The Lone Walker Taming the Beast

In fact, this book is very well written, but it is not suitable for the market here. One is that the male protagonist is taciturn in character and values ​​love and righteousness, but he keeps it in his heart and does not speak it out loud, so he takes the lone wolf route, but the rhythm is slow and hot. Upgrades are done step by step. There are no other tricks except noble people. This is the growth flow. The combination of the two settings is even slower, and you need to be patient to read it. This will actually make it difficult to retain the readers in front of you. However, getting along with the pet beasts is a big highlight. Both Hui and Rin are very cute. This is actually more of the cuteness that female fans can get, but the whole article is written in the way of male fans~ But there are no big problems with your writing style and plot logic. Keep up the good work.

I have read eighty-nine chapters so far, and it's okay. The character creation and the plot are okay. Because this platform is free, I don't have very high requirements. This book is about a taciturn protagonist and a bloody mouse who go all the way, entering the sect, the outer courtyard and the inner gate, and walking up step by step. There are friends and teachers. If you want to write a suggestion seriously and rate it according to strict standards, the following is the evaluation. The writing is a 6, which is passable. There are not too many stupid words, nor does it reveal low IQ. The problem is that the words overlap very much. For example, I can't count how often Elder Qin's words about the masters chosen by three gray mice in history appear. Senior Sister Lin Wan's words of concern are very, very repetitive, and everyone's lines appear back and forth. The character creation is rated 7. The difference between the protagonist and supporting characters can be seen, which is okay. The supporting characters are too superficial, which makes them uncomfortable, ridiculed, and then they die. There are no clever traps, just constant fighting. The overlap of the villains is exactly the same, there is no personality distinction. I only give it a 5 for the plot. There are many people who help the protagonist, and there is no backstabbing. For example, 70% of the people help the protagonist, and 30% are unhappy. The people who helped him also had very similar personalities. The audience cannot see the difference in their personalities. The plot is very repetitive, with the protagonist being beaten and injured along the way and then fighting back in danger. Then the villain jumps and the protagonist kills the villain. I don't need to read the follow-up to know it will be the same bowl of soup. Later, I had two pets and three pets, but I was hurt along the way and grew up. I feel hurt in every chapter. I admired it at first, but then I got bored and didn't have any fluctuations. It's, oh, injured again, oh, upgraded again. The audience has no sense of expectation, can't see any new plot, and has not carefully planned the outline. It's just that the frame is set and not carefully polished. This article is supposed to have no heroine, but Senior Sister Lin Wan obviously plays the role of a heroine. To be honest, the male videos she portrays are beyond comparison. If we don't know the emotional line, it would be better if we get together near the end. If it weren't for her, I might have to write a heroine with a lot of resources or no heroine at all. Another suggestion is that the name and introduction should be attractive. Great masters can write books in a simple way, but the author's book title and introduction are too simple. Others don't like to click in. The writing style of this book surpasses most tomato novels, but why is it not rated highly? First of all, the positioning is not precise. If it is a male video, Tomato should be a little bit fun. Most of the audience are people who are not so happy in real life. If the male protagonist in the novel is constantly injured and bleeding, they will feel that life is already so difficult, and they will stop reading about the protagonist who is having such a hard time. If it is a Tomato Girl video, then you should focus on writing about bonds, friends, and teachers. To be honest, this book is written in the style of a male author, with some influences from a female author. A cute animal pet, with caring friends and the love of teachers. Girls don't like that much blood and gore either, so I totally understand why this book got a low rating. In conclusion, there are many problems, but it can be read.

Very good, less nonsense, not so many bells and whistles, just getting stronger step by step, and the process is also reflected. It feels like I have found a treasure when I read it for the first time. However, the part about saving Zhou Yuan and the spiritual stone later felt a bit useless. Please change it as soon as possible. Don't delay this good book.

First of all, this book still deserves a five-star support. However, for those of you who want to read this book, the early part of this book is very cool. There is no plot of killing everyone. Instead, the protagonist and the beast are often injured. I sigh every time I see this (I don't know if it's because I'm getting older and can't watch this kind of thing, which makes me feel depressed). Then, I personally feel that the label of "lone wolf" and "cold-blooded" in this book should be considered. I feel that the protagonist is not such a person. Some people who read it based on the label may give negative reviews, and this situation can be avoided in advance. At present, this book is not suitable for me, and it may have something to do with my recent mentality. I have decided to put it on the bookshelf for now and wait for a while before reading it.

It is rare to see a high-quality fantasy that focuses on dragon-taming alone. It is different from the routine stories of teaming up to open a harem. The protagonist travels all over the mountains and rivers alone, tames the dragons with his own will, and walks out on his own dragon-taming road. The character creation is particularly brilliant. The protagonist is calm and has a bottom line, and he is decisive but gentle in killing. Each dragon has an independent personality and past, and the symbiotic bond is particularly appealing. Secret realm exploration, cross-domain battles, and bloodline duels progress step by step. The combat power system is stable and will not collapse. The foreshadowing is naturally not abrupt, and conflicts will not be forcibly created to abuse the master. The writing is smooth and refreshing, and the foreshadowing is cleverly laid out. The more you read, the more you can feel the loneliness and magnificence of walking alone. I stayed up late to catch up on the current chapters and still have a lot to learn. I sincerely recommend it to readers who like the dragon-fighting and solo genres, and wait for more updates from the author!

The plot concept is very novel, and the pace is indeed slower in the front, but generally the early stage is the development stage, which is understandable. It gets better and better as you go to the back, especially the protagonist who controls the beast to overcome the tribulation, he is so handsome! Come on author! [Laugh]

The writing is quite good, and some chapters are indeed written with a passionate feel. It's just that the details are somewhat repetitive, and some words are used repeatedly. All in all, this is a good book among beast-controlling novels. Keep writing and try not to finish it badly.

Very good, not a pure novel. When you read this book, it feels like you have walked with the protagonist all the way he has walked. It has a feeling of cultivating a system. Watching them work hard will also give you a sense of accomplishment. It is slow, no CP and no system.

It looks good so far, there are no surprises. I will reward Lao Da with a five-star [sending my heart] (Damn it, why is it that school starts on the 2nd and there is no holiday for New Year's Day [crying] [crying] Lao Da, I will come back and continue to catch up on updates!!! Tonic medicine abandons books and stops updating!! [Crying] [crying])

[Cool] [Cool] [Cool] The author has written the first chapter very well. The writing style is delicate, the psychological description is accurate, and the article is very high-quality. It is a good book suitable for slow reading. It is a high-quality book that will be ordered by many. The mood swings are very strong. It's a very good book!

I have read a few chapters, and the overall feeling is very good. It is probably the feeling of "although life is changing, but you are still by my side". It is generally more daily-oriented and has the beauty of ordinary life. Anyway, I quite like it. Of course, if the author can improve the description of details, I will continue reading.

There is a problem. I looked too quickly. Didn't I say before that I could escape with my master? It seems that I have been escaping all the time. Can't you hide underground with me when you are in danger? There are also sects. It is more like a management organization than a sect, responsible for issuing tasks, receiving tasks, and checking tasks, but there is nothing else. Oh, there may be a basic guarantee. Is the entire sect supported by profits? With the inner and outer sects competing like this, how could there be any sect friendship? For most disciples, the sect is just a platform along the way, and the rest is what I have worked hard to achieve. Then you won't have too many unnecessary thoughts when you leave. Under such circumstances, if one day the sect really faced annihilation, it would make sense for most of the disciples to turn around and run away. Even if you write that they risked their lives for the sect, it would be extremely ridiculous.

It's okay. The rhythm and other aspects are pretty good. Author, can you clear up the class segmentation at the end of the first picture? In the next few pictures, I also see Xuanpin's It's very messy. There are some extra plots inexplicably. I don't know if it's more or less. Maybe the author didn't write it, or maybe it didn't pass the review. It just looks very messy.

The whole book is very interesting, but is there a female protagonist?

In addition to controlling the beasts and feeding them back, pigs' feet can't be cultivated on their own?

Cheers to the author who is worth reading💪

I would like to ask if there is a female protagonist in this book [Thinking]

Is the frequency of injuries too high?

When will the second pet beast come out?

I read the first few chapters and found the book to be very good, but I'm very impetuous and don't like reading slow-paced books.

It's pretty good. It's about the bond of the beast, talking about character, no academy, no system, no golden fingers. The setting is that any beast can evolve all the time. Don't blindly pile up beasts. There are only 2 of them at the moment.

It's good to read, I love to read it, I like to read it. It's not a cool novel, but I can see the silence step by step towards the peak. It's written in big letters very well.

A relatively new story, interesting and interesting

If you have any suggestions, please put them forward! Thank you everyone!

Come on, it looks great!

That's pretty good. Come on, author, don't lose sight of it.

In the early stage, there is indeed a lot of mortals, and there are not many names for the beasts. I hope there will be surprises later.

The story is novel and interesting, and the animals are full of spirituality. I really don't understand why novels like this are not popular🔥

The pace is not fast, the main character has a steady development flow, it is worth reading, and the author's writing style is also good.

At present, it seems to be okay. It is not the kind of beast-controlling novel that relies on the system for everything and installs B. This is the type that slowly rises from the bottom and competes for resources. You can take a look.