The Opening Song "Calories", the Judges Asked Me to Get Out

I originally came to see my brother, he is surprisingly pretty [laughing]

The characters are well-developed and realistic. As far as I'm concerned, there's nothing toxic about them.

Disadvantages: It almost sent me away in the beginning. It was embarrassing, had both bad and bad points, and there was too much nonsense. I almost couldn't watch it anymore. Advantages: But this author is getting better and better as he writes. I have a high point of laughter. This book really made me laugh. Moreover, the writing style, arrangement, and capturing the essence of the book are gradually improving. Good, keep at it. An is now thinking that the writing results should be good. Come on, work hard. (Also: after the inactivity period of about 10 to 20 chapters, everyone's senses should change, just like the routine of the protagonist of this book, reverse and gradually get better)

It's quite funny. As long as it doesn't end badly, it's a good abstract book.

I hope you can have a classic chicken because you are so beautiful It's not easy! It's just because I finally appeared

Five points must be five points. When I first entered this book, I thought it was, but I didn't expect it. Well, it's a very good book. I found gold in the shit.

It's not easy to write a book, so it's a five-star review. After demining, it is quite interesting for the author to find a new way to write entertainment articles by reversing the divine comedy and making jokes. The writing is smooth, the details are in place, and there is nothing major wrong with it overall. (Actually, when I saw Su Duo's part, I thought the article should be set in a contrasting style with unique music styles, such as red and white wedding rock, yodeling, etc. But the author's backhand of a small apple really confused me. If I think about it carefully, it is better to be grounded. After all, the effect will be better this way, but there is a sense of loss after taking half a step. After all, the expectations are quite high.) Entertainment + Divine Comedy + Ghosts and Animals + Suppress first and then rise. Take your seat accordingly. By the way, let me add that a fatal setting is that the system reversal can easily cause the article to deviate from the original funny and ghostly style in the later stage, which will cause a great sense of dissonance and slowly turn the pig's feet into the image of a great and upright star in ordinary entertainment articles. If it fails, please @ me to change the review, lest any brothers say that I am just a waste of money. (After reading two more chapters, I found that the problem should not be serious. There is a twist, but I still keep a warning.)

I was laughing all the time [laughing] The various jokes are integrated very well, and there is nothing too dramatic. [Thinking] The system is not very good in terms of funds and band sharing. Why not donate the money directly to charity? Basically, it depends on the main character cheating and giving everyone 10%? There are too many scenes about Xiao Heizi [face covering], so many that I feel like vomiting

It's so wonderful, so touching, and so inspiring. This book is definitely a masterpiece in the 21st century. I never expected that the author's writing style was so good. I was particularly moved. With tears streaming down his face, he skillfully made headlines. This book has great literary talent, beautiful diction, simple language, fresh writing, rich emotions, full characters, clear organization, well-structured structure, reasonable plot, ups and downs, vivid and fascinating descriptions, strong artistic appeal, and the finishing touch, profound meaning, and thought-provoking. It has a long meaning. It is definitely an honor for me to read this novel in my lifetime. I really admire the author's mind. How many things that others cannot do can be solved as soon as they arrive. The author writes this book like flowing clouds and flowing water, wandering and unbridled! 👍👍👍

This book is interesting and unique! I finished reading it in one go. The only drawback is that the update is too slow and the word count is too small! Author, please keep updating (ง •̀_•́)ง! I haven't had enough of it yet

It's very good. There's a lot of fun in it, but it's just too little. I finished it in a while. It's not enough. [Pouts] Author, please update more quickly. Please update more, otherwise you will have to keep reading again.

I think this book is 10 or even 9 out of 10 good, and you can understand all the jokes [shocked]

This is the first time I want to review a book after reading it for so long. From the beginning, it looks good, and the plot and characters are all okay. There are so many good songs that you can't choose? ? ? If you have to choose some unpopular songs, how can they resonate with us ordinary readers who have never heard of them? In particular, which one did the participating singers sing to thank their fans? Forgot the name. You can sing "The Brightest Star in the Night Sky" too! ! !

It's great. I love reading it. There are too many jokes about the author. I doubt my mental state.

The book is quite interesting at the beginning, but the author's style seems a bit too jumpy at the end, which makes it difficult for people to empathize and understand it. However, the author writes well and has something to say. This four-star rating is not a boast. The problem with the author is that he doesn't control the timeline very well. The previous paragraph is still in the present, and the next paragraph is about things that happened some time ago. When reading the novel, there is always a sense of incoherence. The author feels like he writes wherever he thinks. The author has something, but not much, and his writing skills are not mature enough. But after I saw the author's original adaptation of "Basketball Fire", I changed it to five stars. I personally like this kind of original plot, so I can give it a five-star rating. I think it's good.

I am going to die laughing from this book, hahahahaha. I saw this book several times, but because I didn't click on the title, I didn't expect that this book was completely different from other books on the same subject. This is the only book where you won't feel offended when you see the author making fun of the characters. The scale is just right. I've only read about twenty chapters, so I can't help but comment on it first, and then criticize it later if it's not finished. I've read more than a hundred chapters, and it's still very funny, but I'm a little tired, and I don't understand some of the plot points, so my desire to read further has dropped a bit, so I'll read it again after a while.

The system is a bug, but it doesn't come out easily, so it's okay. The reason for the five stars is that the author is so good at making things happen. In addition, it has been slowly laying out the Chicken Brother-style performance. It is rare to find such interesting and interesting novels.

I have only read a few chapters, and I see that the system looks good before it appears, but the sudden appearance is unacceptable to the system, especially the setting of burning money. It should be better to set it to automatic donation. Although it is an abstract system, you can set some disaster events or positive energy, and then express your feelings, ignore the system's rewards and punishments, sing some songs of encouragement or condolence, sublimate the protagonist's character, and fight monsters with the system. It is also worth seeing, just like nuclear bombs, you can not use them, but you must have them. Five-star praise author, I hope the future will be wonderful!

I woke up at 11:30 the night before yesterday, thinking about going to bed early, and accidentally opened this book. I have stayed up until now, and I have smoked almost a pack and a half of cigarettes. I can't bear to sleep. It's really good. After that, I have to wait painfully for updates. I really want to finish it in one breath! [Like] I like the protagonist very much, there are many shining points that I like

It's not that I'm demanding... This book is indeed a bit average, mainly due to the writing technique! Summary: At first glance, there is nothing too disgusting, and it still deserves a score of 8+!

It's okay. The movie in the form of a summary at the end is also very interesting. It's a novel without a female protagonist, but the second half about playing basketball is a bit long and I almost couldn't watch it. But in fact, it's not a big problem to skip that paragraph and go straight to the back. It's not a problem to like celebrities, it's just mentioned over and over again. . . , Overall you can still watch it

The old rules of five-star points It's actually about 8 points, right? The overall story is still very interesting, but the author obviously lacked stamina at the beginning of "Basketball". The writing was slow and average, and the ending was also handled well. You can really read it in Shuhuang

I stayed up all night to finish reading it. It is very exciting. The author is good at using opposition techniques to express the two sides of human nature vividly and vividly with humorous little sensationalism. I couldn't stop reading it. This is worthy of recognition and five-star praise. My only regret is that I read it too early. It is a little short and concise, and it is not enough to read. The laughter on the bed in the middle of the night is a good use of the bed.

This book is so funny. Five stars start. I can't stand the devil system anymore.

Because a person wrote a book, true love, I am convinced [face covering] [like] [face covering]

One point for no heroine, one point for happiness, one point for creativity, one point for correct outlook, and one point for the last one if there is no eunuch. Well done, my friend, you deserve the perfect score!

At the beginning, I was a little embarrassed and panicked, and almost gave up the book. However, when I saw the protagonist angrily criticizing Chinese hip-hop later, I had the urge to give up the book again, but I still persevered. There are some aspects of this book that some people dislike, that is, sometimes the songs chosen by the protagonist are not very popular with readers, so it also ran away here. But because I was happy, I insisted on watching the latest part, where I saw the protagonist sending the eggs laid by "Ke" into the world. Hahahaha, it was really funny. Still quite happy

I've read a lot of articles about singers and idols, but this is the first time I've read an article about ghosts and idols. It's a great job [licking the screen]

Really appreciate the review, I like the author's style. Except for the introduction of the basketball fire content, which is a matter of personal taste, the rest of the book is very good. There are laughs and tears, but the two points are connected and interspersed very closely. It is very smooth and has not been seen in other books. It is not abrupt at all and is very smooth. Personally speaking, overall it is a book that brings me happiness and emotion. Thank you to the author. I hope you will stick to the path of creation and bring happiness to people who like you like Brother Chen. It will get better and better! Thanks!

This novel is quite funny and very interesting. The author is writing something very new. And I want to say... This novel is systematic, yes! It's the traditional system. Although the author's description of the system in that chapter was a failure, it was revised later. The system's impact on the protagonist is not very strong. Keep reading - this novel is quite interesting!