I'm a New Writer. I've Just Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Could Someone Give It a Review? 萌新作家，第1次写满8万字，能不能有个人来评价下
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- 651 The Great Zhou’s Number One Riddle-Maker 大周第一谜语人 Xu Qing transmigrates to the Great Zhou dynasty and is judged by the Academy of Letters to have a first-grade wasted body, with blocked literary veins and no future in the Way of Letters. He accepts it. Wouldn’t it be nice to settle down as a teacher and coast through life? But then he realizes something is off He teaches the children to recite “Moonlight before my bed,” and the old scholar next door breaks through to the third tier on the spot, bawling as he says he has comprehended the Moonlig —Reads—Score—Shelves
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The Journey of Tianhen 天痕行
[Traditional Xuanhuan] [Exploration and Travel] [Heavenly Marks and Wonders] [Ensemble Cast and Friendship] [No System] [Coming of Age] [The World Unfolds Gradually] On the Tianhen Continent, humans and demons coexist, and the ancient world has left countless traces behind. Some traces endure through the ages, bearing powers and mysteries all their own. They are known as Heavenly Marks. Some spend their entire lives in pursuit of them, while others fight over them without end. But no matter how
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- 653 Global Heatwave: I Rake in the Stock Market and Rule Antarctica 全球高温：我收割股市，南极称王 [No cheating wives, no tragic bitterness, multiple women with no male lead] A heatwave strikes, plants wither, the Antarctic ice sheets melt, and sea levels rise by 70 meters! What do you do when there's no food? Head to the ocean for a free haul, using your storage space to collect 200 million tons of seafood! What do you do when there's no money to buy supplies? Rely on your memories to rake in hundreds of billions of dollars on the financial markets! What do you do when there aren't any girls 13.1kReads8.0Score907Shelves
- 654 The Hidden Scheme of Journey to the West 西游隐局 Most readers who interpret Journey to the West become absorbed in power plays, schemes, and dark conspiracies, twisting a timeless classic into a cold game of self-interest and losing sight of the original work's meaning and spirit. This book sets the record straight, dispelling the haze of conspiracy theories and returning to the essence of classical literature. Drawing on a wealth of sources and uncovering historical facts, it clears away layers of speculation to explore in depth the Chinese w 6Reads—Score—Shelves
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An Immortal Path Without Roots 无根仙途
A classic mortal cultivation story, with no System and no female lead, but featuring a golden finger: a world inside a cave abode that can speed up the growth of spirit herbs. The villains aren't dumbed down, and the characters are well developed. I hope you'll give it a read!
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- 656 Abandon the Gods 弃神。 [No System + not a saint + self-interest above all + satisfying read + invincible protagonist] Spiritual qi revival. Alien races invade the world, and the skies are about to collapse. This is an age of opportunity, because everyone has a chance to enter the realm of the extraordinary and gain power to rival the gods. But it’s also an age of despair, because human life is worth less than grass, and one misstep can mean falling into eternal darkness… Ning Yuan once saved hundreds of thousands of 168kReads7.2Score21.4kShelves
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Sign-In in the Underworld: The Mastermind Behind the Scenes 签到幽冥：幕后执棋人
He has his principles and cherishes life and emotion. To achieve his goals, he plans carefully and calculates every move. He likes solving problems in the most effortless and unexpected ways. He loathes trouble and relishes the thrill of “commanding from the tent and securing victory a thousand miles away.” He prefers to appear ordinary, revealing his true strength only at crucial moments. Armed with the Myriad Worlds Sign-in System, he is absolutely invincible among those of his rank, and his c
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The Lucky Witch of the Superpowered World 超能世界的幸运魔女
[Gender-Bender] Monsters invade, and humanity awakens. Xu Yang, an ordinary university student, has always dreamed of becoming a hero. When that dream finally comes true, he realizes things aren't so simple... “Why did I turn into a little girl?!” Fortunately, along with becoming a little girl, Xu Yang also gains mysterious powers, opening the door to the supernatural. On her journey of growth, she finds sincere companionship, and precious friends gather around her once more. Can Xu Yang protect
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Transmigrate to the Apocalypse, and I’ll Master Ten Thousand Arts 穿越末世，我自化万法
A plague that swept across all things shattered the order of civilization and brought about the apocalypse. Nine mighty figures emerged among humanity, founding nine great nations and establishing humanity’s last refuge. But the darkness never truly receded. Strange beings lurk in the shadows, coveting the human world at every moment. A train bound for humanity’s land of hope travels between heaven and earth. Everyone looked up in astonishment. Above the void, a figure in white danced in midair.
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- 660 Where in This World Is There No Green Mountain? 此身何处不青山 Qin Tian, 32, was a squad leader in the special forces. He earned commendations and was exceptionally capable. Honest and resilient, he was nevertheless somewhat unfamiliar with social conventions after spending so many years in the military. After leaving the service, he was assigned to an “unestablished position” due to a combination of local policy changes, limited openings being taken by others, and personal connections. Most of his fellow soldiers from the same cohort were successfully give 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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Chronicles of the Star Spirits 星灵幻录
A cultivator strengthens the body and nurtures the spirit, taking spiritual energy into oneself and controlling it. Those who attain the Primordial Origin take disciples; later they become Scholars, and those who reach mastery become teachers, then earn the title of Venerable. Advance to Ancestor, break through to King, condense the Emperor Realm, and reach the threshold before one may be called Emperor. Transcend the ordinary and attain sainthood; shed the spirit and become divine, and you will
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What?! The System Gave Me a Wife 惊！系统竟然送老婆
[Complete revised edition] [This story contains a lot of potentially triggering elements. Please read with care!!!] Two female leads | Both powerful | Rule-based horror | Infinite-loop survival | Ensemble cast Main pairing: Cen Qingli (top) × Su Qi'an (bottom) Genius, unhinged beauty × cool, aloof captain “Saving each other, with a sweet and thrilling romance!” Side pairing: Shen Ting (top) × Xiao Hanxue (bottom) (Other pairings are still undecided) “Two female leads, two male leads, man and wom
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This Is Bizarre, Am I Going Crazy? 离奇，我是不是疯了？
As a mournful orange-red glow shrouds the village, And the bitterest chill catches up with the setting sun, In the lonely dusk. Everything is over! And everything is just beginning! My new work is out! You're welcome to read it on Tomato Novel. I hope you enjoy it. Your support inspires me to write, and I'll do my best to tell every story well! (The protagonist won't die, no System, fast-paced, eerie fantasy)
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The Fruit of Justice 诛恶之果
Global Paranormal Activity: Comatose patients are mysteriously waking up one after another! Jiang Fan wakes up from a three-year coma, only to discover that his parents have vanished and his uncle has been murdered. Even more terrifying, it seems a guilty god, bound in chains, has been sealed inside him! A mysterious demon-hunting organization, a horrifying truth in a warehouse, a pitiful pair of twin sisters in a hospital… As Jiang Fan hunts demons one after another, he can't help but wonder w
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- 666 Gun Soul of Another World 异世枪魂 [Awakening + School Life + No System + Passionate Action] After transmigrating into a world of military strategy, while everyone else trains, I “dream.” The sinister force in my left hand stirs, and the Five Tigers Soul-Severing Spear rings out, yet the “Divine Church” brands me a disaster destined to bring about the end of the world? Zhao Chuan: Thanks for asking. I’m in another world, and I just came down from the immortal mountain. I hear you want to end the world? You’ll have to get past my 12Reads—Score—Shelves
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The Ward Boss Only Wants to Serve the People 坊主大人只想为民服务
Other people cultivate immortality by meditating, refining qi, and slaying demons for their treasures. Ye Guanqing cultivates by fixing public toilets, handing out coupons, and teaching the Eight Brocades. After failing the civil service exam five years in a row in his previous life, he transmigrated and was promptly parachuted in as the head of the shabbiest market town on the Canglan Continent. Faced with a Grade D market town on the verge of closure, dozens of freeloading rogue cultivators, a
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- 668 Chronicle of the Strange 照诡录 All-female ensemble | No romance | Alternate world | Ancient mystery cases and criminal investigation | Part episodic, part overarching plot In the Great Yan Dynasty, the capable rule, and women hold power. Three people died at a palace banquet. They died smiling. Their faces were split with grins when they died. No one dared investigate. The commandery princess, Shen Zhaoming, did. She gathered four extraordinary women: a cool-headed coroner, a talkative Daoist, a mute shadow guard, and a s 239Reads8.8Score172Shelves
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The Anomaly: The Dragon’s Awakening 异数，龙之初起
[Decisive and ruthless] [The Nine Dragons reunite] [An outlier rises] [Defies the Heavenly Dao] [A wildly satisfying tale of defying heaven] [Many divine beasts] [Ensemble cast of dragons] [A path to immortality against heaven] All dragonkind descend from the Ancestral Dragon. Only we, the Nine Dragons, were born at the very beginning. We are outliers, born to trample the rules! We scorn the Heavenly Dao. We are destined to be calamity. In the battle at the beginning of time, we defied the Heav
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Before Ascension to Immortality 成仙前
This book draws on personal experiences and reflections, blending the texture of real life into a world of immortal cultivation. There are no characters who coast to victory with an endless stream of power-ups. Instead, most are haunted by the sorrow of having no control over their own lives. All living beings are swept along by fate, yet every character shines within the pages of their own story. Every detail has been carefully polished, in the hope of offering you a unique reading experience.
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- 671 Oh No! I Seem to Have Become the Protagonist Everyone Wants to Win Over 糟糕！我似乎成了被攻略的主角 Oh no! I seem to have become the protagonist everyone is trying to win over —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I Can Hear Their Thoughts: I Roast the Fake Heiress into Submission 偷听心声：我靠吐槽完虐假千金
Qing Yanling made a living as an audiobook narrator, roasting melodramatic novels. One morning, she woke up inside the brainless rich-family novel she’d savaged the night before, as the “real heiress” who’d been switched at birth and, after returning home eighteen years later, was outshone in every way by the fake heiress. According to the original plot, she would be too weak to defend herself, framed by the fake heiress and ruined, then meet a miserable end on the street. Qing Yanling looked a
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Great Sage 2: Bodhi, the Three Pure Ones, Pangu's Death, and Resurrection 大圣传2：菩提三清死盘古复活
Pangu is about to be reborn. The Three Pure Ones, incarnations of Pangu, are drained of their power by him and die. Patriarch Bodhi falls into an eternal slumber for Wukong's sake... What will Sun Wukong do? Does this decaying world need to be reborn?
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The Fall Guy Actor 替罪演员
[Important notice: This story contains no romance or workplace relationship plotlines] Due to an incorrect System label, we would like to clarify that this is a story of psychological warfare and spy intrigue. Everyone is focused on their work, and there is no romance. (Note: All emotional displays in the story are acting strategies and portrayals of relational tension, serving the psychological battles and the deconstruction of the plot. They are not romantic.) [No couples · Not a wish-fulfillm
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- 675 The Villainous Senior Brother Just Wants to Keep a Low Profile, but the Heroine Won't Play by the Rules 反派师兄只想苟，女主不按套路走 Chen Yuze, the senior disciple of Xuanyun Peak in the Xuanxiao Sect, had been reborn with all his memories of his previous life intact. He knew full well that he was destined to be the villain. This time, he wanted no part in the entanglement between the male lead, Ye Chenhao, and the female lead, Zhang Qingyu. He was done being a stepping stone. All he wanted was to retreat into seclusion in the back hills of Xuanyun Peak and stay out of worldly affairs. He even wanted the entire peak to do the 7Reads6.6Score—Shelves
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Ace Detective Agency: Paranormal Case Files 王牌侦探事务所：灵异档案簿
Welcome to the Ace Detective Agency: we solve not puzzles, but the cost of human nature under the gaze of the abyss! There is no shallow face-slapping here, only evidence-based deductions and confrontations with the depths of human nature. We reject mindless golden fingers. Paying a price is the only currency for unraveling the uncanny. We reject low-IQ plot twists. Clues laid layer by layer will ultimately form a seamless chain of logic.
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I Transmigrated as Tang San, and Saving Xiao Wu Broke the Plot 穿越成唐三，救小舞后剧情崩了
A scholar who knows the future awakens within a useless martial soul. A warrior carrying the soul of another world struggles amid shattered glory. A saintess holding the script weaves her web beneath the shadows of the palace. They believe they are the players moving fate’s pieces. But they do not know that a far older path has already been laid out, waiting for every variable to fall into place. When history becomes the deepest fog and loved ones become strange shadows, they must find their ow
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Demon Slayer of the Frozen Abyss 寒渊诛魔
I'm pleased to recommend my new book, Dustblade Suppresses the Palace Gate. Old friends and new, come join us in a world of wuxia, where the imperial court stands tall and the rivers and lakes stretch far and wide. Ordinary people lead extraordinary lives. They pursue vengeance and justice with abandon, and fight for their homeland and family. Each person pushes forward with all their might for the wishes they hold dear.
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The Apocalypse of the Silent Time Ruins 时墟默示录
After both his parents died, programmer Zhou Mo grew increasingly withdrawn, drifting through life with nothing but their belongings and fragmented memories. One night, he suddenly sensed that something unseen was “watching” him. He was then swept into a bizarre murder case, and his investigation horrifically revealed that his parents' deaths had been a carefully planned sacrifice. At the end of his path to revenge, he was forced to face the truth about the world: the ancient guardians of Guixu
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Lord of the Divine Lords 神主之主
(Two male leads + all-male team + CP + supernatural powers + coming-of-age adventure) Ordinary teenager Shen Lu is attacked by a monster at eighteen, and from then on, his fate spirals out of control. A mysterious organization tells him: You're the heir to the Moon God Deer. You must gather the five knights scattered across the human world and fight the “Twilight,” which seeks to destroy the world. Shen Lu: “...Can I go home and do my homework?” “Of course... not!” His team is a motley crew: Ton
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Origin Ruins 元墟
When the ashes of forty-three people returned to the village, the cultivation seats they had traded their lives for already had new owners. Shen Wuchen refused to accept it. Right under the noses of the county office and the great families, he stole back the path to immortality. In this world, where the number of immortal seats is fixed and cultivation is registered, he became the “Seat Thief” everyone wanted dead. But when seven chains of the Ruins locked into the Inner Ruins, he finally und
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A Madman's Fate 癫人命
[The uncanny + mind-bending suspense + horror + fictional setting + no System] At the end of that rainy night, Chen Xiu gazes at the unfamiliar world before him. He discovers that the curses have taken everything from him, even himself. Curses and uncanny horrors run rampant before his eyes, while madness and fear relentlessly batter his heart. It says: “Having witnessed what the curse can do, you must also suffer its gifts.” It says: “The death curse descends upon past and present, twisting all
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My Girlfriend Cheated on Me in the Worst Way 我被女友戴了个超级大绿帽子
My Girlfriend Cheated on Me Big Time
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Word of Honor: Between the Rivers and Lakes 山河令：江湖之间
[A companion story to Word of Honor | Wen Kexing | Zhou Zishu | Modern setting | Gu Xiang | Cao Weining] Also known as A Journey Through the Mortal Jianghu In the bustling modern metropolis of City A, Zhou Zishu was once a key member of Tian Chuang, a fairly large security company. On the surface, the company took on all kinds of legitimate security work. Behind the scenes, however, it had countless ties to shady forces. After seeing the dark dealings going on inside the company, an exhausted
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I Became Invincible After Maxing Out Every Stat 我，全修后无敌了
[Reading Guide] This is a slow-paced ensemble coming-of-age story with a CP. Not a traditional cultivation novel. The world has evolved from a matriarchal society into its present form. Liking someone does not mean being in love. Love encompasses many kinds of intimate bonds. No harem or love triangle, only one CP, with a clear romance arc. [Synopsis] Born into this world from the womb, Song Xichen enters the path of cultivation by a twist of fate. The path of cultivation here is unlike any othe
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Chill of the Sword Qi 剑气寒
The protagonist has no golden finger and did not transmigrate. This is a story about the sword and love, the Dao and her. Trapped in one prison of fate after another, caught between the human way and the heavenly way, he struggles to break free. He grows through struggle, holds fast as he grows, and gradually comes to understand the truth of the human heart and the universe. Immortality may be wonderful, but the mysteries of the Dao are endless; Sword energy may be fierce, but it cannot sever ev
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Starlight Shining Through the Cold Night 星辉映彻寒夜
This is a story about two very different souls drawing closer over the long years, warming one another and growing together. Lin Zhixia, a top student from a poor family, is outwardly cold and unyielding. Gu Ye Han, a top student from a wealthy family, is outwardly perfect but lonely inside. From their first clash in middle school, to understanding each other in high school, to the deep bonds they form in college, they face life's hardships with intelligence and perseverance and banish their inn
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Infinite Mysteries 无限诡秘
YES or NO? Is this an infinite world or a mysterious world? I have no idea... The Main God’s space. I choose... Sequence 9 player…
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The Path of Water Subjugation 镇水道途
The primordial Dao's energy breaks through its dams, and the Water-Taming Microrealm is annihilated. Cang Xuan flees with half a Water-Taming Stele, driven onward at every turn by the devastation of a chaotic age. Cornered with no way out, he creates a new cultivation method and embarks on a path to guide the floods back to the Dao.
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Rule Horror: Gaining Two Randomly Growing Talents 规则怪谈：获得双随机成长性天赋
[No Female Lead] [Smart Protagonist] [Skills Are All Concept-Level] [Livestreaming] From the start, Lin Feng gained two random skills. He could improve his strength by refreshing them, rerolling random talents ranging from D-rank to SSS-rank. His potential was sky-high, but so was the chance of getting stuck with something terrible. Starting with nothing but a steamed bun, how could he clear high-difficulty instances? Uncover the truth hidden behind the instances. And solve the mystery of his ow
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- 691 Heaven-Gifted Divine Eyes, Enviable to All 天赐神瞳，谁也妒不得 At twenty-two, Li Shihan had the ability to see through things. But after using it to make money twice as a child, he watched both his grandparents pass away one after another. Convinced that his ability carried a “curse”, that profiting from it would bring calamity upon his loved ones, he treaded carefully. In the Year of the Fire Horse, the competitive spirit of his classmates stirred the desire buried in his heart, and he cautiously began to test the waters: buying lottery tickets, dabbling i —Reads—Score—Shelves
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It Wasn’t a Dream: Motherland, Let’s Cultivate Immortality Together 原来不是梦：祖国，咱们一起修仙
When the cultivation world mocked her as a rootless weed, the voice of her motherland reached across time and space: “Fellow countrywoman, we’re bringing you home.” A young woman carrying the wisdom of Chinese technology starts her cultivation journey anew in another world. The ancient legacy she gives back will become the spark that keeps a civilization alive. As both worlds face peril, aid spanning the stars and the bond she shares with her peerless cultivation partner together write a legend
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- 693 The Sixteen Sons of Heaven’s Dao 天道十六子 The Sixteen Children of Heaven’s Will —Reads—Score—Shelves
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The Fire of Falling Stars: Liuli Bridge Academy 星陨之火：琉璃桥学院
[Wits and Strategy] [Urban Superpowers] [Sharp-Tongued System] [Eastern Fantasy] [Behind-the-Scenes Protagonist] In the age of crystal technology, Lin Fan draws the Sin of Pride superpower from the start, suffering unbearable agony. Yet the whole world thinks he has a cheat code for life. A sharp-tongued spirit helps Lin Fan activate the Star Map System. He expects to soar from the start, only for a beautiful upperclasswoman to see right through him at a glance, while powerful figures from sever
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The Sword's True Spirit 剑之本灵
(No System, just classic cultivation power fantasy) Chen Fanyu was an ordinary sophomore at Xiali University. By chance, a car accident sent him through a wormhole to transmigrate into the Chen family, a once-prosperous clan now fallen on hard times in the True Spirit Continent. The Chen family had once been one of the four great clans of the Lingwu Dynasty. Chen Fanyu's father, Chen Tian, possessed a third-grade Earth-level Fire Bear spirit and served as the dynasty's General of Kaifeng. But th
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Rift in Space-Time: An Alien Mission 时空裂隙：异星使命
In a brand-new era, human nature remains unfathomable. Disasters descend from the skies, and monsters attack. The protagonists transmigrate through a spatial gateway into another world, where they battle demons and monsters, shoulder a great mission, and strive to find their way home!
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- 697 High Martial: I Can Copy Talent Traits 高武：我能复制天赋词条 Jiang Yuan transmigrates to a high-martial world, where he becomes a second-year student at a martial arts high school. After a sudden upheaval leaves his family in debt and his future uncertain, he despairs over what lies ahead. Then he discovers that the world looks completely different to him than it does to everyone else. Strange [traits] hover over people’s heads, representing their qualities or abilities! His homeroom teacher, Old Wang, has [Heartfelt Advice]; a classmate has [Bull’s Stren 6Reads—Score—Shelves
- 698 The Stone Gambling Tournament 赌石大赛 Jade Gambling Tournament 3Reads—Score—Shelves
- 699 Global Mutation: Beauty, I'm a Daoist 全球异变，美女我是道士啊 [Reborn] [Apocalypse] [Taoist System] [Multiple Female Leads] [Invincible Power Fantasy] Lin Fan, an ordinary Taoist priest, watched his younger sister die before his eyes during the bloody battle against the global apocalypse. On the brink of death, he chose to be reborn three hours before the mutations began! In this life, his Taoist Arts System awakened early. With the Golden Light Spell, Immobilizing Talismans, Five Thunder Righteous Arts, and all manner of Taoist magic at his fingertips, he —Reads—Score—Shelves
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About Me Becoming a Conceptual God in an Elite Unit 关于我在王牌部队当概念神这件事
[Passionate] + [Superpowers] [Lighthearted] + [Modern] + [War] + [No Mindless Wish Fulfillment] + [Plot] Human genes awaken, and superpowered people begin to emerge across Earth. After a thousand years of development, they play a vital role in modern warfare. Nations establish superpowered forces and develop complete systems for their branches and advancement. The male lead, Ji Tai'an, awakens the power of rules at birth, commonly known as a “conceptual god.” Since this power refreshes at random
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