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A New Writer Has Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Can Anyone Comment on It?

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I want to read a book similar to "The Legend of the Dragon King: The Smoke and Clouds Reverse the World". It was the first time I wrote 80,000 words, and then I tried my best to write 400,000 words. I also wrote towards the standard of 400,000 words. It was boring to be free at home. After all, I just finished the first semester of college.

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148 Cultivation Arena: My Skills Will Hit Critically Idle BookwormEastern Fantasy241k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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New books are recommended! Everyone is welcome to send notes, reminders and comments. It comes with two books that I'm also following! They all look great, love watching them! !
149 Slam Dunk: I, Sakuragi, Will Not Lick Haruko Akagi Touch Waist MeowSports705k WordsCompleted 10.6kReads8.1Score833Shelves
149 Keep Sleeping, Don't Wake Up Su Le's Little Yellow FlowerMystery428k WordsOngoing 117Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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Newcomers, new books, and new starting points are all very interesting to read, especially the first three short stories, which are more than 10,000 words long. They are very exciting and highly recommended. The author is so imaginative that I can't even imagine what I can't think of. [Blessed immediately] [Blessed soon] [Blessed soon]
150 Crossing the Fox: Book of Destiny S XiaochunAncient Romance386k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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My new book has passed 100,000 words. Please review it.
151 A Record of the Ups and Downs of Officialdom in the Past Twenty Years by Qing Yunzhi YouyangUrban187k WordsCompleted 12Reads—Score—Shelves
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My own debut show, please appreciate it
151 Empress Hongwu Lazy UncleAncient Romance46k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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As I get older, I can no longer do computer typing for a long time, and I don't expect this book to be able to repay the mortgage that I have spent half my life on. It is a book that lifts the curtain of the late Yuan Dynasty from a female perspective (it is not a Gongdouwen). If you find it interesting, please take the trouble to read it. I hope you all can live happily.
151 I Kill Decisively in the Land of Twilight Fishing GuaguaEastern Fantasy84k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Can you please read a little bit of the novel I wrote? It's the first time I wrote it and after so long, I still have five views and we are still friends.... By the way, you can give me some suggestions, thank you.
152 Warhammer, but His Teammates Are Nameless Guests The Cat Girl in the Tavern Reijiu295k WordsOngoing 2.8kReads—Score294Shelves
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This is something I just wrote recently. I am a newbie, please take a look [Blow a kiss]
152 Three Biological Fathers and One Baby VivilunaAncient Romance390k WordsCompleted 959Reads8.1Score115Shelves
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Recommended, real cub article, already fat, ready to enter
152 There Is No Stranger in My Hometown Yue Is Not ShyEastern Fantasy214k WordsOngoing 23Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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New author writes book for the first time
152 A Mediocre Little Genius Showing Off Super SuperUrban43k WordsOngoing 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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Newcomer, I hope you won't scold me too badly😭
153 There Is No Bench to Sit on in the Carpenter's House Da Da Da Da Da XiaMystery1.0M WordsCompleted 30Reads8.2Score—Shelves
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Thirty minutes of five-star mutual reviews. If there is a review, please give each other feedback
153 Hou Men's Poisonous Phoenix, the Princess Has Come Back to Kill Her Smart FoolAncient Romance595k WordsCompleted 371Reads—Score115Shelves
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Can someone please give me a pat on the back? Even if it's just a little bit, it's better to scare me than to have no one deal with it. The data is so bad that I can't fix it, and I'm growing mushrooms in my spare time.
153 The Demon King from Another World Returns The Moon Sets and No Longer RisesUrban275k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Just read it, you won't say a word after reading it, the dual worldviews of different worlds and reading are so exciting, magic ➕ fantasy really has something to say, the writing and plot are all online, it is really good for a new book to be of this level [Send my heart][Send my heart][Adored]
154 Nuo Mian: I Can Swallow Ghosts Infinitely Forgot to Go HomeUrban103k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Dear gentlemen, come in and take a look [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]
154 After Rebirth at the End of the World, I Woke up and Lay Down in SSS You Don't Know the Branches on the Moon308k WordsCompleted 82Reads8.1Score—Shelves
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Just leave a trace, no need to read the article, I can't stand it myself.
155 You Have Been Dreaming About Cultivating Immortality Since You Were a Child, but You Got Scared When Given the Chance? Why Is There a Nickname?Eastern Fantasy51k WordsOngoing 1Reads—Score—Shelves
155 Being Bullied at School, I Became a Magical Girl BaixiaohuaModern Romance307k WordsCompleted 22Reads—Score—Shelves
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There is no problem with the package
155 The Age of Ewov One or Two Xiao Long BaoSci-Fi & Apocalypse403k WordsOngoing 9Reads—Score—Shelves
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If you like reading science fiction + survival + combat, you can read it. The combat chapter is about twenty chapters. I would be very grateful if I could add a bookshelf, and I would be even more grateful if I could write a review! This is a character picture I made using AI. It is already the closest to what I expected.
156 Sequence Mark: the End Jiang FeixiaUrban249k WordsCompleted 70Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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I only recognize one new book! This doesn't sound like a newbie
156 Reincarnated as an All-E Loser? I Became a God by Drawing Cards ManyouhuEastern Fantasy229k WordsOngoing 11Reads—Score—Shelves
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If you are bored, you can read the little rags I wrote [laughing]
156 Immortals Under the Green Moon Zhu Su Doesn't Get InvolvedEastern Fantasy290k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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I wrote my own fantasy group portrait article, can anyone support me?
157 Thunder Struck Down from the Sky, and the God of War Turned Red for Me. Xie CongciAncient Romance164k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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This is my first book. The story has just begun and I have only written the fourth chapter. The writing is immature and the plot is slow, but every word is written with my heart in mind. I don't want to become famous, I just want someone to read it. Big guys passing by, please give me a comment and a little encouragement. Your support is the confidence for me to insist on updating.
158 A Staggered Parallel Line Always Thinking About DreamingUrban349k WordsCompleted 102Reads8.2Score—Shelves
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Written by myself, mutual review + 30 minutes - 1 hour of reading + bookshelf + reminder for updates, come if you want, absolutely honest, 24 hours online, when you finish your book, tell me about your book, I will definitely reply within 24 hours, just a lot more
158 Eclipse Fairy Road The Bloody EmpressEastern Fantasy239k WordsOngoing 14Reads—Score—Shelves
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I am also a newbie and no one has read my book. Please comment or like it.
158 Bipolar Disorder Iii Cheese111k WordsCompleted 11Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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Please review, the author is very kind [sending my heart] PS: It's about to be finished.
159 When I Write About Who Dies, I Write About My Good Brothers First and Then My Ex-Girlfriend. Su Le's Little Yellow Flower14k WordsCompleted 214Reads8.6Score—Shelves
159 A Thought of Gods and Demons Brings Disaster to the Heavens Entering the World Half-BakedEastern Fantasy480k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Purely cute, so new that it couldn't be newer
159 Xianmen Is Actually a Breeding Ground for Monsters! Holding an Umbrella and Wanting to SleepEastern Fantasy116k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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I especially want to comment. It's so cold on the stand-alone road (p′‵.)
160 Mortal Bones Seek Immortality TatsutoEastern Fantasy616k WordsOngoing 258Reads8.0Score210Shelves
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Traditional cultivation of immortality, non-traditional settings, refreshing. No system, no plug-ins, and you can travel the world with just one mortal body. Newbie, new book, please support!
160 The Number One Internet Celebrity for Outdoor Adventures Almost Died in the Live Broadcast Room Su Le's Little Yellow Flower14k WordsCompleted 81Reads8.6Score—Shelves
160 Did Bro Become My Taoist Companion in the Immortal Cultivation Game? Dark Flower MessengerSports109k WordsOngoing 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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The first one was mine, and I liked the later ones. I wanted to learn how to make people happy but also have brains.
161 Online Games: My Poison Can Kill Gods XingmengchenyuanSports1.5M WordsCompleted 452.8kReads9.2Score71.4kShelves
161 Red Cross VIP MuchenMystery269k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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I hope you can give me some suggestions for improvement
161 All Living Beings in the Three Realms, Listen Up. I Am the Great Sage Qitian, Grandson Tikong. Su Le's Little Yellow Flower12k WordsCompleted 35Reads8.5Score—Shelves
162 Online Games: God-Level Assassin, I Am the Shadow! Three Yuan a PieceSports5.0M WordsOngoing 270.1kReads9.1Score33.2kShelves
162 Traveling Through the Book: I Am Arrogantly Knocking the Ice Autumn There Is Gold in the Book138k WordsCompleted 288Reads—Score—Shelves
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Well, the first one is written by me. I like the rest of them. I recommend them.
162 I Pretend to Be a Villain and Dominate the World Forever. Someone Stole My PantsEastern Fantasy245k WordsOngoing 347Reads—Score—Shelves
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If someone sees it, I will keep updating it.
163 Epilepsy, All Epilepsy, Epilepsy Is Better XiaoyanziModern Romance1.3M WordsCompleted 614.4kReads9.8Score83.8kShelves
163 Online Games: the Sword Transforms the World into a Shocking Guest Lizhuang White MeatSports4.5M WordsCompleted 46.7kReads9.1Score4.9kShelves
164 Evernight Siege You Poured Too Much JuiceSci-Fi & Apocalypse865k WordsOngoing 18Reads—Score—Shelves
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Yes, it's okay. 26 People have been here before. Currently, I only have my own account. I am autistic.
164 Bloody Demon Hunter Cuttlefish White and BlueUrban191k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I'm here again asking for viewing and recommendations. Finally, there is an author who is related to us, and we even recommend his books!
164 The Junior Sister Is Obviously Super Strong, but She Is Too Frivolous. Tomato ComicsAncient Romance1.9M WordsCompleted 21.6kReads9.4Score4.1kShelves
164 Scarlet Strawberry Boy in the RainSci-Fi & Apocalypse171k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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130,000 Words, 0 people have read [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]
165 Falling into the Abyss, Not Knowing the Pain of Separation and Hatred Luo LinnanweiEastern Fantasy161k WordsCompleted 221Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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Lingmen Little Knife with more than 100,000 words
165 How to Be Decent: Two Volumes (Original Work of the Popular Film and Television Series Starring Wang Churan and Cheng Lei) Seven Handsome314k WordsCompleted 48kReads9.7Score8.4kShelves
165 Three Kingdoms: I Wiped Out All the Powerful Generals Maple Bridge Night MoonHistorical328k WordsOngoing 87Reads—Score—Shelves
166 Light Meets All Living Beings The Quiet Prince968k WordsOngoing 84Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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If you like to see smart people doing business, playing psychological warfare, and being able to accept being stabbed, close your eyes and watch! It's so niche that it's barely popular, but its texture is amazingly good. The world view setting is so novel that there are no established benchmark works. The author's writing style is very stable, the pace is not fast, but there are many details, like a slowly closing net. You will constantly have questions while watching it, and you will doubt everything along with the protagonist. It does not deliberately sensationalize, but the fate of each character is like a designed tragic art, reasonable and cruel.
166 Another World in Japan Hot-Blooded Red DevilEastern Fantasy240k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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It's a well-written book, I hope someone will read it and review it!
166 XCOM3: Requiem from Deep Space Brown Brown Bear175k WordsOngoing 9Reads—Score—Shelves
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Save the child, Qiuli paste