Dragon Ball, This Son Wuhan Is Too Outrageous!

The writing is really beautiful, not brainless, and well-founded. Some of the ideas for becoming stronger are basically the ideas of normal comic fans, and they are much better than the brainless enhancements in system literature. You can take a look.

Dragon Ball fics are well written. It's the first time I've encountered a fic that focuses on the time and space of Sun Wuhan.

At present, this is the most comfortable Dragon Ball fanfic I have seen in the past few years. There is no random increase in combat power that will lead to a breakdown in writing, and enemies will not appear randomly to engage in chaotic battles that will cause the plot to collapse. There are no cheating cheats. All methods are based on the settings of Dragon Ball itself, and there is no random magic modification.

It's pretty good, full marks for the illustrations. Let's talk about the plot first. Although it's not like the original novel or other fanfics, it's quite solid. In terms of fighting, there's basically not much. It's all one move, sneak attack or something like that. It's okay. At first I thought it would be a harem, but later I saw that the heroine was Bidili, and I thought it was pretty good. After all, it was an official match. Come on Only represents personal views

It's not bad. It's one of the few good Gohan fanfics. It's not brainless and invincible. Although the character design is a little off, it's not broken. Except for the fact that Gohan always tells things that he shouldn't know in the first place, it's not handled very well (I need to find a reasonable reason to explain to other people, but there is none, so it affects the perception a bit). Basically, it's not bad.

Very good. I read it all day long. I heard that the author does not update often, so I hope everyone will read this book slowly. How can I put it this way? It is a rare good Dragon Ball article. The logic is basically good. In terms of combat power, it can be seen that the author is trying to fix the loopholes in the original work. The plot is not procrastinating. The protagonist is decisive and has a single heroine, but there are basically no emotional scenes. This is easy to understand. I have watched the Dragon Ball anime for more than ten years. I can't fault this book too much. I can only say that it basically restores the original work well enough. The combat power is not too low. It's very reasonable. It's just short and not enough to watch. The most important thing is that it doesn't drag on. The plot develops very quickly. There are basically no short-term situations. After watching this, I want to see new forms. You can get there soon. You don't need to keep looking forward to becoming stronger.

It looks good, but this one is about Super Four. Gohan is a bit tired of it. I support other Saiyans taking the Super Four route, but Gohan is an exception. Beast Mode is too perfect, with low loss, higher amplification rate than God Blue, and physical strength is no worse than Super Four.

This can be said to be the best batch of fanfics I have ever read. The plot in the book is just like the author's label. It completely matches all my fantasies about time-travelers. Because no matter how big the chapter is or how exciting the plot will be later? The author tries his best to write from the perspective of a time traveler and a fancier. Because there is no system, there is no messy and confusing operation due to system tasks or anything like that. The entire plot can be said to be a time traveler, the best way to write a fanfic. Although doing things cleanly lacks some fun. But it's because of his character. So the apparent reality is not bloody for any reason. Looking at it all, I feel great. It can be said that as long as it doesn't end badly, this is a fanfic that cannot be overstated. 👏👏👏Excellent👏👏👏Excellent👏👏👏Excellent

It looks good, it's really good, I still have more to say As a stranger who has never read the original work and is a fan of the same series, I feel that the viewing is quite good and it seems quite enjoyable [Adoration] Although it has only been updated for more than 40 chapters, which is not enough to read, it is still understandable as the first work of a new author. It's so well written, keep it up [blowing kiss]

At first I saw that the rating was around seven points, but because it was Dragon Ball, I clicked in and read it. The result was beyond imagination. Because Dragon Ball is already quite incompetent and the plot is very outdated, it is really difficult for fans to write it well. This new book is really surprising. It doesn't have the kind of mindless and combative plot, and there is no ambiguity with the female characters. It's a solid one, the protagonist is not a loser but it seemed like I saw the real Gohan reborn. I really like them. I liked Gohan and Videl very much when I was very young. Gohan was also very upset. Although Dragon Ball Super's combat power is pretty bad, I still finished it one episode a week. If this book hadn't been broken, I would have continued to read it day by day. Come on, come on [Sending Hearts] Looking forward to the day when the score reaches nine points

The writing is very good. I have long wanted to find a novel with the protagonist Sun Wufan in the desperate time and space. The protagonist's upgrade, transformation and strength are also very reasonable. Come on, author. Why is the score so low? I obviously feel that this book of Tomato is more in line with the logic of increasing combat power. Although gaining Buu's physique is a bit poisonous, there is nothing else.

This is the best Dragon Ball fanfic I have ever seen. The main character kills decisively without being sloppy. He can be killed without a beep. All kinds of difficult bosses, especially ones like Moro, are dealt with directly in advance. The female lead in the official supporting role does not have many roles, such as No. 18, Who kills with headshots without any nonsense. Although it has been discontinued, it is worth watching.

I enjoyed reading it [laughing]. It is my favorite among the Dragon Ball novels I have read. Other Dragon Ball novels did not suit my taste and I stopped reading after one or two chapters. Come on, author, I give you a five-star review. [Sending Hearts] I feel like there's no need to remove the scars on Gohan's body [thinking], as if they were removed, they would lose their charm. And the scar on Gohan's face was not disfigured in the subsequent plot. I still feel handsome [thinking]

The whole story is very smooth, I like the characters, the style of work is attractive and not brainless, the whole story is also very reasonable, everything can stand the scrutiny, the tragedy of Gohan's world line in the future is also handled well, it is a dream come true. It can be regarded as a breath of fresh air in the Internet literature, not a clichéd flow of literature. The system has not collapsed yet, it is not poisonous, and there is no slobbery. It is very dramatic, the characters are beautifully portrayed, and the writing style is also good. It is not watery and very appreciative. It is a very good book, you can read it with confidence! An author with great potential, come on!

A very good new Dragon Ball book, very interesting

This book is okay. The character portrayal is in line with the original work, the pacing is well-controlled, the plot does not drag on, and the protagonist does not mess around. This is the best part.

Among the Dragon Ball novels I've read, it's pretty well written, and it's pretty good to read, but it's mainly not enough to read. If you haven't read much recently, you can try reading it. It's still worth recommending. [Sending my heart] Good luck to the author too. There is no system and the fact that the combat power has not collapsed so far is actually very good. It would be better if the author could add more [Blow a kiss] [Send heart]

So far, there is nothing wrong with the plot. Gohan maintains his position as the number one in combat power. Xiao Lang is not considered a wave. The overall situation is still very decisive. But I don't know how to write the future plot. The plot feels like it goes by a bit fast.

The writing is good and more watchable. It's not a Dumas plot. You can try to strengthen the villain or create a big crisis. Although I really like watching Dragon Ball Super because it has Angel God of Destruction on the ceiling, it doesn't feel like there is a sense of crisis.

I've read a third of it, and it's pretty good so far. The only thing that makes me a little regretful is that there are so many pictures of Bulma in the front. I thought she was the heroine. It seems unlikely now [face covering] [face covering] [laughing and crying]

Light reading. It's a story, but it's hardly exciting. Soul-traveling Gohan, with a single female lead and an official role, little emotional drama, and a focus on fighting and growth.

Good luck to the author. The book he wrote is very beautiful. I hope you will let me know when you write a book next time. Thank you to the author. It's a very good book. I hope it won't be unfinished. I also hope you can keep updating it. It's very beautiful.

The writing is really good. The characters in the Dragon Ball manga are very realistic and the characters are not broken. The most important thing is that the plot is interesting. I have read a lot of Dragon Ball fan fiction. Basically, 99 Dragon Ball fan stories follow the storyline of the comics, and there is nothing new at all. In other fan works, you can basically know the direction of the subsequent plot without guessing. It is equivalent to inserting an original character into the original comic that cannot change the direction of the plot or the fate of the characters. If there is nothing new, it is better to read the original work several times. This book is different. The story direction is finally not based on the original work. It is interesting to read. I hope the author can use more imagination! When it suits the character, create more original plots. For example, after defeating Frieza, the king slowly integrates into the Z warriors like Piccolo, and then fights against Buu together in the Buu chapter (this is a possible plot direction, the king has a high appearance rate in Dragon Ball Super, and has a tendency to integrate into the protagonist group) For another example, Fat Buu or Little Buu is resurrected, Buu becomes evil again and devours the strong, and the Z warriors fight against Buu again. Taking the above example, I hope that the author can use his imagination more and come up with some original plot according to possible tendencies, so that it will be interesting. (The author's current fate of Gohan, who lives in a special time and space, is not a plot that evolved based on possible trends.) Now that I see the author writing about Baby, I am looking forward to writing a different plot. If we follow the original work, Bebe is not strong enough for the current protagonists to fight in a group. For example, Baby possessed Vegeta, and finally possessed One Star Dragon. I have thought about this kind of plot trend before watching GT. How powerful would it be if Baby didn't die early and possessed a one-star dragon?

Aside from the fact that the author is always missing and not updated, this book is still a very good Dragon Ball fanfic. [Eat melon]

It's very interesting, but there are too few Tomato novels. It's based on Future Gohan, so it should be written more vividly.

Compared to most Dragon Balls, this one really doesn't have much of a poisonous point, basically none. And the desire to catch up on updates is back. Come on, author, come on, the writing is really good, very good! ! ❤️Love you author

The book is very good and very faithful to the original work. It may be limited by the subject matter of Dragon Ball, which makes it too difficult to write later. After reaching the Tournament of Power, it is almost impossible to read it. This has nothing to do with the author, it is simply that I cannot write it.

It's really good so far [thinking], the author will update soon! [Punch out][Punch out][Punch out]

Five-star praise shows respect, the author, please give it a try!

This author writes very well. He has written almost everything Dragon Ball fans can think of.