she is a supporting role/to promote the plot/cannot fall in love... Also, I really don't understand the way Reina appears. Does it have to be tied to a love letter? Even if this plot shows its popularity and cannot be deleted, wouldn't you change your mind? (The next sentence is writing guidance, you can skip it if you don't like reading it) "First write that after two people finished playing football, Joel invited Nesta to eat ice cream. Nesta was curious. We play together all day long, and haven't our pocket money been spent long ago? Where did you get the extra money? Joel was elated, that's my charm. Then explain that this has something to do with the Asian girl Reina in the school. It turned out that someone asked Reina to help write a love letter. He didn't find out at first and wrote a reply to the girl honestly. But there were more and more people behind him, and Joel could hardly get back. He had accumulated a pile of letters for several days. As a result, during the break, I discovered that many people had similar handwriting. At first, Joel thought he was dazzled by writing too many words, but he accidentally read it wrong. He also secretly blamed himself for how he could let down a strange girl so much. It was so rude. Turning around, I bumped into Reina's busy stall... Nesta licks the ice cream, no wonder you were in a bad mood the past few days Joel jumped up and hit him. I was feeling depressed because I was suddenly pulled to be the goalkeeper. I didn't perform as well as I should! Nesta reached out to protect her teetering ball of ice cream. Okay, Master of the Future World, please continue, and then took the last bite Joel glared at him, and then angrily bought another one for Fa Xiao, a four-ball one. As we said, he caught the culprit of the fake love letter in one fell swoop, and after a friendly negotiation between the two people, well, it was actually Joel who used his extremely charming face as the school sweetheart to successfully cooperate, and now he is spending the profits as dividends. Nesta nodded approvingly, so what? Joel said mysteriously, I recently discovered that Reina's grades are very good. She is busy writing love letters to me every day. She even got full marks on this test. We have found a genius. Nesta wondered, had he skipped any steps? Why didn't he understand? Oh, look, our scores in each exam are only so low, and the teacher has to find a coach to reduce our training time to study. Now that Reina has appeared, I just need to find her and have a vigorous campus love, then we can't hold the exam in hand from now on? Nesta realized it, but it seemed like he didn't. He still couldn't understand Joel's abstract brain circuit, but at least he understood that Fa Xiao was trying to save the ball in a curve. So do you have any ideas? Nesta spoke dryly, and in response was Joel's innocently blinking big eyes. Didn't I come to find you? There is no such thing as outsourcing love in the world. Nesta always complains. He is short-handed when taking advantage of others and short-mouthed when he eats others. In the end, he honestly helped to find a solution. You can give Reina whatever he likes. This is correct. So, Joel excitedly rushed forward with a pile of tomes in hand, but without exception, he was rejected. Joel rolled over and over on the carpet, looking at his dog-headed strategist expectantly. Nesta, who had zero actual combat experience, sat upright on the bed of his childhood friend. He pretended to hold up a foreign language book and glanced down at it - he didn't understand. They went to the bookstore to pick this up together. Well, maybe she's not interested in these books. Nesta tried hard to analyze, but the analysis failed, so she decided to repeat the trick. Can you give me some other gifts to try? He cooperated with Joel's whims and apologized silently in his heart for the strange girl who was harassed by Joel. However, when he thought about it, he was pretty good-looking, so he shouldn't be guilty of this. At most, he just wanted to get Crush's attention, and the left and right brains were constantly fighting each other. In the end, friendship defeated everything. Then the next day, Joel held a large bouquet of red roses and pulled Nesta to block Reina at the school gate. Reina saw two people from a distance and tried to sneak away but was caught. Joel handed the rose, but was interrupted before he could say anything. Enough is enough. Reiner has successfully exhausted his patience with his partners. I have no interest in falling in love with a brat. Joel's face is incredible. He is the tallest goalkeeper on the court. Do you understand the tallest goalkeeper? Joel decided to give this person a good lesson on what it means to be a brat. Holding the flower in his hand had some influence. He put the rose into the hair's little hand, turned around and pinched the chick's hand. Reina took the lead and grabbed Joel's hand. He was such a little brat. Then he rolled his eyes and walked away. After Nesta watched Xiao Yi's utterly defeated confession, she patted Joel's shoulder in a comforting manner and returned the flowers. Come on, I'll treat you to dinner. It was a rare opportunity to eat at a big restaurant. For a moment, Joel was no longer sad. He held the flowers and moved quickly. What else can I say? Let's go, which restaurant should we eat today? As a result, things will turn out well. Joel failed to confess his love at noon and went out to have a nice meal with Nesta. Before school ended in the afternoon, Reina came over. Joel! Reina slapped the table. Everyone is spreading rumors that you and Nesta are together. Now many people don't want to give you love letters. They all ask me for a deposit. Nesta: Huh? : Joel Then I think about some interesting things about the threesome, and I jump directly to adulthood. It's obviously easy to write a very simple story, but if you have to write it in such a ridiculous way, it's really a good hand played badly. Obviously there was no malicious abuse from the beginning to the end. Everyone was giving friendly suggestions. I was so polite that I could just say that I would not accept writing guidance. Moreover, I could ask for leave even if I was not in good condition. I insisted on telling everyone how they were doing. It was as if someone had bullied you online. This was just a disgusting person.

The writing also sounds like I'm the victim. Everyone has been giving tactful suggestions (it's not easy to find an interesting article, right?), Who wants to rise to the level of Danmei and romance fighting? You have reduced the character of the protagonist to rubble, the plot of the main character is pitiful, and the focus of the article is completely biased. You didn't even mention these flaws. You did "consciously" respond to the controversy. You just said in the comment area that the female protagonist is a friend and can't fall in love. As for the other issues, you haven't changed a bit. I see that I still don't know how you are going to develop the emotional bond between the protagonist and the heroine. You just rely on eating ice cream to talk about it? When I saw the attitude of inaction a few days ago, I guessed that you were going to cheat me and stopped writing. Haha, I guessed it right [changed]

I'm exhausted. Are you writing a simulator or a leather case? What role does the female supporting role play? No one wants to see the male protagonist fall in love with an inexplicable female supporting role when he and Nesta are childhood sweethearts. I want to create a heroine to write a romance, or write it in the later stage. At the beginning of the article, people haven't understood it yet and have not recognized the character. The author thinks it is particularly good to write it, right? 😂 😂 It feels like it is wearing a leather suit beautifully 😂

Just in case some people later say that readers are criticizing the author's beauty and romance, I will say a few words. I didn't say that supporting female characters can't appear in Danmei novels, so don't bother me with things you haven't said before. What the comment section has been saying is that the role of supporting female characters is too heavy. The female supporting role not only occupies the ecological niche of the male protagonist of Danmei novels as "the object/wife", but also squeezes into the duo that everyone thinks of as childhood sweethearts. What readers thought was a pure love between two people becomes a threesome. The female supporting role even steals the protagonist's wisdom props to make herself smarter. It would be fine if this prop was not important to the protagonist, but the author still set it up to be important. Is there any remedy after that? No. The entire plot does nothing good for the protagonist other than making the female supporting character smarter! At the same time, during the entire serialization period, the majority of readers' opinions were not that they hated supporting female characters, nor that they felt that supporting female characters should not appear in Danmei novels, but that they felt that supporting female characters in Danmei novels should not occupy the protagonist's secret love position, should not be pursued by the protagonist for so many chapters, and should not be so naturally included in a duo like Zhuma, who has a unique identity for Danmei novels, and should not take away the protagonist's props to increase wisdom—the protagonist himself is obviously not enough. You said that you have your own ideas and settings, so as of this writing, your settings and plot revolve around the female counterpart, right? What happened to the protagonist because of the female supporting character? Do readers care about the female supporting role? What readers care about is that the boring and greasy protagonist suddenly shouts that this is my wife and then goes crazy for the fifth or sixth chapter of the female supporting role. The protagonist is completely out of character and has no personality charm or even competitive strength. The plot of the novel has nothing to do with Milan or Danmei, and it is 30,000 miles away from the topic. I don't care at all whether there are women in Tanmei's articles. But you have to write a story about Danmei where the protagonist likes a woman, pursues a woman, the woman rejects the protagonist, steals the protagonist's props, and becomes smarter... Don't try to block the story by saying that the debate between Danmei and romance has not reached this level at all. The writing is simply too far off topic, the plot has nothing to do with the beauty of football, and the character of the protagonist has completely collapsed. The protagonists in Danmei competition novels should be strong but not strong, brainless, in love but not in love. The only love scene is around the female counterpart... I don't like the idea of ​​"there can't be women in Danmei novels". It has nothing to do with "whether there are women". This plot is hated because the protagonist is poorly written and the plot is poorly written. I hope you know.

In your romance novel, would you write that the hero falls in love with the male counterpart?

To be honest, I am really disappointed with the author for reaching this point. Indeed, there were some unfriendly remarks towards the female protagonist in the comment area, and there were some radical comments with negative views on the female protagonist, but most of the long comments were serious about pointing out the collapse of the protagonist's image and the deviation of the plot. The author has no response to these comments. I even wonder if you are pretending not to see it and only reply to a few comments questioning Danmei or romance. It is self-evident who is presupposing the position. There is really no need to write a short essay at the end of the article. You, the author, do not need to package yourself into an aggrieved image of "it's my fault, it's all my fault." Your only fault is to avoid readers' questions and answer questions that are wrong. As for whether you are a pure author of beauty, whether you hate women or not, I don't comment, nor do I care. As a reader, I have always cared about the internal logic of the work itself, the image creation of the protagonist, and the development of the story. Unfortunately, I had a very bad experience in this book. Of course, this may just be that my aesthetics is different from yours, or maybe my understanding of Bai Yueguang conflicts with yours. This is not a serious criticism. I hope you will continue to make progress and move forward in the creation of new books in the future.

What on earth is the author talking about? . 99% Of the comments question questions about the character design and plot logic. You blame the readers for initiating a channel dispute. This is also in line with the previous explanation. When you avoid the important and take the light, you only see what you want to see. You only see what you want to see. You have contributed a lot to the quarrel like this. You have been avoiding the problem before. I don't really think that after an article like this collapses and the author claims to be a victim, the readers will whine and cry, saying it's all our fault for driving away the wife, and then play out in their minds the drama of a group of fans coming to support you and saying, "Delayed justice is not justice!" [Changed]

In fact, I am quite nervous to write this review. I am worried that if I say something bad, I will be criticized as "Danmei readers just can't stand the female characters." But I still have to say that I don't think the problem with this character is gender at all. Of course, bg's heavy emotional line is indeed a bit deceptive for a pure love channel, but the real problem why this plot caused such a big resentment is that the unfamiliar original supporting characters took away the central role of the protagonist. The plot before this was all about serving the emotional line between the protagonist and the protagonist, but the subsequent plot turned into belittling the protagonist/making the protagonist revolve around each other to reflect the personality charm of the supporting character - even if the supporting character is a male, this plot is difficult to accept, and even if the supporting character is a man, everyone will start scolding him. After all, the plot told to us by the text and the first seven chapters is about the heartthrob Bai Yueguang, who is frail and sick and dies young. This is what the readers expected. As a result, starting from the eighth chapter, the charm of the protagonist completely disappears, and he begins to harass the female classmate inexplicably, pretending to be crazy and pursuing her, and repeatedly fails in his pursuit. He reflects that he does not understand her pursuit well enough - in other words, is this protagonist suddenly taken away? Where is my heartthrob protagonist Bai Yueguang? The author doesn't understand why readers should pay so much attention to a supporting character, but in fact, readers are helpless in the face of such sudden plot changes...