A New Writer Has Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Can Anyone Comment on It?

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I want to read a book similar to "The Legend of the Dragon King: The Smoke and Clouds Reverse the World". It was the first time I wrote 80,000 words, and then I tried my best to write 400,000 words. I also wrote towards the standard of 400,000 words. It was boring to be free at home. After all, I just finished the first semester of college.

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252 My Nanjing Love Story I Really Don't Have Money to Pay My Phone BillUrban716k Wordsongoing 101Reads—Score—Shelves
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I have written 200,000 words, and I am still working hard on coding.
253 Yueyuan Destiny Star Zi YuexunAncient Romance125k Wordscompleted 10Reads—Score—Shelves
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Welcome to read, like and add to bookshelf
254 Jin Meets Each Other How Cool Is the Breeze?Martial Arts129k Wordsongoing 6Reads—Score—Shelves
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I also want to know if anyone can
255 After the Young Master Was Deposed, He Ascended to the Throne of God! Hibiscus Witheredongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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This author is a newbie
256 It's the End of the World, of Course Learning Comes First! Valley Is Feasibleongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Just read this new book, the author has an incomparable imagination. Brand new setting, brand new plot, I can only say that the author is awesome
257 Desire Is Hard to Redeem Leaf Tip Clear DewMystery3.0M Wordsongoing 6.7kReads6.8Score779Shelves
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A different crime.
258 World************* ongoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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The first one was written by me. I hope you can give me some advice. The group portrait is not an invincible article, but the style changed in the following chapters. Do you want to delete it?
259 I Learned to Kill Gods in a Mental Hospital Thirty-Nine RangeUrban4.3M Wordscompleted 2.1MReads9.9Score334.1kShelves
260 The Time-Traveling Emperor Meets His Genius Brother-In-Law Fungus Who Likes to Write Clear Water Essaysongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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The Qingshui novel I wrote, if you like funny daily life, you can read it [Flowing Kiss][Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy] "The Emperor Meets Genius Brother-in-Law in Time Travel" Novel Introduction One-sentence synopsis When a doctor of economics traveled through time and became an emperor, he found that his brother-in-law was an ancient business genius whose talent overwhelmed modern knowledge - so in the court there were monarchs and ministers, but in private it was a daily life of "brother-in-law dissatisfaction" and "genius being funny". Suitable for readers · ✅ Like relaxed and humorous ancient sayings, tired of bitter feuds and deep palace fights · ✅ Love the protagonist with online IQ, enjoy the refreshing feeling of genius crushing · ✅ Love the warm family daily life, longing for the happiness of flying around, · ✅ Curiosity The collision of ancient and modern thinking, happy to see the "acclimatization" of modern knowledge Ultimate theme Even if you travel through time and become an emperor, even if your talent is astonishing - the most precious thing will always be a home with bright lights and those people who allow you to sleep peacefully until the sun rises. --- One-sentence recommendation: If the machinations of "Nirvana in Fire" meet the daily life of "Family with Children", and then mixed with the genius comedy of "The Big Bang Theory" - this is a wonderful story that will make you smile and warm your heart. Core Highlights 1. Contrast and Cute CP: The Emperor's Brother-in-law vs. The Genius Brother-in-law · Shen Yu (Emperor): A doctor of modern economics traveled through time and wanted to rely on knowledge to crush the ancients, but he was hit by dimensionality reduction · Lin Wensong (brother-in-law): The famous "prodigal son" in the capital, but in fact he is a genius who counts accounts like breathing and does business like a game · Daily painting style: · The emperor stayed up late to calculate the accounts that he couldn't figure out, and the brother-in-law finished it in three days and even drew an Excel chart. · The emperor competed in horse riding and archery, and his brother-in-law performed "I'm the best, I pretend to be stupid, but the emperor is happy" · The emperor broke his defense privately: "I have been studying hard for more than ten years, why should he know it with just one glance?!" 2. Time-traveling couple: modern soul mates in the palace · Lin Xiaoxiao (Jing Guifei): An agricultural researcher traveled through time, the emperor's only confidant · Emotional line: Two time-travelers fight side by side, guarding modern equal love under the rules of the palace · Famous scene: The emperor asked the concubine to "take care of the concubines", and the concubine smiled and asked: "Do you want me to help you arrange a bed?" 3. The atmosphere of the Lin family: chickens and dogs are jumping around, but warm and healing · Strict father Lin Shilang: a serious veteran in the court, chasing his son with a feather duster when he comes home · Tiger mother Mrs. Qian: scolding her son for being a prodigal while secretly stuffing money · Gentle aunt: always saying "Song'er is happy" with red circles in her eyes · A family: quarreling but full of love, which makes the cold-faced emperor so envious that he can't help but love him. Main story line Volume 1: The dude turned out to be a genius · Lin Wensong became famous for "paying three thousand taels for the seeds", but in fact he secretly promoted agricultural cooperatives · The emperor accidentally discovered his amazing account book talent, and started the cycle of "dissatisfaction-testing-really fragrant" · The brother-in-law finished the work of the household department in five days, leaving twenty-five days to eat, drink and have fun Volume 2: The situation in the south of the Yangtze River and the feelings of family and country · The emperor's southern tour led his brother-in-law to check the accounts, and the assassination exposed Lin Wensong's hidden martial arts · Salt tax reform, disaster relief and reconstruction, and business geniuses made the treasury a lot of money · Behind the bloody rain in Yangzhou, there is the deep calculation and modern ethical struggle of the emperor. Volume 3: The world of fireworks and the long flow of water · Lin Wensong meets Su Wan, a confused embroiderer, and the whole Lin family assists in the "silly son chasing his wife" · The "experimental workshop" is opened, the waterwheel spinning machine is improved, and the genius's ideal is more than making money · The emperor lives in the Lin family incognito, sleeping until midnight: "It turns out this is the taste of home" Features of the work ① Anti-conventional tactics · The emperor does not fight in the palace, but is busy competing with his brother-in-law to see who is smarter · The imperial concubine did not compete for favor, and she and the emperor discussed "respect issues" like a modern couple · The plot is not dark, and there is homely humor and warmth ② Intellectual cross-server chat · Emperor: "Who taught you this cooperative system?" · Brother-in-law: "Isn't it common sense to think about bank drafts and water transportation shares?" · (The emperor's inner OS: I read my Ph. D. In economics in vain!) ③ The collision of ancient and modern laughter · The ancient Lin Wensong drew histograms and flow charts without any teachers · The modern man Shen Yu was crushed by the ancient talent and doubted his life · The two-time travel couple used the secret code of "takeaway" and "property fee" to connect ④ The core of family warmth · No matter how powerful the genius is, he will still be chased and beaten by his father when he returns home · No matter how majestic the emperor is, he will envy other people's braised pork · The core of the story: Talent can amaze the times, but warmth is where the world belongs.
261 Live Adventure: My Discovery Shocked the World Dinosaur Cooks Cockroaches and Eats ThemUrban605k Wordsongoing 41.6kReads6.4Score4.2kShelves
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A new author, he wrote his own book in the adventure genre. He has written more than sixty chapters so far. Please review Peng Yuyan and Wu Yanzu's book [top post]
262 The Song of Dust Is Not over Yet Archdevilongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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The new book has been criticized by Taoist friends. It is disguised as a novel about cultivating immortals and mixed with a lot of personal information. It is not brainless.
263 Above Yuan Ruins: Fighting with Heaven for Life Sui HanshengEastern Fantasy1.0M Wordscompleted 22Reads—Score—Shelves
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It's almost 200,000 words. Can you guys give me some advice? What should I do? Should I change the title of the book or something?
264 Sacrifice: Start Plundering Spiritual Roots from the Mortal Realm Xu Zhangcompleted —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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Can you help me see if fantasy is really not good enough?
265 Fallen Fire: Liuliqiao Academy Feng Daoshoucompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Your life has entered a seven-day countdown. [The soul-eating reincarnation curse has been activated] [Cycle time limit: 7 days] [Cycle requirement: Balance Glaze × 1] [Unsuccessful effect: Soul returns to zero] This is not a game interface, this is the tightening curse you see after passing the Vientiane Corridor test. You have just entered Liuliqiao Academy in the Neutral Zone of the War in the Thousand Lights Realm. As the only carrier of chaotic powers and multiple adapters in a century, Golden Finger was launched and the Ten Thousand Phase Star Chart System was awakened. It was supposed to have a bright future. However, the restless and untamable energy in your body is not a gift, but a terrifying backlash. There is also a reminder of the seven-day countdown to reincarnation. You have to outsmart the 15 behind-the-scenes forces, survive sneak attacks and assassinations, and find the balance glass. Your roommate is a tech geek and your partner is a calculating void merchant. The beautiful and dangerous senior offers you an olive branch, and the stargazing hall in the shadows quietly puts you on the watch list. Who can you trust? Every choice you make may hasten your death. The deeper fear is: Why does this reincarnation curse come to you alone? Why does the dagger left by his father resonate with the missing genius of the academy? Is this glazed bridge connected to the Land of Fallen Stars, or is it a huge prison? The countdown has begun. Is it to break the reincarnation? Or will it remain silent and become an erroneous footnote? Your first step determines your next step, affects your every step, and causes your last step...
266 Offender Li MaUrban2.7M Wordscompleted 351.6kReads9.4Score48.4kShelves
267 My System Is Too Good at Causing Trouble. Running Fat Unclecompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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The same newbie has already reached 500,000 words and has no traffic at all.
268 The End of the World: There Is an Evil God Inside Me KiyonozawaEastern Fantasy381k Wordscompleted 6Reads—Score—Shelves
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It's the first time I've written 80,000 words. It's also the first time I've written more than 200,000 words. It's almost 300,000 words. Have you read my book? Please support me.
269 Demon Slayer: the Pillar Coming Out of Gou Xiong Ling I Love Jealousy the Most195k Wordscompleted 255Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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I hope I can ask for some book reviews. I would be very grateful.
270 The Tutor Is Gentle and Courteous to the Elder Sister, and the Younger Brother Is Flirting with Her Taro BearModern Romance105k Wordscompleted 187Reads—Score—Shelves
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I wrote a hundred thousand words with painstaking efforts and exhaustion~ Please appreciate it.
271 The Legend of Mortal Martial Arts A Moment of Leisurecompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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It's just 200,000 [almost crying]
272 Returns from the Doomsday and Beats up Fiancé and Best Friend Snake in Winterongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Mutual praise, mutual concern, mutual evaluation
273 They've All Entered the Tower to Survive. Do You Want to Increase Your Cooking Skills? Lingliongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Please help me take a look and make suggestions. I hope the newcomers can make progress! I can't find any problem on my standalone machine! Thank you everyone! ! ! Love you!
274 Vice City: Start by Conquering the Vicious Female Boss Tears of Love to EatUrban70k Wordsongoing 14Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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Urban gangster story, don't read it lightly, everyone is evil
275 The End of the World: for the Sake of Humanity, I Will Rebuild the Federation Paper White Sorrow SnowSci-Fi & Apocalypse144k Wordscompleted 230Reads—Score—Shelves
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New author, please comment, I will reply
276 Women's Restroom Opening? Is the System Cheating People? I've Been Cheated GoldfishUrban137k Wordscompleted 61Reads—Score—Shelves
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Readers of urban martial arts genre please come in
277 Time and Space Monument Black Hair Breaks the Rainongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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The book I have written now has about 100,000 words. Please help me read it and give me your opinions.
278 Using One's Body as Seed, One Enters the World of Mortals Three Thousand Dang Jiuzhouongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Other people's systems are a little different from mine,
279 Please Check the Heartbeat Signal No Timecompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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The first one is my own, and the ones that follow are my favorites. You can check them out վ'ᴗ' ի
280 Mechanical Strange Stories Seven Cold Return StarUrban264k Wordsongoing 77Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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I beg you guys, please save the child [crying]
281 First Return Mo Yimaongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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"It looks like we have arrived at the beach of the city." Yi seemed not to care about the kick, even though his waist felt a little painful. "Aren't you going to explain it?" Huaiyin was a little urgent now. To be honest, she had a feeling now... "I'm not schizophrenic." Yisi smiled and shook his head, "I did it on purpose, so that we can come out." "How do you say this?" Huaiji, who was lying like a dead dog, raised his hand and asked, and then lowered it weakly. "Did you notice it?" "Are you saying that it's a fish tank?" "Hmm... So it's really a fish tank." Huaiyin was obviously not satisfied that he might just be a fish rotting and smelly in the tank. "How did you come up with it?" "Well... I said it was a bet and you might scold me, but when I tell you the reason, you might think I'm making up a reason based on the answer." "OK, I understand." Huaiyin looked at the other person's eyes for a while and stopped asking. "What on earth does she understand? These two are just sitting here playing riddles." Huai Ji was obviously dissatisfied with the results of this "traveling around", "My feet are hurting to death, is there any justice..." Before she could finish her words, He Xi threw a handful of sand at her: "Can you stop talking, it makes my head hurt." "I don't care about that. How do you know you can succeed by letting that thing occupy your body? What is that thing? How are you sure that we can succeed." As soon as a series of questions were sent out, Yihong kept moving again, "Fuck you, you won't predict that the dream will happen again and find the perfect timeline after envisioning 100,000,000 endings, right?" Huaiji next to him just stood up excitedly and wanted to say something, but He Xi covered him up. He could only whine in despair, obviously regretting that his genius ideas had not spread. And Yi seemed speechless. "Do you think he is Doctor Strange?" "Stop, stop, why are you getting more and more biased?" He originally wanted to create a mysterious atmosphere, "all right, all right" "That's me too." "The one before?" "No." "You are still so unknown..." "What are you thinking." Yisi sighed, his reputation in this life was ruined. "That's another paranoid version of me." "Parallel time and space?" "So... Right?" Yi Xi continued, "Do you remember the hole you fell into?" "Guixu?" "What kind of turtle whiskers?" Huai Ji came to life and asked. The two ignored him, "Guixu used my memory to recreate a similar environment, and used my personality to make a copy of me to simulate." "Cloning?" "Is it more terrifying? The same life trajectory is much more severe than simply controlling the appearance." "But he doesn't look like you, I mean in many ways." "Well... Do you think you will still end up with that ending if you face the same multiple-choice question again?" Huaiyin was stunned, lowered his head and thought for a long time, and then slowly spoke, with a bit of emotion in his tone: "Well... In this way, to be able to become who I am now, every choice is crucial, it is simply a miracle." She paused, and then added, "But it seems that the exact same choice is more logical. After all, it is a brand new you. You are not making a choice again after experiencing a change and learning from the past." "I believe you already have the answer." "He was right in reporting his family status at the beginning?" "Maybe." "The water in this world is really despicable." "Really? Aren't you among all living beings a drop of water that dissolves in the sea?" "Oke Oke, I don't want to discuss these philosophical issues. What do we need to do now?" "Why, you don't believe me?" Yi raised his hand as if indulgently and turned his head towards the Etu Yongyuan knife that Yihong was holding, as if he was looking at his own face in the light of the knife. "Have you taken enough photos?" Huaiyin said. "Quite handsome." Yi Xi said absently, "You still don't believe I'm the person you are?" "It's still hard for me to believe that I have a criminal record. After all, at the last moment of escaping, who can guarantee that I won't be stabbed when I let my guard down?" As he spoke, Yi Hong restrained Yi Si. "Okay, no need to joke." "It's important to be on guard against others." "But... You should pretend to be more realistic." Yisi's words at this moment made Yihong confused. "What..." Before Yihong could finish his question, Huaiyin suddenly moved. She clenched her fist and punched Yihong mercilessly on the back of the head. The force was so fast and hard that Yihong fell straight onto the beach without even a grunt, and fainted instantly. Yisi looked at this scene, raised his eyebrows, and joked: "Why don't you imitate the martial arts drama, knock him out with a knife, and punch him directly, which looks rough." "Then why don't you throw props from your sleeves to hit him, and do all those fancy things?" Huaiyin withdrew her fist, but her expression was still not that good. "Is he dead?" "It doesn't matter if he's dead. It's not him. What are you afraid of?" Yi seemed to hear the words and smiled, his eyes full of approval: "How do you know he is fake? I have a God's perspective, so I can see it clearly. I have been worried about how to convey this news to you quietly. If I say it directly, he will definitely bite me back, which will make you distrust me even more. And even if you secretly flirt with me, you will still be suspected." "Oc. "Are you serious?" "Okay, he has a hat from the rain." Yi Xi looked around, "I don't see it either." "That thing is not an entity that can be seen with the naked eye. You don't need to go into it. You just need to know that it is the key to distinguishing it from the real one." Huaiyin explained simply, not wanting to waste too much time on this issue. "Where is Yihong himself?" "She must have been washed into the water and hasn't come out yet. Do the math, the time should be up." Huaiyin pretended to look at his watch. "How do you know that he will be okay?" "Oh, do you think why I pinch so accurately? Can't I keep a water-drop clock in my heart and keep track of the time?" Huaiyin blinked and joked deliberately. "Who asked you this? Don't interrupt!" Yi seemed helpless. "You're just kidding. You've been tense. Relax." Huaiyin smiled and said in a more serious tone, "He should have seen the sun soaked in the water." "Who asked this?" "It's a joke. I see you are a bit tense. He should have seen the sun soaked in the water." "The sun?" "Song Shijiu." "Then he is okay?" "You have to know that when a person is about to die, his words are also good. This should be Song Shijiu's bravest time. The first time he was brave was so heroic." "Brave?" "The flood is coming, and she will use her own wreckage to prevent the world from being submerged." As soon as Huaiyin finished speaking, a soft light suddenly lit up on the beach, and Yihong's figure slowly emerged in the light, standing firmly in front of everyone. Yi Shi looked at the sudden appearance of Zhen Yihong, and reviewed the series of messages he had just received, and couldn't help but gasped: "Here, did our identity as a prophet just jump to the wrong side? There is too much information, I can't digest it." "Oh, your mental logo was disconnected just now." Huaiyin turned to He Xi, reconnected to Yi Shi's mental logo, and said helplessly, "No wonder it was so difficult to communicate with you just now, saying that we haven't been on the same channel for a long time." "666, I was offline just now." Yi seemed to suddenly realize. "In order to make up for the communication barrier just now, I will give you a chance to name this operation." Huaiyin looked at him and said with a smile. Yisi lowered his head and thought for a moment, then raised his eyes to look at the surging clouds and waves in the distance. A trace of determination flashed in his eyes, and he slowly said: "Well... Let's call him Storm Catcher."
282 Evil Spirits Invading? Send It to Yun Chang While It's Still Hot! Evil Little Strategistcompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Try it again, no bitterness, no deep hatred, easy blood, high martial arts abilities
283 Lily of the Gloria! Crocodile Studentcompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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The new book recommendation is fun and exciting. I hope to meet readers who understand her.
284 You Control the Beasts and I Control My Father, and My Father's Swordsmanship Is the Best in the World. Pan FouUrban189k Wordsongoing 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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Save, save the cute new writer, thank you, meow
285 The Soul Travels Through Eternity, I Rely on Modern Thinking to Rebuild the Country Liu YishisanHistorical479k Wordsongoing 3Reads—Score—Shelves
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The first one is written by me, and the fourth one is also a short story written by me. The two middle ones are my favorites. They are listed in no particular order. You are welcome to give me guidance and you will definitely reply if you comment on each other.
286 Rebirth of the Ming Dynasty as a Tyrant Painting LingyanHistorical3.3M Wordscompleted 21.9kReads9.0Score2.1kShelves
287 I Will Be a Tyrant in Ming Dynasty Painting LingyanHistorical2.5M Wordscompleted 11.1kReads8.9Score564Shelves
288 After Agreeing to Fall in Love, Professor Gao Leng's Character Collapsed Online Liu Yishisancompleted —Reads8.4Score—Shelves
289 Destiny Ghost Master Guanghe WumingEastern Fantasy1.5M Wordscompleted 5Reads—Score—Shelves
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Why do I write more than 700,000 words and have no income?
290 The Demon King from Another World Returns The Moon Sets and No Longer Risesongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Just read it, you won't say a word after reading it, the dual worldviews of different worlds and reading are so exciting, magic ➕ fantasy really has something to say, the writing and plot are all online, it is really good for a new book to be of this level [Send my heart][Send my heart][Adored]
291 Hehehehe, I Found a Wife Lecinoongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I wrote it. Please read it and evaluate it.
292 You Can Save the World Even If You Lose Your Memory Hard-Working and Brave Cat Masterongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I just signed a contract, I hope a teacher can give me some advice! ! ! (Bow (Actually, I'm a little embarrassed. There are many typos.
293 Origin of Immortal Monument Stones Rolling UphillEastern Fantasy1.1M Wordscompleted 1.1kReads6.7Score—Shelves
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The latest mortal flow, all Taoist friends are welcome to taste it
294 My Emotions Can Become Gods Angry NavoMystery59k Wordsongoing 13Reads—Score—Shelves
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The first book was written by me. Can you guys give me some advice? I beg you to comment [crying][crying][crying]
295 Hateful and Infatuated A Peerless Onion A470k Wordscompleted 163kReads9.6Score33.2kShelves
296 Thangka Ghost Record Flowingongoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Digging up treasures and folklore suspense! Using Thangka as a guide, he writes about the thousands of years of Sino-Tibetan entanglements. When Tashi kept secrets of the Tang Dynasty, he never fought against ghosts, but the greed that everyone has. The plot is compact and has no irritation, the Tibetan style is full of charm, and the twist in the ending directly touches people's hearts. The book is full of novels with your eyes closed!
297 After Ten Years of Hard Work, the Emperor Wants to Kill Me Gao Bailiu123k Wordsongoing 2Reads—Score—Shelves
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[Double Male Protagonists] + [Blackened Crazy Batch] + [Plot Pulling] + [Advance Reversal]. Suitable for readers who like complex plots and group plots
298 Evernight Siege You Poured Too Much JuiceSci-Fi & Apocalypse865k Wordsongoing 16Reads—Score—Shelves
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Yes, it's okay. 26 People have been here before. Currently, I only have my own account. I am autistic.
299 Crazy! Emperor Jianwen Returned from Hell At the Foot of Linli Mountaincompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I also asked if anyone was there [laughing] I was shouting at the top of my lungs.
300 Dawn Starry Night Love to Eat Glutinous CornSci-Fi & Apocalypse97k Wordsongoing 10Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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I am a 20-year-old novice writer and a college student. I have been imagining this book for four years. I hope to find friends who will recommend it. It will be a biography-realistic style and a chronicle of the future. I will just write some chapter reviews.