Throne of the Abyss Returns

A New Writer Has Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Can Anyone Comment on It?

I want to read a book similar to "The Legend of the Dragon King: The Smoke and Clouds Reverse the World". It was the first time I wrote 80,000 words, and then I tried my best to write 400,000 words. I also wrote towards the standard of 400,000 words. It was boring to be free at home. After all, I just finished the first semester of college.