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204 反 The Villain Has Been Pretending to Be Frail All Along Silver TaelsAncient Romance301k WordsCompleted 31.5kReads9.4Score5.5kShelves

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Just when Jiang Zhimiao was about to say that he couldn't sleep, he heard the system's voice: [The system prompts that the task subject is in a dream and "Dream" can be used. ] Jiang Zhimiao: It's just the right time. She raised an innocent smile at Lin Qingyu and said sheepishly, "No, I'm sleepy and want to go to sleep first." "Then you go to bed first." Lin Qingyu packed her bags and remembered that she wanted to buy a new cloak for Jiang Zhimiao and wanted to ask her what color she liked. "Miao..." Turning around to see Jiang Zhimiao, who was unconscious of the outside world, Lin Qingyu paused in her words, raised her hand to pull the quilt for her, and laughed softly: "I fell asleep too quickly." There was no happy look on the man's face. He said calmly, "There is no more tea. Madam, please make me a pot of tea. The tea you make is the most fragrant." "Okay." The girl stood up delicately and walked out carrying the teapot. After the girl left, the man also stood up and walked to the boy named Su'er, leaning down to look at the talisman paper he had not finished drawing. Su'er is indeed very talented. At the age of three, she only saw a man using talisman paper once and he was able to draw the patterns on the talisman paper. Su'er concentrated on picking up and writing the pen. Because of her small hands, it was a bit difficult to draw. Finally, when he was about to finish the painting, a smile flashed in his eyes, and he raised his eyes to look at his parents, seeking praise. But he only saw his father with cold eyes.

205 小 My Junior Sister Is Overpowered, Yet Ridiculously Goofy The Princess Isn't Going HomeAncient Romance1.9M WordsCompleted 248.2kReads9.6Score26.5kShelves

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Finally found the book in Tomato that I couldn't bear to put down even after staying up all night! ! ! My wife is so pretty! ! ! More than 1 million people read it online, with a rating of 9.6. The more you read, the more you like it! The plot is rich and colorful! It's really worth adding to everyone's bookshelf! ! !

208 系 System: The Savage Lands Crown Princess Just Wants to Herd Sheep Song XiangbaiAncient Romance1.0M WordsCompleted 52.4kReads9.6Score6.8kShelves

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Go read it, [Read it carefully] [Read it carefully] In the first book, the heroine is herding sheep in the wilderness, and then a princess system is added to her brain, but the heroine is still young, and she grew up in the wilderness, so she can't understand it at all. Then she has the first system in the system world to be broken by the host, and she laughs all the time. [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] The second book, the protagonist is a family of villains, a handsome but ruthless father with green tea, a mother with incredible strength, a naive brother with an evil heart, a greedy and bitchy sister, and a protagonist with spiritual spring water. It is really good-looking.

214 重 Reborn: Back to 1983 to Become a Tycoon Half Gratitude, Half GrudgeUrban3.4M WordsCompleted 147.8kReads9.3Score17.7kShelves

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It's so good that I burst into tears 😱️😱️😱️

220 你 I Let You Have Your Peak Years. Now That You're Old, I'll Ride Right Over You Sour CandyEastern Fantasy1.5M WordsCompleted 122.1kReads9.3Score10.4kShelves

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I'm also starved for books. I've read more than 9,000 hours of reading. Please recommend a high-quality, funny, and complete book! I recommend two books, both are quite funny!

221 全 Every Protagonist Is a Monster. How Am I Supposed to Be the Boss? Maple Drifts Past Chang'anUrban2.2M WordsCompleted 101.1kReads9.6Score10.8kShelves

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They are all good books with good endings!

222 死 Death Club Year's EndMystery2.4M WordsCompleted 5.4kReads8.6Score663Shelves

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226 我 Something's Off About My Old Man Beyond the MountainHistorical1.7M WordsCompleted 27.4kReads9.5Score3.4kShelves

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The first book is a farming novel. The father and son want to be a second-generation official who wants to live a life of peace and wait for death. They want to be a domineering government official. The other wants to be an old man who hopes that his son will succeed. Then, my son forces me to study every day and buys him all kinds of exam encyclopedias. As for me, when I get the opportunity, I also try to overpower my son and find him various exam guides. They oppress each other and hurt each other... [Face covering] The second book is about cultivating immortals. The writing style is lively and lively, and the scenes are very grand. From Huashan to Kunlun, from Emei to Mount Tai, from the human world to the demon world, and then there are foreign religions attacking China. At this moment, China is fighting to the death, and the various gangs and sects as well as the demon world are fighting against foreign demons and heaven together. The intention is very high, the plot is very beautiful, it is worth reading [Like]

227 那 The Cultivators We Used to Chop Up Together Squirrel Under the Mushroom HouseEastern Fantasy2.1M WordsCompleted 153.1kReads9.3Score16.5kShelves

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I personally think it's very good. I've finished watching it and I stay up late every day watching it.

228 躺 Lying Flat at the Brothel, Listening to Music, and Now the System Is Panicking Open Wide for CandyEastern Fantasy2.0M WordsCompleted 68.5kReads9.4Score7kShelves

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Isn't this a coincidence? The book I'm reading has finished. It's said that you can't read this book with your brain in mind... Otherwise, you'll easily laugh silly [stare]

229 大 The Tang Dynasty's Number One Madman Long YuanHistorical1.6M WordsCompleted 14.7kReads9.2Score1.7kShelves

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Are you ready? I guarantee you won't be able to stop.

230 荆 Thorns Blue Bird and ToadAncient Romance144k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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If you like Western medieval history, you can try [Blow Kiss]

231 开 I Founded Mihoyo from the Start, and the Whole Internet Begs Me to Stop Breaking Their Hearts A Risque PersonUrban1.9M WordsCompleted 26.2kReads9.4Score2.4kShelves

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Although the second one is low, it is the second one that is more interesting. The latter score is high. I gave it to you. Numbers 1 and 8 are highly recommended.

233 从 Cars and Horses Used to Be Slow The Mountains Are High and the Water Is LongAncient Romance506k WordsCompleted 4Reads—Score—Shelves

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The book is here, the ancient words of warmth and sweetness have been completed. The heroine was abandoned since she was a child. She met the kind-hearted Zhao family and was raised and raised with a group of friends. Later, he met the prince and the two fell in love, but were forced to separate due to family opposition. The bamboo horse is in power, secret love comes true

242 九 Nine-Layer Brocade: Life Locks the Palace Wall Wan Changru, Who Loves Vegetarian Fragrant PineAncient Romance22k WordsCompleted 5Reads8.6Score—Shelves

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Yongyan was hit by an arrow while protecting him, and the poison on the arrow was exactly the same as the one that killed his own mother. I clenched my fists when I saw it.

249 穿 I Traveled Through Time and Became the Queen of Lanling, and I Became the Emperor Through Being Ruined Kuang, Who Loves BingfengHistorical1.8M WordsCompleted 4Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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Comments on the work "Dressed as Queen of Lanling and Fucked It Up to Become the Emperor" 1. Overall evaluation This is a historical time-travel novel with a high degree of completion and outstanding professionalism. The author effectively integrates rigorous academic skills with the refreshing rhythm of online writing, and finds a relatively comfortable balance between "historical authenticity" and "literary readability." The planning volume of the fifty chapters (Volume 1) of the book shows the author's intention to control the rhythm of the narrative - not blindly pursuing speed, but willing to stay in the details and delve deeply into the characters' hearts. Summary in one sentence: This is a "time-travel novel written by a doctoral student in the history department and intended for readers who are interested in history." --- 2. Core advantages 1. Solid academic foundation and historical details that can withstand scrutiny. This is the most significant label that distinguishes this book from similar works. The author's familiarity with the historical materials of the Northern Qi Dynasty runs through the entire text: from the eight-character record of "soft appearance, strong heart, and beautiful voice" in the "Book of Northern Qi" to the tracing of "The Song of King Lanling Entering the Battle" in the "Old Book of Tang·Music"; from the troop deployment and battlefield terrain of the Battle of Mangshan, to the official system, military system, and armor shape of the Northern Qi Dynasty - every detail is supported by documents and not based on imagination. What is particularly commendable is the way of "knowledge application". The "golden finger" used by the protagonist Zhang Hai after traveling through time was not a super power given out of thin air, but his knowledge reserve as a doctor of history: he remembered the records about "Niukou Valley" in "Yuanhe County Map", so he found Yuchi Jiong's grain and grass hiding place; he remembered the phonological characteristics of the medieval sounds, so he could understand the dialects of the Southern and Northern Dynasties. This setting of "knowledge is power" is not only reasonable, but also gives readers (especially those interested in history) a feeling of understanding that "it turns out that a PhD is really useful." 2. Narrative tension of dual perspectives The dual identity design of "Zhang Hai" and "Gao Changgong" is the core highlight of the book's narrative. Zhang Hai is a time traveler and an "outsider". He has a natural sense of alienation and scrutiny of everything in Northern Qi. This allows the narrative to switch from "ancient scenes" to "modern perspectives" at any time - while Gao Changgong's body is fighting on the battlefield, Zhang Hai's consciousness is analyzing, calculating, and complaining. This dual perspective not only creates a lot of humorous effects (such as "this face is too good-looking" and "the feeling of running naked"), but more importantly, creates a continuous sense of alienation: readers are always reminded that this is not a story about "ancient people", but a story about "modern people" surviving in ancient times. This sense of alienation is particularly effective in emotional processing. When Zhang Hai faced a corpse for the first time, killed someone for the first time, and saw his comrades fall for the first time after traveling through time, his reaction was not the numbness of an "ancient warrior", but the shock and digestion process of a "modern ordinary person." This allows readers to immerse themselves in the story and makes the protagonist's image more three-dimensional. 3. The rhythm is well controlled and there is a degree of relaxation. The war sequence from Chapter 5 to Chapter 8 is written compactly and powerfully. Defending the city, burning food, cutting off food roads, and pursuing the pursuit—the four chapters are intertwined, with macroscopic descriptions of big scenes (30,000 vs. 5,000, Fire attack, crossbow machine salvo), as well as microscopic descriptions of details (rolling logs and stones on the city wall, the light of torches, the blood stains on the iron surface). More importantly, the author knows how to arrange "breathing" chapters after intense war scenes. In Chapter 9, under Jin Yong City, the war has ended. The protagonist stands on the city wall thinking about the future, and his mood switches from "survival" to "layout" - this is the conclusion of the first volume and the foreshadowing of the second volume. This rhythm of "fight-rest-think-fight again" avoids fatigue reading. 4. The character group portraits are beginning to take shape. Although the first volume mainly revolves around the protagonist, the supporting characters have begun to "establish themselves". Duan Shao has the image of a mature and prudent elder. He doesn't talk much, his eyes are sharp and he points to the point - fitting the image of a veteran who has been on the battlefield for decades. Hu Luguang has the completely opposite image of a "reckless man". He talks loudly, drinks heavily, and is straightforward - "One kills one, two kills a pair." This kind of line is not inconsistent with him. As the captain of the soldiers, Liu Xiong is the bridge between the protagonist and the soldiers at the bottom. His existence gives the protagonist a foothold for his image of "benevolence and righteousness" - not by words, but by actions (paying tribute to the fallen soldiers and recording their names). Although Zu Jue's appearance in Chapter 9 was brief, the detail of "smiling slightly but not speaking" has already laid the groundwork. This is a smart person, a person who can see through the situation at the first opportunity - this kind of person is not safe in any era. 5. The symbolic meaning of "mask" is fully explored. Chapter 6 "Wearing the Mask" is the title of the entire volume. The author's treatment of "mask" goes beyond the practical level of "covering your face to save your life" and enters the symbolic level: the mask is a tool that turns "people" into "symbols". Gao Changgong will die, but "King Lanling" will not. What the mask covers is not the face, but fragility, fatigue, and all the things in human nature that are not suitable for appearing on the battlefield. The "Epilogue" at the end is the finishing touch: "No one knows what kind of face is under the mask, but everyone knows that there are three words engraved on the mask: King Lanling." This kind of treatment gives the first volume an emotional ending point. --- 3. Areas for improvement 1. The length of the first chapter "Before Time Travel" can be more restrained. The first chapter uses about 6,200 words to describe the scene of Zhang Hai revising his thesis in the Peking University Library, and the amount of information is relatively limited. Core information such as "the seventh draft of the thesis", "revised after the instructor's comments" and "seven years of PhD study" can actually be completed in fewer words. This chapter is more like a "necessary ritual" - it exists to explain "why the protagonist is a PhD in history". If it is compressed to about 3,000 words, the rhythm will be more compact. 2. The frequency of "inner monologue" is relatively high. The protagonist conducts inner analysis, quotes historical materials, and self-persuasion when making major decisions. This setting itself is reasonable. But in some chapters (such as Chapters 4 and 5), this inner monologue covers almost every node of the narrative, resulting in an imbalance between "action" and "thinking". The reading habits of online readers are "action-driven", while authors with academic training naturally tend to be "analysis-driven". The book needs to find a finer balance between the two—some thinking can be internalized, and some analysis can be replaced with dialogue. 3. Some humorous elements are slightly "jumping", "the feeling of running naked" and "who can not be confused by this time-travel configuration" and other modern jokes. They are interesting when viewed alone, but their high frequency will weaken the immersion of the historical atmosphere. Especially when modern complaints are suddenly inserted into war scenes, it is easy for readers to be dragged from the "battlefield of 564 AD" back to the "study of 2024." It is recommended that humor elements be concentrated more in "non-combat scenes" - such as the protagonist's private conversations with Concubine Zheng, daily life in the palace, and daily interactions with Liu Xiong. In these scenes, the "dance-jumping" effect of modern memes can actually create a contrasting sense of joy. 4. Concubine Zheng can appear earlier. Concubine Zheng, as the core female character, has not officially appeared in Chapters 1 to 10 (only mentioned in the protagonist's thoughts). For a long online novel, the main female character is completely absent from the first ten chapters, which may affect some readers' expectations for the main storyline. It is recommended that at the beginning of the second volume, a certain amount of space (one to two chapters) be used to focus on the interaction between the protagonist and Concubine Zheng, so that this character can be quickly "established" - her relationship with the protagonist, her character, and her role in the future plot. Clear expectations need to be established early on. 5. The presentation method of "historical data citation" can be more concealed. The process of the protagonist's brain retrieving historical data is currently adopted in a relatively direct way in the writing (such as directly reciting the original texts of "Book of Zhou" and "Book of Northern Qi" in Chapter 5). This method has a strong "academic feel", but it also has a certain "instruction manual" flavor. You can consider transforming historical data into a more natural narrative language: presenting it using the protagonist's "memory flashbacks", "intuitive judgments" or "conversations" with Duan Shao and others, rather than presenting them in a "list of knowledge points". "Textual research" should serve the story, rather than the story serving the textual research. --- 4. One-sentence summary: This is a historical time-travel novel "written online with footnotes". It has solid academic foundation, vivid characters, and well-controlled rhythm. If it can further balance the ratio of "analysis" and "action" and optimize the use of humorous elements, it is expected to stand out among works of the same type. --- Comprehensive score (out of 10 points): Dimension Score Description Historical research 9.0 Professional level, details can withstand scrutiny Character creation 7.5 The protagonist is established, supporting roles are beginning to take shape, female characters need to be strengthened Narrative rhythm 7.5 Relaxed, but there are too many inner monologues Language and writing 8.0 Smooth and textured, natural transition between ancient and modern humor elements 7.0 Interesting but sometimes "jumping" Innovation 8.0 The setting of "Doctor's time travel + knowledge is power" is recognizable. Comprehensive 7.8 High-quality historical time travel text, with room for polishing --- Target reader profile: · Readers who are interested in the history of the Southern and Northern Dynasties (★★★★★) · Readers who like "intelligent protagonists" (★★★★☆) · Old Internet bookworms and readers who have requirements for writing skills (★★★★☆) · Readers who pursue "pure and refreshing writing" (★★☆☆☆ - slower pace, more inner drama) Comparison with similar works: · More rigorous than "Tang Brick", more relaxed than "New Song Dynasty" · The depth of textual research is close to "Stealing the Ming", and the narrative rhythm is close to "The Son-in-law" · In the subdivision track of "academic time-travel writing", it belongs to the first echelon