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A New Writer Has Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Can Anyone Comment on It?

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I want to read a book similar to "The Legend of the Dragon King: The Smoke and Clouds Reverse the World". It was the first time I wrote 80,000 words, and then I tried my best to write 400,000 words. I also wrote towards the standard of 400,000 words. It was boring to be free at home. After all, I just finished the first semester of college.

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152 Twin Hairpins Yeya PearModern Romance434k Wordsongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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One is a modern girl who lives in a slum with low self-esteem and is bullied on campus, and the other is a noble and pampered daughter of a prince. What will happen when their souls are swapped in time and space? This is a novel that a newcomer has just published. Comments are welcome!
153 Hexi Weiyang Waiting for the New Yearcompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I wrote my own book, my own story. Does anyone like it? One volume is not very good, I hope someone can read it.
154 One Thousand Years of Mistakes, and All the Buddhas and Demons Will Be Hers! He Quanguocompleted —Reads8.6Score—Shelves
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I am a new author, but not cute [facepalm][facepalm] The first book is my second signed work, and the second one is a high-scoring novel! Recommended to everyone…
155 Why Not Cross by Boat? Xian YukeAncient Romance483k Wordscompleted 209kReads9.7Score42kShelves
156 Stepping on the Heaven Realm Eternal Night GalaxyEastern Fantasy9.2M Wordsongoing 438kReads9.2Score57.7kShelves
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Can everyone read my novel? It's 80,000 words long. It's fantasy and has a heroine. This is my only wish before graduation. Please [I'm about to cry]
157 Three Moves Iron Ball Driverongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I really don't know how to write it. Please give me some tips for newbies. I have a lot of ideas in my head, but the response is so bad that I don't know what to do. Can you give me some advice?
158 Eclipse Fairy Road The Bloody Empressongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I am also a newbie and no one has read my book. Please comment or like it.
159 A Thought of Gods and Demons Brings Disaster to the Heavens Entering the World Half-Bakedongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Purely cute, so new that it couldn't be newer
160 Did Bro Become My Taoist Companion in the Immortal Cultivation Game? Dark Flower Messengerongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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The first one was mine, and I liked the later ones. I wanted to learn how to make people happy but also have brains.
161 Online Games: My Poison Can Kill Gods XingmengchenyuanSports1.5M Wordscompleted 206kReads9.2Score34kShelves
162 Online Games: God-Level Assassin, I Am the Shadow! Three Yuan a PieceSports4.9M Wordsongoing 269kReads9.1Score34.8kShelves
163 Online Games: the Sword Transforms the World into a Shocking Guest Lizhuang White MeatSports4.5M Wordscompleted 49.4kReads9.1Score6.1kShelves
164 The Wife Reaches the Top of the Doomsday Dual-System Superpower List Listen to the Novelongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Babies can read it and come and comment on the memorial.
165 Mayfly Broken Meng Yu Chengxincompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I am a novice writer, hoping to improve my writing skills and describe a novel world of my own by writing books. I hope that old bookworms can give me more suggestions #fantasy. I just signed up for the first book and recommended it. The second book is a related subject with more powerful writing skills, so you can learn from it.
166 Mortal Bones One Geng MasterEastern Fantasy8.3M Wordscompleted 837.3kReads9.3Score152.3kShelves
167 Minecraft Is the Most Fun in the World, Hahahaha! What the Hell Am ISports57k Wordscompleted 177Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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Look, look, look
168 King System: I Produce Meat Equipment in the World of Cultivating Immortals What the Hell Am Iongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
169 Traveling Through the Book: I Am Arrogantly Knocking the Ice Autumn There Is Gold in the Book138k Wordscompleted 422Reads—Score—Shelves
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Well, the first one is written by me. I like the rest of them. I recommend them.
170 Epilepsy, All Epilepsy, Epilepsy Is Better XiaoyanziModern Romance1.3M Wordscompleted 868.8kReads9.8Score140.4kShelves
171 The Junior Sister Is Obviously Super Strong, but She Is Too Frivolous. Tomato Comicscompleted —Reads9.6Score—Shelves
172 How to Be Decent: Two Volumes (Original Work of the Popular Film and Television Series Starring Wang Churan and Cheng Lei) Seven Handsomecompleted 60.1kReads9.7Score—Shelves
173 Sword Master in Troubled Times Murong DandanEastern Fantasy521k Wordscompleted 5Reads—Score—Shelves
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This is my first book, the others are basically good
174 Nine Characters** completed —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
175 Little Expert in Retreat in the Fairy World Fruity Milk TeaEastern Fantasy4.3M Wordsongoing 431.4kReads8.5Score53.6kShelves
176 Improper************* Dreams Come TrueUrban45k Wordsongoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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The first book is by a new author. I think it is well written, with detailed descriptions, a single female protagonist and a group portrait. It is worth reading and has a great world view. The world view of the second book is smaller, but it is absolutely a masterpiece.
177 In the End, the Young Man Got Emotional and Drew His Sword to Kill the Gods for You. Fox on the SwingUrban579k Wordscompleted 38.3kReads9.4Score5.1kShelves
178 Did I Accidentally Become a Tomato Novelist? White-Haired New BrotherUrban307k Wordscompleted 2.2kReads—Score159Shelves
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Ask for comfort [cry] [cry] [cry]
179 Leave the Father and Leave the Son? the Child Must Have My Last Name! White-Haired New Brothercompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
180 Survive********* completed —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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It's 80,000 words and I still haven't recommended it. Please give me a review! [Working on draft]
181 I'm a Supporting Actress and I'll Just Flip the Table Lonely Immortalcompleted —Reads8.6Score—Shelves
182 Chinese Gods Return Lonely Immortalcompleted —Reads8.4Score—Shelves
183 After Rebirth, I Will Kill the Scumbag Emperor Lonely Immortalcompleted —Reads8.6Score—Shelves
184 Bloody Demon Hunter Cuttlefish White and BlueUrban191k Wordsongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I'm here again asking for viewing and recommendations. Finally, there is an author who is related to us, and we even recommend his books!
185 Three Kingdoms: I Wiped Out All the Powerful Generals Maple Bridge Night Moonongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
186 The Apocalypse Is Coming, and the Whole City Turns into a Murderous Maniac Tangshan Peng Yuyanongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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A blood-cross-like drama with no superpowers and no system.
187 After Nine Years of Trading with Mortals, I Saved Enough Capital to Be Reborn Ultraman Pattonongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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The first book I wrote was, I think, My Tenant.
188 My 26 Year Old Female Tenant Super Tank Kobe BryantUrban2.1M Wordscompleted 274.1kReads9.7Score60.8kShelves
189 Extraordinary Ensemble Mr. VitalUrban365k Wordscompleted 20Reads—Score—Shelves
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Small group portrait, 360,000 words [note][note][note]
190 Fanzhou Goes to Jail Fellow Taoist, Take the First Stepongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Newbie's work, if you are interested, please support it. Thank you.
191 Miracle Doctor and Crazy Concubine: the King of Hell Dare Not Accept Her City Light Yearscompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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160,000 Words, no comments [laughing and crying]
192 Psychic Cecilia PotatoesEastern Fantasy136k Wordsongoing 7MReads8.8Score865.5kShelves
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Recommended fantasy novels
193 I Have Been an Orphan Since Childhood, and Now I Am a Big Daddy in the World of Cultivating Immortals. Zha Zhahui Who Cultivates Immortalitycompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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This is really what I wrote, but I feel it's too bland at the beginning, and it will slowly get more exciting later on.
194 Know the Twilight The Rice Cake Is Not ImmortalModern Romance204k Wordscompleted 412Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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It's 120,000 words long, and it's already the extra chapter. It's full of sugar and no cruelty.
195 Intrusion** Zheng LihanModern Romance175k Wordscompleted 5Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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These three books are all written by me. Save the children. I need a good review [send your heart]
196 Out of Reach Zheng LihanModern Romance337k Wordscompleted 86Reads—Score—Shelves
197 Secret Love Is a Grand Silent Defeat Zheng LihanModern Romance86k Wordscompleted 121Reads—Score—Shelves
198 Just Watch, Don't Click In! Midnight Glass Wongoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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Cherish every person who clicks in with joy. Even if there is only one. (It's this novel, not me)
199 Apocalyptic Battle Royale: I Have a Black Market System Nan Xinjiang Acridinecompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Newcomer, new book, please come and support me, thank you all [love] [love] [love]
200 Crossing the Underworld, What Does It Mean to Be Scolded by the Guilty Bag at the Beginning? Seventy-Eight Treasure Porridge93k Wordsongoing 1.5kReads5.8Score233Shelves
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The first one is my own, a funny article written by a fan of Bengtie. Please read it...[I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend]
201 Story Creativity Guide: Screenplay and Novel Creation Methods Tangtang Xiaojuncompleted 8.4kReads9.6Score—Shelves