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A New Writer Has Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Can Anyone Comment on It?

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I want to read a book similar to "The Legend of the Dragon King: The Smoke and Clouds Reverse the World". It was the first time I wrote 80,000 words, and then I tried my best to write 400,000 words. I also wrote towards the standard of 400,000 words. It was boring to be free at home. After all, I just finished the first semester of college.

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102 Confession Failed, I Died in Front of the School Beauty with My Backhand Luojia XiaomoUrban1.5M Wordsongoing 209kReads9.7Score25.1kShelves
103 Backroomsbackroom Notes Yunzhongyu LMystery2.0M Wordscompleted 72.5kReads9.5Score12.1kShelves
104 I Sell Fried Rice at the End of the World Qian JueSci-Fi & Apocalypse461k Wordscompleted 4.4kReads—Score197Shelves
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Newcomer, doomsday survival, not the Holy Mother, salted fish, teaching how to cook
105 The Life of His Personal Enemy Is Extended, and He Can't Quit. Yu XinqiModern Romance183k Wordsongoing 2Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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Take a look if you're passing by [Working on a manuscript][Working on a manuscript][Working on a manuscript][Working on a manuscript]
106 Love Between Plants and Trees Chaffongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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A new book for newcomers, traditional fairy tales (grass and trees + black turtles + martial arts + sword cultivation + immortal cultivation), slow to gain popularity. I hope the boss can take a break, take a look, and read it over. I'm not very grateful.
107 Endless Return to Emptiness Happy Original IntentionEastern Fantasy3.9M Wordscompleted 1.7kReads5.8Score171Shelves
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Nearly four million words, a huge world view, and everyone has their brains
108 Awake! A Little JunxiSci-Fi & Apocalypse216k Wordsongoing 9Reads—Score—Shelves
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My first book, the traffic depends on everyone [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] There is quite a lot of foreshadowing, thank you.
109 My Neighbor's Dog Bit Me and I Refused to Pay for It. I Was so Angry That I Whipped It. Brother Yi Decompleted —Reads8.4Score—Shelves
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The second book was written by me, and the first one was written by a great master. Please help support me. Gong Xi Fa Cai, Gong Xi Fa Cai. I bow to you
110 The 60,000-Word Love Story Between Me and the Green Tea Girl Brother Yi Decompleted —Reads8.5Score—Shelves
111 Mixing in Old America? Get Stronger Every Day! A PasserbyUrban1.0M Wordsongoing 16.6kReads7.1Score1.4kShelves
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It's been almost a month since I opened the book, so I hope to read it and give some reviews.
112 Tesi************ completed —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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This discovery was no accident. Xiao Chen clearly remembers that in the early days of preparations for the art festival, Grandma Wang, who lived alone, was always taciturn. Every time she gathered the elderly to discuss activity plans, she would sit in the corner and rarely speak actively, with a somewhat lonely look in her eyes. Grandma Sun quietly told Xiao Chen that Grandma Wang's wife had left early and her children were working in other places. She seldom communicated with others and her personality became more and more withdrawn. She often had trouble even eating. @ @Username 84601500 @ @ @ leader @ @ @ a maverick salted fish
113 City*********** completed —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
114 Great Changes in the Mountainous Countryside: the Cowherd Boy's Counterattack The Bright Moon Still Makes People Happycompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
115 Urban Tales: I Reveal All the Mysteries The Bright Moon Still Makes People Happycompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
116 A Cleaning Mother's Notes on Raising Her Baby: the Helping Hand in Desperate Situations The Bright Moon Still Makes People Happycompleted —Reads8.5Score—Shelves
117 The Spirit Burns the Sky Luo Lingfengongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Traditional fantasy. No one is watching. Sorry
118 God of War Talking About Old ThingsMystery531k Wordscompleted 7Reads7.1Score—Shelves
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Hello everyone, a newbie is here to report [laughing] The first book at the beginning was written by me, and the other few are masterpieces in my opinion! I hope everyone can provide guidance and evaluation [asking for attention][asking for attention][asking for attention]
119 The Great Voyage of Terror Newly Bought PeachesSports2.6M Wordscompleted 486kReads9.4Score66kShelves
120 Green Heart Sword Jue Clam 123Eastern Fantasy93k Wordsongoing 2Reads—Score—Shelves
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A 16-year-old high school student who suffers from a mental disorder writes a novel at home. It is the first time he has written 80,000 words. The logic may not be smooth in the early stage, but it will get better later. Please support me... No cp, no cp, Green Heart Sword Jue, ruthless swordsmanship, ups and downs, my life is not worried, I hope someone can read it, comment and like it, thank you all.
121 The 108Th Day of Sanchun's Wandering Xiao Cao's FamilySci-Fi & Apocalypse133k Wordsongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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1. The heroine was born as a gangster, a micro-group portrait of a strong female cyber gang who grew up, the male protagonist is the tough guy second son of the gang, the main heroine has a light sense of humor, they fall in love and kill each other and use each other, but he is in love. 2. A female killer with a cold face and a cold heart VS a fake handsome young man, who really cares about the prince, rebirth in multiple worlds, a heroine story, and has the feel of an ancient novel. Highly recommended! Introduction attached
122 I'm so Tired of Endless Rebirths Xiao Cao's Familycompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
123 Little Talisman Maker Asia Sevencompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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The author should update soon. It's a rare and good book.
124 I Have an Abyss Bar That Kills Gods Ye XunqianUrban296k Wordsongoing 1.9kReads—Score185Shelves
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Is this okay to watch? I'm really impressed.
125 Start with a Pill Sunflower OilEastern Fantasy1.1M Wordscompleted 10Reads—Score—Shelves
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There are millions of words, you can take a look.
126 Shishi The Sword Forest Is in the SkyUrban232k Wordsongoing 2Reads—Score—Shelves
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Regardless of whether anyone reads it or not, I have to finish writing it. The current progress is about 2%.
127 The Origin of the Ring Sweet Jujubeongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I recommend it to both old and new readers. Currently, both books are being updated normally.
128 You Use ************* ongoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
129 Brown Mountain Treacherous Area XiaoyiMystery116k Wordscompleted 3Reads—Score—Shelves
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It was finished, and I realized after writing 80,000 words that the title did not match the content. The application has been completed, but I cannot change the title of the book [crying]. [You think]: Folklore horror, mountain village ghost stories, adventure decryption [Actually]: Imaginary fantasy, dark depression, female awakening, PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds
130 Ancestor of the Whole Family: a Tianhu Family Appears at the Beginning of D Attack Lion Headcompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Listen to everyone's opinions, family cultivation and Hex.
131 I,*********** ongoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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These two books are really good. Please comment, brothers.
132 Zhanshen: My Plug-In Does Not Respect Martial Ethics Yu Qingjiang239k Wordscompleted 665Reads5.8Score—Shelves
133 Wearing Books as Cannon Fodder to Save Money to Save Your Life, Male Protagonist, Don't Love Me Too Much ButterflycModern Romance199k Wordsongoing 315Reads—Score—Shelves
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Please take a look at mine [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]
134 Divine Order: Double Video Recording Timid Wordsongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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[Crying] The title of the book says I have no desire to read it [Smiling]
135 Record of Demolition in Central Plains August Stormcompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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On a cold night, beacon smoke locked up the small village, and the militiamen and the people took strict precautions. The secret whistle revealed the plan to steal the camp, and the fire burned red to guard the granary. [Praise]
136 Shahe***** completed —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
137 Civil************* completed —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
138 Huangqiao** ongoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
139 New World of Super Powers Dream Dreamcompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Add me one, add me one
140 After the Mermaid Princess Awakened, Heaven Called Me to Kill the God Wu ShifeiAncient Romance288k Wordscompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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This is a good concept and a good setting. I feel that the second male lead is better than the male lead. But this only represents my personal preference.
141 Star Spirit Fantasy Record Silent That Yearongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I've been updating for a while, but I feel like I don't have enough time, experience, or writing skills. Now I'm trying again, and it's like a dream come true.
142 Throne of the Abyss Returns Beibei Doing Homeworkongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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These are all good
143 Horror of Flat Sharing: Roommate and Boyfriend Want to Cross the Line It's Mango8k Wordscompleted 31.4kReads9.8Score373Shelves
144 Star Core Revenge Beibei Doing Homeworkcompleted —Reads8.4Score—Shelves
145 He Was Abandoned Again Wang Qianyu's Colorful Clothes164k Wordscompleted 16Reads—Score—Shelves
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(｢･ω･)｢Come for personal evaluation
146 Shadow of the Demon Sunflower Oilongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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It's been a few days since the new book was released, and the old book has been completed for a million, so you can take a look.
147 The Sword Is Cold Listen to the Snow in the SkyEastern Fantasy2.4M Wordsongoing 3.6kReads7.2Score436Shelves
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There are already 500,000 words, and the score is not enough for 50 people to rate it. Who is worse than me? But I have dozens of book friends who accompany me all the way, catching up on updates every day, and I am still very content, hahaha [smirk] [snicker].
148 Marriage Is the Best Thing: Mr. Shen's Charming Palm Not Too Smart Little Piggy Buncompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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It has only been updated to 30,000 words. You can take a look and give me some suggestions. I hope you all like it [shy]
149 Miss Sea Otter's Skybird Time Bread678k Wordsongoing 2.2kReads6.9Score410Shelves
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Come on, come on [shy][shy] You are today where your thoughts have brought you; You will be tomorrow where your thoughts take you Your today comes from your past thoughts, and your tomorrow comes from your present thoughts
150 Zi Gui Ciao and Kun Long Mirror Whale in City ZooUrban161k Wordscompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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The majestic demon Lord Yedi failed to break through the ninth level of Zigui, and the soul possessed a weakling in the world, and met the love of his life, Xian Yaoguang. Both he and Yaoguang have unknown secrets, and they also shoulder the responsibility of saving the common people. Is it fate? Or do you want to change your fate against fate? The power of love tells us everything…
151 A Record of the Ups and Downs of Officialdom in the Past Twenty Years by Qing Yunzhi YouyangUrban187k Wordscompleted 3Reads—Score—Shelves
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My own debut show, please appreciate it