A New Writer Has Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Can Anyone Comment on It?
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I want to read a book similar to "The Legend of the Dragon King: The Smoke and Clouds Reverse the World". It was the first time I wrote 80,000 words, and then I tried my best to write 400,000 words. I also wrote towards the standard of 400,000 words. It was boring to be free at home. After all, I just finished the first semester of college.
The Qingshui novel I wrote, if you like funny daily life, you can read it [Flowing Kiss][Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy] "The Emperor Meets Genius Brother-in-Law in Time Travel" Novel Introduction One-sentence synopsis When a doctor of economics traveled through time and became an emperor, he found that his brother-in-law was an ancient business genius whose talent overwhelmed modern knowledge - so in the court there were monarchs and ministers, but in private it was a daily life of "brother-in-law dissatisfaction" and "genius being funny". Suitable for readers · ✅ Like relaxed and humorous ancient sayings, tired of bitter feuds and deep palace fights · ✅ Love the protagonist with online IQ, enjoy the refreshing feeling of genius crushing · ✅ Love the warm family daily life, longing for the happiness of flying around, · ✅ Curiosity The collision of ancient and modern thinking, happy to see the "acclimatization" of modern knowledge Ultimate theme Even if you travel through time and become an emperor, even if your talent is astonishing - the most precious thing will always be a home with bright lights and those people who allow you to sleep peacefully until the sun rises. --- One-sentence recommendation: If the machinations of "Nirvana in Fire" meet the daily life of "Family with Children", and then mixed with the genius comedy of "The Big Bang Theory" - this is a wonderful story that will make you smile and warm your heart. Core Highlights 1. Contrast and Cute CP: The Emperor's Brother-in-law vs. The Genius Brother-in-law · Shen Yu (Emperor): A doctor of modern economics traveled through time and wanted to rely on knowledge to crush the ancients, but he was hit by dimensionality reduction · Lin Wensong (brother-in-law): The famous "prodigal son" in the capital, but in fact he is a genius who counts accounts like breathing and does business like a game · Daily painting style: · The emperor stayed up late to calculate the accounts that he couldn't figure out, and the brother-in-law finished it in three days and even drew an Excel chart. · The emperor competed in horse riding and archery, and his brother-in-law performed "I'm the best, I pretend to be stupid, but the emperor is happy" · The emperor broke his defense privately: "I have been studying hard for more than ten years, why should he know it with just one glance?!" 2. Time-traveling couple: modern soul mates in the palace · Lin Xiaoxiao (Jing Guifei): An agricultural researcher traveled through time, the emperor's only confidant · Emotional line: Two time-travelers fight side by side, guarding modern equal love under the rules of the palace · Famous scene: The emperor asked the concubine to "take care of the concubines", and the concubine smiled and asked: "Do you want me to help you arrange a bed?" 3. The atmosphere of the Lin family: chickens and dogs are jumping around, but warm and healing · Strict father Lin Shilang: a serious veteran in the court, chasing his son with a feather duster when he comes home · Tiger mother Mrs. Qian: scolding her son for being a prodigal while secretly stuffing money · Gentle aunt: always saying "Song'er is happy" with red circles in her eyes · A family: quarreling but full of love, which makes the cold-faced emperor so envious that he can't help but love him. Main story line Volume 1: The dude turned out to be a genius · Lin Wensong became famous for "paying three thousand taels for the seeds", but in fact he secretly promoted agricultural cooperatives · The emperor accidentally discovered his amazing account book talent, and started the cycle of "dissatisfaction-testing-really fragrant" · The brother-in-law finished the work of the household department in five days, leaving twenty-five days to eat, drink and have fun Volume 2: The situation in the south of the Yangtze River and the feelings of family and country · The emperor's southern tour led his brother-in-law to check the accounts, and the assassination exposed Lin Wensong's hidden martial arts · Salt tax reform, disaster relief and reconstruction, and business geniuses made the treasury a lot of money · Behind the bloody rain in Yangzhou, there is the deep calculation and modern ethical struggle of the emperor. Volume 3: The world of fireworks and the long flow of water · Lin Wensong meets Su Wan, a confused embroiderer, and the whole Lin family assists in the "silly son chasing his wife" · The "experimental workshop" is opened, the waterwheel spinning machine is improved, and the genius's ideal is more than making money · The emperor lives in the Lin family incognito, sleeping until midnight: "It turns out this is the taste of home" Features of the work ① Anti-conventional tactics · The emperor does not fight in the palace, but is busy competing with his brother-in-law to see who is smarter · The imperial concubine did not compete for favor, and she and the emperor discussed "respect issues" like a modern couple · The plot is not dark, and there is homely humor and warmth ② Intellectual cross-server chat · Emperor: "Who taught you this cooperative system?" · Brother-in-law: "Isn't it common sense to think about bank drafts and water transportation shares?" · (The emperor's inner OS: I read my Ph. D. In economics in vain!) ③ The collision of ancient and modern laughter · The ancient Lin Wensong drew histograms and flow charts without any teachers · The modern man Shen Yu was crushed by the ancient talent and doubted his life · The two-time travel couple used the secret code of "takeaway" and "property fee" to connect ④ The core of family warmth · No matter how powerful the genius is, he will still be chased and beaten by his father when he returns home · No matter how majestic the emperor is, he will envy other people's braised pork · The core of the story: Talent can amaze the times, but warmth is where the world belongs.
Under the Nine Heavens, the four realms run parallel. The Lingshan Sect in the West respects the Buddha, emphasizing understanding one's mind and nature, and helping oneself and others; the Valley of Ten Thousand Demons in the Southern Wilderness transforms into a body and refines the body, believing that the weak can eat the strong, and all things have animism; the Moyuan Palace in Beiming cultivates evil spirits and refines souls, pursuing the ultimate in power, and doing whatever one wants; the Qingyun Taoism in the central region establishes a sect based on "cultivation", adhering to the unity of nature and man, and pursuing immortality. Five-year-old Yun Chen grew up in an ordinary town under the jurisdiction of Qingyun Taoism. A bizarre dream allowed him to glimpse the mystery of spiritual energy circulation, and he planted the seeds of spiritual practice in his heart. He doesn't know that his birth involves the secrets of the four realms, and the path of cultivation he chooses will eventually become the key to stirring up troubles in the four realms.
I am a novice writer, hoping to improve my writing skills and describe a novel world of my own by writing books. I hope that old bookworms can give me more suggestions #fantasy. I just signed up for the first book and recommended it. The second book is a related subject with more powerful writing skills, so you can learn from it.
Writing novels is really cheap nowadays. No one will read the hard work of writing, and you can't make any money. Driving screws is not so rough and hard work.
The first book I wrote, Eastern Fantasy Cthulhu, is a new genre that I have created. It is generally based on fantasy. Please read it. If you have any suggestions, I will revise it immediately. It currently has 60,000 words.
A new book, no system, no heroine, and a bit of a trailblazer at the end. The protagonist basically works his way up step by step. His qualifications are above average, and he doesn't have particularly big opportunities.
I am a 20-year-old novice writer and a college student. I have been imagining this book for four years. I hope to find friends who will recommend it. It will be a biography-realistic style and a chronicle of the future. I will just write some chapter reviews.
[OK] Cultivation is a scam, counterattack and slap in the face is the last word. You won't know if you don't look at it, but you will be shocked when you look at it.
I haven't reached 80,000 yet, but I thought about it and wanted to post one. I'm a newbie. I hope someone can support me. I've basically read it later.
The original intention of writing this novel was to see that the ending of Princess Fukang was very messy and miserable. Then I went to Changzhou Dongpo Garden last year to review Su Dongpo's life. I was very grateful for their brotherhood and the political achievements of Renzong, Shenzong and Zhezong. I wanted to write a different life, with everyone's IQ online, so that the princess could have a happy ending, and also give those bright and outstanding people a good future instead of depression and ambition. I did a lot of homework before I started writing this novel.
The three views are correct, the film is specially shot, it is not a dark novel, the protagonist is a normal person. There are so few people watching, please watch and comment [crying]
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