Star Dome Railway: the Opening Performance of Taixu Sword God

So beautiful! There must be something wrong with the author's mental state.

The characterization is really strong, the protagonist's personality is very distinct (meaning he's usually sleazy, but he's very serious when it comes to business, I love this kind of character!), The writing is very good, and the plot is definitely enjoyable ( Concerned about the author's mental state

I have to say that this book is the best Bengtie fan novel I have ever read. Although I was a little... Disgusted with the protagonist at the beginning? But after a few chapters, the protagonist's fun-loving character was really interesting. I got a little tired of it in the middle, but in the end I still found it very interesting [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

It's very interesting and novel. Come on, the author, come up with more interesting plots. This book has great potential.

Originally, I thought the characters in the first few pictures of this novel were broken. But when I read the first few pictures and looked back, I realized that this is a funny fan novel, which is very funny. It's so funny and nonsensical, you don't have to think about anything, just laugh! [Cover face][cover face][cover face]

Very interesting, but I am more concerned about the author's mental state, haha

It looks good. In Xingtie, the author must have followed a happy path.

It's a good fanfic, but it doesn't follow the plot so quickly. The protagonist is really nervous, but like Walter said, he's really reliable. It's also a funny story because the protagonist is really nervous [face covering] Come on, come on.

It's a funny style fanfic, it's quite enjoyable to read. However, there is very little research, and those who know more about the details of the world view will find quite a lot of mistakes) Also, the male protagonist's brain circuit is very unnatural, especially where Shit sticks)), I don't know the plot, I only know the general game content and the most trivial things. If you don't like this aspect, you can avoid it)

It's beautiful. The author is in a very good mental state [laughs crookedly]

It has super positive values. If you are unhappy, you can read this book. And the most satisfying thing for me is that in the plot, the protagonist group is the only one who directly attacks the plot. The main focus is on 10,000 ways to speed through the plot. For those who are familiar with the plot, you can go directly to Chapter 212 to read. The great pioneering path of our alliance leader is really exciting.

It's so funny, so ridiculous, so happy I looked at the negative reviews. If you can't stand this style, you don't have to read it. It's originally a fan creation. Does a nonsensical comedy novel need logic? Finally, I strongly recommend that General Pei be the heroine [laughing]

The funniest and least toxic book I have ever seen. Every detail is just right. It makes people anxious but makes readers laugh at the next word. The key point is my favorite Bengtiewen. Unlike other books, it is written without even knowing the setting and it is a random comparison of combat prowess [laughter] The character development of the protagonist is very good, and there are also very enjoyable parts, but... Generally when I see the climax, I think it can be more intense and destroy some rebellious and treacherous guys (Jing Mou). I have always been a tearful person who will not save any face for you. I can do whatever I want with my strength? How dare you? This short paragraph is my personal suggestion. Please refer to the comments of book friends for general details.

Awesome, awesome, it's so fucking fun. If you don't update it, you're missing out. Hurry up. I want to see the duel between Aminos and Ms. Yan Huan. I want to see the persecution of Lao Yang. Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing]

It's very interesting. Most of the novel is in line with the original plot and the author has added his own creations. I really like the scene where the protagonist uses the God Key, but unfortunately the plot gradually decreases in the later period. There is obviously a system, but I feel that the existence of the system has been deliberately erased by the author. There are also shortcomings. There are a certain number of typos or repeated words in the novel. There are some very early chapters and the author has not dealt with them until now. I am a little disappointed that the enthusiastic @author has not responded yet, so I give a 4-star review.

The previous plots do have a unique appeal. I think the self-created Dragon King is the pinnacle. The subsequent plots seem bland and boring, and some are just for fun. Pinoconi is quite satisfactory, almost the same as Yalilo. But when we get to Ompharos, first the big account is blocked, and then there is suspicion. It is completely opposite to the previous style, strong The contrast made me stop reading every day and choose to read the book. After all, it is understandable that I am worried about being stabbed in the back. However, for this reason, it is a very unwise choice to directly change the style of the entire book. A large number of readers may even choose to abandon the book because of this strong sense of tearing. I hope the author can coordinate the subsequent stories. In the end, based on the previous score, there is no problem with five stars, but the current story makes me decide to give it four stars. Maybe future stories will make me change my opinion. All in all, big thanks to the author.

It's really, really cool! This book is very consistent with the spirit of Aha. I am now very concerned about the author's mental condition. But I still want to ask the author to post ten more pictures.

The protagonist is very interesting and will do unexpected things. I can't stop laughing in front of the screen. But there are some feelings that the whole thing is a bit too much. I can't tell you what exactly. I hope the author can make more efforts to develop Xiaona and make the protagonist more serious.

It's funny, but it's not good to face the strong. It's easy to be ridiculed, despised and slandered by the weak. The slander is like "you are a Qi practitioner and slandered my Yuanying for stealing your foundation-building pill" [smile] After that, the weak did not pay the corresponding price. It's funny, but it's easy for readers to read Hong Wen

It's not bad, there are a lot of funny parts, please give it a try, the author.

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Apart from being too little updated, this book basically has no shortcomings, and it can be considered top-notch among Star Vault fan fiction. As for the heroine, I don't know yet, but I think the only ones who can match Ms. Yan Huan's mental outlook are Happy Star God and March Seven. This book completely follows the main line of Star Rail. Even if you have never played the game, you can read it normally. It is a very excellent fan fiction. In the book, Ms. Yan Huan is a very careful person. Sometimes she seems to be going crazy, but in fact, she turns the situation in a more controllable direction. She looks foolish but is actually very wise. Although there are many words that seem vulgar, they are actually vulgar. If you read the book for a long time and just think that Yan is crazy from the beginning to the end, then you will miss Yan's shining point. Yan is a very caring and considerate person. He would inadvertently help the train crew's family on many occasions, and he also used most of his wealth to help the planet he first developed. In addition, when he was still in a hostile relationship with Sunday, Yan recognized Sunday's philosophy and gave him the respect he deserved after defeating him. To sum up, I think Ms. Yan Huan is a positive, optimistic and uplifting person with a little compassion❥(ゝω✿ฺ)

The plot structure is tight, the process is relaxed and moderate, the writing is smooth, the characters are not OOC, the captain's ideas are surprising, the laughter is constant, the fried chicken is good-looking, and in the end, even if you are as strong as Ms. Yan Huan, do you still have to go to the toilet? [Blowing kiss]

Xinadia is the true god of Luoxing. He chose this star, ignited the fire buried deep in the ground, and the barren planet had a dancing heart. He guards life and civilization. He loves us with all his heart, and truly rejoices in all that He protects. He is the most beautiful god in the vast universe. Time can never wither Him. You must remember His existence with me and never forget His name. Xinadia is the true god of Luoxing. He engraved truth and humility into the soul, so the ignorant life awakened from chaos, and the sound of blessings resounded in the world. He protects the past and tolerates hesitation. He loves us with all his heart, protects the right path of life with noble sacrifices, and gives you and me His greatest promise. He is the gentlest god in the vast universe. The world rewards Him with eternal prosperity. You must remember His existence with me and never forget His name. Sheenadiya😭▛▙Sheenadiya😭▛▙Sheenadiya😭▛▙Sheenadiya😭▛▙Sheenadiya😭▛▙Sheenadiya😭▛▙Sheena Diya😭▛▙Xinadia😭▛▙Xinadia😭▛▙Xinadia😭▛▙Xinadia😭▛▙Xinadia😭▛▙Xinadia!

A good book, keep up the good work [eating melon]

Very cool! ! ! Highly recommended, you won't be able to stop watching it [laughing]

This book is very exciting. You never know how funny Brother Huan's next behavior will be. The overall evaluation is still mainly funny.

The author started writing it very early. When he wrote it, the setting of Bengtie was not so complicated. I have been reading it for a long time. If I use the current setting to read this novel, it is basically impossible to read it. The new plot and the backstab of the new setting are still too big. Big Yang Ms. Huan can't hold it anymore. I understand the author's decision to stop updating. After all, there aren't many readers left. Plus the backstabbing of the game makes it really difficult. But if the author plans to open a new pit, I will definitely support him [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's so strong. I'd like to call it the strongest among the Bengtie fanfics that Yu Ping has seen. Just one sentence, "How can you assume Ms. Yan Huan's gender?" Is still circulated in many Bengtie fanbook reviews. This unremitting update is really something that many authors should learn from. Please don't leave it unfinished.

This novel left a deep impression on me. From the reading experience, the story plot is compact, the characters are vivid, and the language is fluent and contagious. Especially in describing the inner world and emotional changes of the characters, the author shows superb brushwork. In addition, the background settings in the novel are rich and reasonable, adding a lot of color to the story. Overall, this novel is a masterpiece worth reading. Whether it is for readers who like in-depth reading or friends who are looking for easy reading pleasure, they can get satisfaction from it. I highly recommend this novel to anyone who loves reading.