Time Travel Cannon Fodder Villain? I Turn into a Sickly Lolita

The writing is great, much better than the previous one. The previous one was about harem, but it was still a bit confusing in the middle and late stages. The author is definitely one of the best in transformation writing. This one is 1 V1 and there are not so many complicated relationships. Absolutely popular No one should know about the change back [thinking], I went out for a walk and there was no one in the transformation story who could beat me. Looking back again, it is indeed not Gao Wu.

It feels very good. The protagonist feels like a real yandere without knowing it. The plot does not seem abrupt or embarrassing. I feel that the identity of the heroine is still mysterious. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot!

It's so beautiful, the yandere loli is so amazing! This is the first time I read such a great yandere novel, especially since the yandere is the protagonist, the characters are vivid, and the plot is thrilling. After reading it, I felt a lot more "sunny and cheerful". However, if the plot continues like this, it may not have a good ending. After all, when I read this novel, I always think of "Happy Suger" unconsciously. "Life", the same yandere protagonist, even though there are many differences in the plot, I am still worried that Xiaocheng will be like Sugar, leaving the people who like him and leaving the world alone, I hope it can have a good ending... So I've already watched it for 30 hours? But it still feels like it's not enough~ Hey~ How can you enjoy such a beautiful novel in 30 hours~ I really want the author to update it quickly~ Like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee I like it, I like it, I like it, I'll watch it, I'll watch it, I'll watch it, I'll watch it, I'll watch it, I'll watch it, I'll watch it, I'll watch it, I'll watch it, I'll watch it, I'll watch it, I'll watch it, I'll watch it, I'll watch it, I'll watch it, I'll watch it, I'll watch it, I'll watch it, I'll watch it, I'll watch it, I'll watch it, I'll watch it, I'll watch it

Highly recommended, this article is the ceiling of transformation literature. It can be said that this is the new true god since Xiaoye. The author's writing style is really strong, and his understanding of yandere is very high (it is difficult not to doubt whether the author is really yandere ("ಡωಡ")). The plot is compact and the protagonist is full of pressure (a tribute to the pressure-resistant Wang Sutao). It will leave you unsatisfied after reading it, and even a little addicted. I hope the review will be merciful, I don't want such a good person to be banned [crying][crying] Finally, Cheng Tao's lifelong recommendation＼＼\\٩( 'ω' )و //// 9.7 Is great✿ヽ(°▽°)ノ✿

This is the most perfectly written yandere I have ever seen. It is written very reasonably and meticulously. It fully presents the yandere's psychological process and the charm of the yandere. The author has really done research. Moreover, the heroine Xiao Cheng is not a stereotype of a yandere shark. She has a careful mind and a hard-working character. She is also really good to people who care about her. It is really reasonable to become the group favorite in the later stage of the introduction. I began to feel that in reality, I would be treated like this yandere. It seems acceptable and even a bit happy to fall in love with it [facepalm] and the other characters except for the two heroines are not mentioned just because the protagonist is a yandere. The supporting characters, the young master and the heroine's brother are all very well portrayed. It is indeed a good book, recommended [like]

It can only be said that it is a very novel mixed theme, which combines whitening + yandere + lolita + hair. It is not as shy as ordinary transformation literature. I think it belongs to the normal mentality of most transformation people. It is super cool.

Great, needless to say, logical, with delicate emotional lines. Every so-called post has a clear purpose, unlike some Lily articles that are purely posted for the sake of posting. Subjectively, Yandere Lily has the best impression.

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Noah's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes are so immersive, and the character descriptions are spot on!

A masterpiece among masterpieces. The foreshadowing is excellent, and the writing style is exquisite. I have never been able to get the idea of ​​yandere, but after reading this book, I learned more about this genre. They are not simply psychopaths twisted by love. It's a way to release pressure and expose inner desires to the outside world (in fact, no one has the desire to have exclusive control, it's just that it's well hidden by reason) Reading is sometimes ecstatic and sometimes stressful. It's even more exciting after being brought into the role. What I usually eat is easy daily food, but this book directly opens the door to a new world. All in all, it is highly recommended and not to be missed. It is a masterpiece among hundreds of articles. The back is too ordinary

I've read Chapter 246, and I can only say it's really good. The protagonist has a very distinct personality, Orange is extremely yandere and Taozi is indecisive. But this character also makes this book a little bit poisonous. Taozi's darkening speed is too slow. It took nearly 100 chapters to darken after the heroine's resurrection. She belongs to a kind of straight woman who doesn't understand her heart at all and doesn't want to understand her heart. Moreover, Ning Ning is a bit poisonous. He gives me the impression that he is a kind of tool person who worships Cheng Zi but is treated as a tool by Cheng Zi. However, his role is a bit abstract. If it is too much, she may not be included in many chapters. If it is too little, after more than 200 pictures, I even think that the author wants to make Ning Ning the protagonist. Isn't that because he is not self-green? Let's take another look. If it's better later, I'll change it to 5 stars [give my heart]

Let me talk about the conclusion first: it is suitable for all ages, the content is exciting, and it is recommended reading. Several main characters in the article: Chi Xiaocheng (yandere lolita, travel through books, own the system), Su Tao (Bai Yueguang heroine, optimistic and cheerful, perseverant), Ye Liang (overbearing president, former male protagonist), Dongfang Yang (arrogant young man, kind-hearted, willing to help others), Si Chen (exquisite egoist, half-hearted psychologist) I recommend it for the following reasons: 1. The description of the characters is vivid and not broken. The main characters in the book all have distinctive image characteristics. There will be no situation in the article where the character's behavior does not match the personality. Even if the reader does not know what the character is like at the beginning, the character's image becomes fuller through the author's continuous description and the expression of events one after another. Readers cannot predict the character's behavior, but they will not feel strange about the character's performance, it is natural and smooth, and there is no sense of violation. Even if the character's personality changes, there will be events as a foreshadowing. This kind of writing style is rare among today's online writers. 2. The structure is clear and the context is complete. In order to conquer the heroine, Chi Xiaocheng formulated a yandere plan. During the execution of the plan, problems arise one after another, and the behaviors of various characters also promote the development of the plot. The article has a clear context and uses a chronological structure to string together events one after another. The many details include the time of various key nodes, events, character behaviors, and character emotions. No one is missing, so it can attract readers to continue reading. It is this reasonable structure that makes the plot in the book unfold more smoothly. 3. The plot is vivid and full of ups and downs. Chi Xiaocheng, who made a yandere plan but turned herself into a yandere; Su Tao, who pretended that he didn't like his sister but paid attention to her wholeheartedly; Chi Song, the gangster brother who was against Lily's CP; and the three young masters who wanted to seize Su Tao but didn't dare to do it until the yandere appeared. What interesting stories will happen between them? How will their personalities change? 3. Textbook-style description of the environment. In the plot, whether it is the fear of the heroine Su Tao when facing the yandere Chi Xiaocheng, there is a lot of environmental description to set it off. It is not uncommon for women's novels to use environmental descriptions to describe emotions, but to perfectly integrate environmental descriptions with emotional expressions is a great test of the author's literary skills. If you write too little, it will be ineffective, and if you write too much, you will feel bored. The right description will make readers neither feel rustic nor bored, and stimulate readers' interest in reading.

This article is the culmination of all the articles about becoming a sick and beautiful woman. The arguments are as follows: 0. This is the most important thing, how to attract readers at the beginning. At the beginning, the yandere with a knife in the basement is so good, so explosive, so crazy and eye-catching. 1. Writing style and description: It doesn't take much to say that you will know that the god is the best after reading it. The ability to describe the character's demeanor, details, psychological scenes and environment in all aspects is full. Those places that should be lyrical are full of picture description, which can be used together to make up the picture. It is also very smooth and comfortable to read. Please update me hard! ! 2. Creation of the protagonist in the plot: Here is the latest chapter. From the beginning of Chengzi's soul travel, he entangled the heroine in order to survive. At first, I simply thought that he had been with the heroine for a long time. The memory of the original owner and the time traveler caused the yandere attribute. However, the latest episode shows why Chengzi became a yandere. The plot is really magical, and it has raised the shaping of 🍊 to a new level: I went crazy through reincarnation and death and questioning the world. Face your destiny, boy! Moreover, Cheng Zi's characterization really blends a normal person and a yandere very, very well. The yandere that resonates with people is not the kind of pure perverted psychotic lunatic who kills everyone and kills everyone, but a normal person and a loving person who is gradually teased by fate and leads to an extreme process. As for Taozi, to be honest, my personal experience during this period is very similar to Taozi's mental journey. Taozi wrote two papers in my freshman year, and I started working on the same area with my tutor in my sophomore year. I was under a lot of academic pressure. Tao Zi is financially strapped and not independent, and my family is also having financial difficulties and life is under great pressure for the time being. Taozi went from being nice to people around her and opening up her own interpersonal relationships to starting to have some dark side for Orange (being pressured by Orange). I also went from being relatively open-minded in interpersonal relationships to giving up a lot of relationships because of the pressure from my partner. Taozi was pulled by 🍊crazy pressure➕from 🍊love with all my heart, and I was pulled by the object's possessiveness➕pressure➕pull➕to be loved wholeheartedly. Taozi's ability to withstand stress is perfect, and I feel that I am also very resistant to stress in my life now. Realistic Pressure Cooker When I saw the pressure cooker in the novel, I felt that my pressure had dropped a lot. I have mentioned a bunch of personal factors that have nothing to do with the article just to prove one thing: the Taozi written by the author throws away all the exaggerated elements and fictional settings of the novel, and Taozi's mental journey can be resonated with people in reality. When we look at Tao Zi's addictive feeling under pressure, why don't we have the feeling of looking in the mirror under the pressure of life? Although I watched the simultaneous secretion of cortisol and dopamine, I really hope to see Taozi break the deadlock and lead to a better ending with 🍊. It is this sense of expectation that makes us subconsciously willing to read on. The personal example is just to show that Taozi resonates with me in reality, making me feel that Taozi is alive. Resonance is always the standard for perfect character creation. 3. Creation of secondary characters: Take the three male protagonists as an example. Ye is a typical self-centered villain obsessed with profit. Brother Yang's arrogant, kind-hearted and upright views and attributes make him highly praised by readers➕full of laughter. Si Chen Yong Aitao pushes the comedy conflict of the plot to a new level. From the creation of classic and innovative images to the role of secondary characters in advancing the plot, it is really full of skills! Admire! 4. The plot structure of the article is logical and reasonable. It has a summary and integration of classic routines, and there are also very refreshing innovations (such as the reincarnation dream in the latest episode). It is very shocking, and it is brilliant in a theme that seems to be very routine. 5. I didn't think about it. You can add it yourself below. In short, the author relied on his very solid skills and deep understanding of readers' needs to create a new twist on a niche novel with routines such as the yandere system, which perfectly meets the readers' resonance. I really haven't found anything more powerful than this so far. If you have any, be sure to push me. Finally, don't underestimate the value of the only article on men's videos that turns into a coquettish girl!

Love it. I want to watch their teaching and training.

As a yandere + Lily Wen (Lily is infinitely good), she can be regarded as a very handsome existence among her peers. Even newcomers who have not dabbled in the ACG culture of yandere can still take a look and feel that there will not be much cognitive hindrance.

It's great. It can be called one of the books with the best emotional portrayal in Tomato. Other books are more or less selling ordinary love stories under the guise of yandere. The author of this book has a deep understanding of yandere and fully explains what is sick and what is yandere. Moreover, these two attributes are integrated very well in the heroine. Throwing away the yandere shell, the quality of the novel is also very good. The characterization is very well done, each character has a distinct image, and has enough eye-catching contrast. The humor is also very good, and the jokes are not stiff. It can be said that the author's control of the rhythm is excellent. (Spoiler) My favorite plot is from Chapters 115 to 187. Chi Xiaocheng faked his death twice. What I saw was Su Tao's conflicting excitement under the extreme suppression given by the desperate atmosphere given by the yandere, and his guidance to face his own emotions after losing Chi Xiaocheng. As a yandere, the clue to the full text is the analysis and answers to the yandere in the plot, which is extremely rare. At the same time, coupled with the author's sufficient writing style, readers can be infected by the atmosphere in the text throughout the article. Su Tao's transformation can only be described as not good, but as a sassy and powerful heroine, her transformation is too dull. I still want to see Su Tao become a yandere in the end (laughs) Overall, it's a good book. I don't expect the plot to hit a new high in the end, but it's good if it doesn't reach the end. I hope the book won't be too long and I can't grasp it, causing the rating to drop. Finally, I would like to praise you again, the portrayal of the characters' emotions is really top-notch. Second change The later period was too slow, the writing was too watery, and Su Tao's ability was not enough to support her character - Four Stars —————————————— Three changes I learned some things, and the author's character is worrying. Just as the freshness has worn off, let's face the problem. The peak of this book is basically concentrated in the first 200 chapters, and 80% of the following chapters are very weak. Most of the plots are quite boring. In fact, the writing after the inspiration is exhausted is not as good as a formula. Looking at it this way, formula writing does have its merits.

Beautiful, love watching. Interesting content. Deep and moving description of the environment. Provide appropriate foreshadowing and foreshadowing. Content contains forced love. "Yandere" psychology. At the same time, it reflects the background of the times and the social background. The author has clear ideas. And vivid writing. Show us what love is. There are many people in contemporary society. Don't want to get married. Don't want to get married. Marriage is not necessarily what you love. Don't know what love is. Don't know the difference. Family, friendship, love, and simple lust. The "male protagonist" Chengcheng in the article is a sickly girl. In his previous life, he was betrayed by his girlfriend, which caused him to break down and become a yandere after taking revenge. Time traveled to a villain in an "urban" novel. He "lost" the memory of the yandere. (He did not lose it completely) obtained the system. With the help of the system, he wanted to play with the heroine. He "pretended" to be a yandere but developed feelings for the heroine in the process of getting along. The heroine Taotao's feelings for Chengcheng during the process of getting along were extremely complicated. Including family affection, friendship, and love, not only for the original Chengcheng, but also for the current one. ，？？，，？？？，，"""" ， @ So how do you solve the relationship between the author Cheng and the original body, and the relationship between Tao Dui Cheng and the original body? Does Cheng have no memory of his original body? Tao's feelings for Orange are all based on Yuan's body, right? If it weren't for the orange being on the original body. Does Tao really like orange? Looking forward to a major twist later on.

The writing is super beautiful. As an old bookworm who loves Lily literature, I highly recommend you to read it. The author's description of the characters is very delicate and belongs to the level of an old author. The characterization of the characters is also very vivid. The plot has ups and downs. It has everything you want. It's a pity🐶 Shen He locked the author in a small dark room, which resulted in a lot of plot changes. In the end, I rarely recommend books. This book is really, really good. If you like Lily Tie Tie, you must not miss it. Also, can Lao Mo work hard and strive for three updates a day [laughter]

It hurts, it hurts so much, it's all a knife, the knife hurts my heart The protagonist is a tsundere + a severe yandere + a lesbian + a time traveler + a memory killer, and orange juice (replacing blood) is the top priority throughout the entire text. Most of the settings are relatively reasonable and can be read in one sitting. The main storyline focuses on the heroine, the emotional lines are described delicately, and the writing is not bad. The finishing touch of the protagonist's suicide note is that the knife was too cruel. The heroine gradually darkened and embarked on the path of a yandere. In summary, it is very sharp, very sweet, and very literary. The disadvantage is that it is sometimes too depressing. It is very attractive to readers and makes people want to put it down. The knife is not cold for a long time, and the sweetness is not greasy for a long time. Even though there are many bloody scenes in the writing, the pictures left behind are indeed beautiful. Finally, say important things three times. Come on update! ! ! Come on update! ! ! Come on update! ! ! No, kids, Lao Cheng has entered the dormitory again. You should be able to win the Easter match. What can I say! ! ! ! Rating: Level 3!

I have read this book for so long that I forgot to comment. I started following this book when it was about ten chapters old. Although it was very depressing for a while, Lao Mo can quickly learn lessons and make changes. It is very comfortable to read. Overall, it is very good. I hope to keep up the good work.

This book is really good, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. The battle lasted for hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are spot on!

I've tried it three times and it looks pretty good so far. The subject matter is very novel, and I can't find several books that are the same in the entire software. The writing style is also okay. The main reason I like this novel is because I do something similar to the protagonist on the Internet. I tell stories based on multiple accounts and identities to my friends on the Internet. I used to like this feeling. The main reason is that I am afraid that I don't have many friends in society. Maybe it's because the new book doesn't get very high ratings. Overall, the book is pretty good and worth reading. However, because of the novelty of the subject matter, the yandere protagonist may still have a relatively small audience. If it doesn't suit your personal preferences, there's no need to give a bad review. Everyone has their own preferences, but if the author is poisoned, I still have to say it. Anyway, new friends can take a look first.

The yandere knows it well. A great yandere novel. I finally understood it, and analyzed the posture of reading novels from different angles. The following content contains spoilers, readers who have not read it should not watch it. —————————————————————————————————— . . . . . . . . From a realistic perspective, there is no doubt that this novel can be directly refuted. From the character design of the heroine, I still have doubts about this even after the weight of the heroine's plot has been reduced. The unrealistic transformation of such a flat and perfect figure into a round shape. It can't happen in reality. (Maybe it's experience) But what I said actually verified the success of the character creation in this novel. It is precisely because Su Tao is Su Tao that she behaves in various ways. It is precisely because she is Su Tao that she blames herself and puts pressure on herself to do what she would do. Of course we are not discussing reality here, we are talking about symbols. Because this issue itself should not be demonstrated in reality whether it is true or false, only symbols are most suitable for discussion in reality. ———— Yandere and love ———— The symbol and discussion of this book is undoubtedly about "love". At first glance, it seems to be yandere love. In fact, in my opinion, this book is a discussion of the topic of "love" itself. What is "love". The last time I saw such a question was in "Guling Street" where there was a sentence: "You are just like them, saying you like me just to get my affection. You are too selfish. " ——"Guling Street Teenage Murder Incident" This sentence directly points "love" to what "love" is, and it is also the purpose of "love". There is no doubt that love ultimately points to oneself, and love itself is divided into two categories: selfishness and selflessness. And yandere's love is extremely selfish. Taking possession of people and longing for emotional rewards is selfish in itself. A violent comment by Lacan once reflected the love of a yandere very well (we will not comment too much on this point of view of Lacan here, it is only used as an example of the mental state of a yandere): "Love is forcing others to do what they don't want." In the novel, Fang Ning's love for Xiao Cheng is selfless, or relatively selfless. She longs for love, but she suppresses her desire and only wants Xiao Cheng to get the love that belongs to her. Some of her actions are almost for Xiao Cheng's own love, rather than for Xiao Cheng to respond to her own love. Xiao Cheng's love for Su Tao, or Su Tao's love for Xiao Cheng in the later period, is selfish. They love each other and release their love to each other. And longs for love to be responded to by the other party. If there is no response, it will be possession, occupying this love forcefully, and using some kind of coercive means to make the other party face you. (For example, Xiao Cheng's self-harm in the novel, and Su Tao's imprisonment, etc.) Of course, we can also easily perceive: we are more inclined to the former's unrequited love (for ourselves), but for the love we want to repay, we don't have a big other to back it up, so naturally we are less inclined to the former (if you can choose) Of course, there is a premise. We know that since it is a discussion of yandere and love, the subject of our discussion cannot leave yandere. However, regarding the discussion of yandere, obviously we don't need to think so much, because there can be many subdivisions of yandere, but from an ontological point of view, it is just a meme under the ACGN subtext of consumerism and post-modernity. I saw a netizen's point of view before, which also appeared in the article, that is: "You don't like yandere, you just want someone to love you." If it is about the subdivision of yandere, as it is now more general: dependent type, exclusive type, exclusion type, aggressive type, stalking type, harmless type, worship type, delusional type, isolation-inducing type. But what we are going to do now is to deconstruct and analyze yandere. I once saw an up master, and he was very interesting. He divided the deconstruction of yandere (particularly those with congenital yandere attributes, but I think this conclusion is very suitable for this novel) into two objects: Yandere: proactive, extreme (such as paranoid), possessive, idealizing love objects Yandere love object: Passive, low desire (in his own mind), nothing special about himself Among them, we can find that the last point of this theory about the analysis of yandere and yandere love objects does not fit the novel. Because Su Tao itself is ideal, her own attributes exist on the premise that Xiao Cheng idealizes Su Tao, and there is the process of Xiao Cheng pushing Su Tao into a noble (idealized) object. Because Su Tao became a yandere due to external reasons caused by Xiao Cheng, this theory is biased in analyzing the principle of Su Tao's yandere. —— All the emotions of the yandere are externalized, so we can clearly find that the "intermediate acting skills" necessary for Xiao Cheng are the basis for the yandere to disguise herself as a normal person. I actually don't agree with the fact that yandere is a reflective individual. Yandere will realize that he is different from ordinary people, but he may not realize it either. However, after we separate the yandere from the ACGN culture of consumerism and postmodernism, the entire analysis of the yandere becomes abstract - I cannot analyze such an individual (who can chew it)

This is the second Lily novel in my life. It stuck in my mind both times. I can only say that it is worthy of me. The first one was by Ye Zhen and Ye Moli. It was finished at that time. I read it in one sitting and felt very, very empty. Even when I was writing my own article, I couldn't help but think of them. I read it three times in a row for a week. This is also the first time in my life that I have taken so many notes while reading a book. I should be glad that Tao Cheng's story is still being serialized, and there are endless possibilities. I even hope that there will be no ending, just like it is real, and I can see some twisted and sweet daily life every day. So, even if it's all a running account, Xiaomo, promise me. After the main outline is finished, I will write another chapter of Tao Cheng's life every day. No matter how bland and perfunctory it is, I can still be happy watching it. Because love is not something I can hope for in reality, this is one of the few or even the only spiritual sustenance I have. I really want to see them continue to exist alive, and their timeline will never stop. At this point, it's time to start taking notes.

It is an excellent novel, both in terms of writing and logic. I saw the present in one breath, this is Chapter 282. Starting from Volume 4, Chapter 282, I suddenly lost the desire to read on, because it made me a little breathless [face covering] If Su Tao, after becoming a yandere, treats Xiao Cheng the way Xiao Cheng once did, and let the two yanderes like and torture each other, I can easily accept and look forward to this kind of plot. Even Ning Ning turned into a yandere and fell in love with Xiao Cheng, and then the three yanderes tortured each other. I can still accept and look forward to this kind of plot. However, Chapter 282 and the previous chapters described Ning Ning too beautifully, and then wrote the plot of Su Tao losing a suicide note and asking Ning Ning to teach Su Tao a lesson. I really couldn't bear to read on, and I just felt suffocated. . . Even if Ning Ning is directly yandere and competes with Su Tao for Xiao Cheng, I don't feel any pressure [face covering] The information between the three people is poor, the three people misunderstand each other, and they don't understand each other. It's too difficult [covers face] Then I opened some paragraph reviews and looked at the comments inside, trying to find some readers who had the same idea. I felt suffocated again [covering my face] and for a while I didn't know if it was my problem or something else. . Maybe most of the people in the comment area are teasing or joking, or maybe they really have the same thoughts as them. There are almost no comments that resonate with me. I feel that my pressure is no greater than that of Su Tao [smiles] You need to take a moment before continuing. However, 5-star praise is still required.

It's really good. If it weren't for the restriction caused by the subject matter, I think it would have been read online at least 800,000 times. The rating is also low. I think it is worth more than 9.8. I used to have a fixed impression of yandere, but it is really rare for the author to write this kind of heavy love. After reading it, I felt that yandere can not only stab people, but yandere can also be so cute. I think Su Tao's portrayal is really good. The transformation from not understanding to escaping to loss is very exciting. I feel like the author has experienced something? As long as the author keeps updating, I will keep chasing it to the end. The author should work hard and don't be a eunuch.

In dual heroine novels, there are very few protagonists who are yandere. In the past, it was from another perspective. The author's writing style is also good, and his heart and language are rich in expression. There are currently about 40 pictures and there are no big poisonous points. I just hope that the author can make the protagonist stronger and it is a bit uncomfortable to watch. Come on [snicker][snicker][snicker] I have updated to about 350 chapters (I am considered an old reader [shy]) The author has really made great progress, especially in the emotional aspect. I have secretly wiped my tears [almost crying] I have also read the author's last book (Xiaocha's book) but I don't know why it is gone. But this book is 100 times better than the previous one [shy] I still have some opinions about becoming a hundred. At first, I thought this book was becoming a hundred, but now I understand that it is a real pure love 1v1 between two heroines. The origin of the yandere has also been explained, and many of the foreshadowings that have been buried before have been filled in. Overall, it is really super good-looking. In my opinion, it is the best book with two female protagonists in Tomato [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] Come on, author! ! !

The plot before Xiao Cheng wakes up from a fake death was very strong, and the rooftop sequence made my scalp numb even more. After that, the character image may be different due to force majeure factors (Si Mu sinks into the river, thank you, the historian) and lack of experience. It is mediocre with dozens of good chapters (there is a paragraph where Taotao's pressure made me suffocate). The fragments that impressed me most in the whole story are almost the first two hundred chapters (I really like the part where Taotao refuses the confession of passers-by and says "I have a girlfriend") and Taotao's resistance to pressure, the truth about the world, the Battle at the Manor of Divine Doctor Chu, the whole process of confession in the amusement park, Taotao tearing off her waistcoat to reconciling with Ningning, the training [shyness] (I would like to thank the historian again), the dozens of chapters of the decisive battle, etc. The few questions may have a slightly slow pacing (I think it's actually okay, maybe because I am a slow-paced reader, that is, when Xiao Cheng pretended to lose his memory, I really wanted to end this section quickly, Taotao was so miserable [crying]); some characters lacked character development (this problem itself is very small, and most of it is inconsistent due to Shen He); I personally think the ending is a bit rushed (maybe because of my personal reasons) But what I like is the book itself and the characters in the book, the emotional blessing, and the quality itself is also very good. I give it five stars ദ്ദി˶>𖥦<)✧ Personal opinions, welcome to discuss, don't comment if you don't like ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥᷅₎ა

It's beautiful... Touching, and too worrying. I hope Laomo will update it quickly while protecting my health, so that I won't starve to death! Awa

The book is really good, and the author's writing skills are also top-notch, but I can't stand it anymore. I used to say that I like yanderes because I think too highly of myself [face covering]. I suggest everyone give it a try. It's still very good.

It seems to be a pioneer of this type, and it expresses the emotional drama of the two protagonists very well. However, the setting of the supporting characters still inevitably falls into the tendency of tool personification and facial makeup. The setting of the mastermind behind the scenes is just a arrogant and uncharismatic will of the world. The plot advancement in many places must be systematic, and supernatural settings such as world will can only exist based on it, so that it always seems to be divorced from realistic considerations. In fact, if you think about it to a certain extent, maybe you don't need 520 reincarnations to write about despair and emotion? There is still a case of overexertion at this point. And it also makes people realize that in fact, the good ending in the end is largely due to the stupidity of the world's will, which in a sense weakens the rareness of the good ending. However, I still thank the author for bringing a good story, and I look forward to the follow-up daily chapters of the two. If the author can create within the framework of realism, that is, without borrowing the so-called system, world thugs and other deus ex machina settings, this will make the character of the eldest lady become a bit of a clown-like existence in the later period. This kind of setting is only used as a tool rather than the ultimate goal, and the writing is developed in a sweet-sounding way. Personally, I feel that this kind of subject matter should be more touching. Because cherishing the present is the most rare thing, 520 reincarnations may not be as expressive as one life and death.