Hear the Dao at Dawn, and You Can Die at Dusk

It has improved a lot compared to the previous book. At least the content is understandable. [Star] Although I still feel a little confused after reading so many chapters, I am not very clear about the direction of the story, and I still don't feel the contrast in strength. I also hope that the plot can be more innovative. Although it is no longer the old-fashioned routine of the system, there are actually some plots that seem to know the ending at a glance, and the protagonist is too smooth. I hope some twists and turns can be added, otherwise it will feel like the protagonist did nothing and then won. It is the kind of brainless that does not feel the protagonist is powerful. Some battle plots can be added, and some logical reasoning can be used to enrich the image of the protagonist. Now I feel that the protagonist is not very impressive, and the impression is very flat. As for giving five stars, there is nothing I can do if the author asks for it. I am asking for it. I don't care. This book is so well written and powerful. I can punch and kick it three times [star]. Finally, I wish this book will continue to be less bad and become more popular [top post]

Very beautiful👀, I hope you will continue to work hard.

I feel that Xingxiu is very advanced, but it is similar to Siming. The author is suspected of being a weird fairy reader. Please update it quickly, and try to update it 100 times a day. 😏

The look and feel is okay, but the character dialogue is a bit rough [thoughts]