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A New Writer Has Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Can Anyone Comment on It?

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I want to read a book similar to "The Legend of the Dragon King: The Smoke and Clouds Reverse the World". It was the first time I wrote 80,000 words, and then I tried my best to write 400,000 words. I also wrote towards the standard of 400,000 words. It was boring to be free at home. After all, I just finished the first semester of college.

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166 Jidao Points: Starting from the Era of Killing and Piercing the High Martial Arts The Heart Is Silent at the Bottom of the SeaUrban599k WordsCompleted 28Reads—Score—Shelves
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I'll push some of my own corny plots, and then push some really good ones to compensate everyone.
167 As a Scholar, It Makes Sense for Me to Be Invincible, Right? Sweet Potato MonsterMartial Arts724k WordsCompleted 22.9kReads8.2Score1.4kShelves
167 The Spiritual Energy Is Revived, I Will Slay Demons for the Country Seaweed Soup Is My FavoriteUrban152k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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Can everyone read this book? I think the brainstorming is okay. It starts with a strong gimmick, and then slowly tells the story. Let's learn from each other.
168 Just Give Me a Bad Review, Why Are You Playing This Game? Four Pounds of Pork RibsUrban1.1M WordsCompleted 26kReads8.8Score2.2kShelves
168 After Being Spoiled by My Sweetheart, I Restarted My Life Three Times One Sirui88k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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Little Mengxin, system, I advise you to be kind, if you continue BEing I will tear you down!
168 You Kidnapped a Little Wife with a Bottle of Soda? Put on the ShenggeUrban371k WordsOngoing 1.2kReads5.8Score211Shelves
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A super sweet little sweet story about two-way redemption. Is there any baby who would like to read it [Sending Hearts]
169 King: I Was Operating Randomly and the Opponent Was Crazy About It. Discord Fool PillSports463k WordsCompleted 16.7kReads9.3Score1.5kShelves
169 Romance in the Countryside Under the Moonlight Bamboo Heart Reflects SnowModern Romance119k WordsCompleted 15.9kReads8.8Score580Shelves
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If you like realism, check it out. It's adapted from a true story and see if the characters touch you!
169 Minecraft Unity MC Holmes345k WordsOngoing 99Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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Can you help me?
169 After Surviving for Ten Years, the System Came to Recognize the Master. Lonely ImmortalEastern Fantasy726k WordsCompleted 1Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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It's 80,000 words and I still haven't recommended it. Please give me a review! [Working on draft]
170 King: You Are Saying That My Wife Is the Mastermind! Orphan Chick Eating Duck FeetSports357k WordsCompleted 1.1kReads6.9Score—Shelves
170 Mo Xian Pursues His Wife: Rebirth of Sadomasochism, Defying the Will of Heaven to Find His Wife Yi WenqingFantastical Romance268k WordsCompleted 3Reads—Score—Shelves
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Come and comment. If you have any questions, please give me a like first and wait for my reply.
170 I'm a Supporting Actress and I'll Just Flip the Table Lonely Immortal13k WordsCompleted —Reads8.5Score—Shelves
171 The Opening Song "Calories", the Judges Asked Me to Get Out Not Familiar, I Ate ItUrban670k WordsCompleted 10kReads8.1Score664Shelves
171 The Ascetic God Was Actually Broken. Yi WenqingFantastical Romance399k WordsCompleted 48Reads8.6Score—Shelves
171 Chinese Gods Return Lonely Immortal7k WordsCompleted 3Reads8.4Score—Shelves
172 King: the Class Teacher Is Actually a Game Anchor? Discord Fool PillSports740k WordsCompleted 9kReads8.9Score1kShelves
172 Oops! My Hand Slipped Again! Forgotten River Lonely BoatUrban182k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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The social animal slipped and fell out of the Creator System, and his teammates were all weird: chatty cell phones, eye-rolling figures, old guns that were inaccurate, and shared bicycles that chased cats! It's so fun every day, but I can't help it!
172 After Rebirth, I Will Kill the Scumbag Emperor Lonely ImmortalAncient Romance22k WordsCompleted —Reads8.6Score—Shelves
173 The End of the World: There Is an Evil God Inside Me KiyonozawaEastern Fantasy381k WordsCompleted 232Reads—Score—Shelves
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It's the first time I've written 80,000 words. It's also the first time I've written more than 200,000 words. It's almost 300,000 words. Have you read my book? Please support me.
173 Sword Master in Troubled Times Murong DandanEastern Fantasy521k WordsCompleted 8Reads—Score—Shelves
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This is my first book, the others are basically good
173 Little Talisman Maker Asia SevenCultivation85k WordsCompleted 5Reads—Score—Shelves
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The author should update soon. It's a rare and good book.
174 Journey to the Warring States Period Mulinsen 444Historical3.0M WordsCompleted 79Reads6.4Score—Shelves
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We haven't signed the contract yet, so I can only ask you to be kind and click on the homepage to take a look [crying] The novel is set in Japan's Warring States Period, telling the story of a young man's rise after his country was destroyed and his family was destroyed. At present, I have written 30,000 words, and several chapters have been updated regularly. I can guarantee a stable output of one chapter every day. Please support me! [Cry][cry][cry]
174 The Lone Walker Taming the Beast Changhua Story HallEastern Fantasy1.5M WordsOngoing 2.8kReads6.2Score198Shelves
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New author, please give me a thumbs up
174 Nine-Character Heavenly Book Useless as a ScholarEastern Fantasy1.0M WordsCompleted 45Reads7.4Score—Shelves
175 Little Expert in Retreat in the Fairy World Fruity Milk TeaEastern Fantasy4.4M WordsOngoing 387.1kReads8.5Score36.9kShelves
175 Tomb Robbery: the Wu Family's Little Rose Is as Hot as the Sun. Autumn Moon Is AwayMystery267k WordsCompleted 1.9kReads—Score315Shelves
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Please save the children, and you can also comment on each other's concerns.
176 I Just Became the Ancestor of the Hehuan Sect. Do You Think This Is a City? Elegant Ye FengUrban112k WordsOngoing 1Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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It's a pity that I can't read the novel written by the author.
176 I Promise You Three Thousand Songs of Music Swift 19Modern Romance90k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Please watch [crying], it will be really good after chapter 30
177 Just Watch, Don't Click In! Midnight Glass WUrban123k WordsOngoing 2.2kReads5.8Score100Shelves
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Cherish every person who clicks in with joy. Even if there is only one. (It's this novel, not me)
177 Forced to Practice Immortality: My Fishing Rod Is an Immortal Weapon Chu XiaoheiEastern Fantasy354k WordsOngoing 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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Give yourself a push.
178 At the End of Time, There Are Kpis That Have Not Closed the Loop Yet Little Writer TutuUrban219k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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It's really sad. I hope everyone can lend a helping hand and help each other!
178 Centenary Ceremony: the Incomplete Journey Home Kyle MostEastern Fantasy244k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Please leave comments and reviews, please! [Blowing kiss]
179 The Bones of the Eclipse God Stare for a WhileEastern Fantasy136k WordsCompleted 8Reads—Score—Shelves
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I also have a good book
179 Rebirth of Dayong Kinoshita SurabayaEastern Fantasy175k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I just entered the verification process today and I'm super panicked. Let's see what everyone thinks.
180 Heaven and Man Lead Zuo WangtianEastern Fantasy184k WordsOngoing 2Reads7.1Score—Shelves
180 Shishi The Sword Forest Is in the SkyUrban232k WordsOngoing 2Reads—Score—Shelves
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Regardless of whether anyone reads it or not, I have to finish writing it. The current progress is about 2%.
181 Science Fiction Notes Toilet Water Big Big KingUrban151k WordsOngoing 17Reads—Score—Shelves
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Brand new setting, original ideas, I hope you can appreciate it [Sending my heart]
182 After the Family Was Wiped Out, Grandma Took Me to Kill the World of Immortality Author Liu XingxingEastern Fantasy862k WordsCompleted 342Reads8.8Score—Shelves
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I want to see if I am 1 point, who can help me [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]
182 Eight Years as Bait, I Will Be Lucky When I Meet You YlingxiModern Romance168k WordsOngoing 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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New book, new author, brothers and sisters, please help give me some traffic [love]
183 I'm Invincible at the Beginning, Please Kill Me. Author Liu XingxingEastern Fantasy1.4M WordsCompleted —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
183 Beginning Immortality: from Immortal Cultivation to Scientific and Technological Civilization Intention 40Eastern Fantasy642k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Really cute new guy shivering
184 I Have a Small Chaotic World Yuan Kun Who Loves Grilled TomatoesUrban520k WordsCompleted 293Reads8.1Score—Shelves
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An accident caused Hong Mengzhu to transform into the male protagonist's Dantian. The male protagonist becomes a being beyond the Holy Body.
184 Seven Stars Chivalry Record Haotian SwordUrban559k WordsCompleted 46Reads—Score—Shelves
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Jin Yong's Seven Heroes are together, everyone is welcome to come and take a look
185 Create the Battle of Songhu, Where All Players on the Internet Will Fight to the Death The Posture of a Good GeneralUrban464k WordsCompleted 2.4kReads8.4Score316Shelves
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This is my favorite book to read. I couldn't even get over it after reading chapters 1-35. But comrades are still not as miserable as me. Not many people read my 63,000-word novel! ! ! There is a book on the homepage called Meiwai Mist. I am a first-year student in junior high school. This novel is the longest novel I have written in my first-year junior high school career. I hope my brothers and sisters can encourage me [blowing kiss]
185 Fanzhou Goes to Jail Fellow Taoist, Take the First StepMystery129k WordsOngoing 3Reads—Score—Shelves
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Newbie's work, if you are interested, please support it. Thank you.
186 After Sleeping for Thousands of Years, the Hongmeng Dao Body Awakens at the Beginning The Very Serious Di YuanEastern Fantasy153k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I have been a fan of cultivating immortals since I was a child, especially Dou Po! After finishing Dou Po, I have never been able to find a novel that can replace it. After reading about cultivating immortals for so many years, I finally decided to write a novel of cultivating immortals by myself. It is being serialized and everyone is welcome to discuss it.
187 The Sword Is Cold Listen to the Snow in the SkyEastern Fantasy2.5M WordsOngoing 2.4kReads7.2Score222Shelves
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There are already 500,000 words, and the score is not enough for 50 people to rate it. Who is worse than me? But I have dozens of book friends who accompany me all the way, catching up on updates every day, and I am still very content, hahaha [smirk] [snicker].
187 Ancestor of the Whole Family: a Tianhu Family Appears at the Beginning of D Attack Lion HeadEastern Fantasy143k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Listen to everyone's opinions, family cultivation and Hex.
187 After Nine Years of Trading with Mortals, I Saved Enough Capital to Be Reborn Ultraman PattonUrban122k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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The first book I wrote was, I think, My Tenant.