Slay the Gods: The Fool Above the Gray Mist Descends into the World

But so far it seems that the writing is good, there are a lot of words in one chapter, and it is very enjoyable to read. I personally don't feel very OOC, it's pretty normal. I have only watched the mysterious anime, but I still think the author's writing is very thoughtful. (Maybe it's my personal feeling) I can't find other fans of the same type, but this one is pretty good [shy] I'll point out the comments so that you can see them. Please run away for the AI article.

It's a very good article, but I personally feel that the pace is a bit slow and one clue is mentioned repeatedly in the article. The metaphor is very subtle and mysterious. The writing is great, but I feel that Xiao Ke's character could be richer (?) After time travel, I lost his complaints and soul-crushing thoughts.

Overall, it looks good, the plot is quite novel, the characters are not very OOC, and I found that each chapter has a lot of words, which makes me feel very happy. Why is it missing 1 point? It's because this is a minor article, so few. I hope you can stick to it. When I write more chapters, I will come back to make a supplementary review. ૮₍◜ෆ◝.₎ა

Looks good! ! ! ! ! Neither God Slayer nor The Fool has OOC. Although it lacks some of the distinctive characteristics of the characters, the story is novel and the characters are impressively recreated. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It feels okay, everything else is pretty good, except that it could use a little more description of the psychological activities of the characters, complaining, etc. Otherwise, it feels like the characters are a bit flat and Xiao Ke's humanity seems to be very scarce. The plot is okay, but I feel like it could use less sentence patterns that are not... But..., Otherwise it will look like AI. Don't imitate AI, otherwise it will look like corpse parts. In fact, you can also write as few words as possible and define sentences. Then the tone of speaking of different people, the choice of words and sentences, etc. Can be enriched. Otherwise, if it looks like what one person says, not all of them answer the questions in the simplest sentence structure. There are always characters who like to talk casually or have oral habits. (For example, the character Xiao Ke, he actually has a lot of complaints in his heart. If Xiao Ke is originally a thin-hearted person, then just pretend I didn't say anything.) Then there are incidents all the time, but the plot is a bit too compact, there is no place to relax, and it is a bit boring to read. Even in the compact plot, there should be some lighter plots to adjust the atmosphere. (Well, my description is so strange.) (Am I being a little too harsh? I started to give pointers. If the author had just started writing, he would have been very good. At least I couldn't write. I'm sorry orz...) Stacked Armor: The above are all my personal opinions, no offense intended. Overall it's pretty good! Come on, author, keep writing! You will definitely get better and better as you write!

I don't know if it's because of me, but sometimes the perspective and timeline are confused. I can see that the writing is a bit raw but the plot logic is pretty good [shy] Did you write about sleepwalking?

Seeing that the characters of Klein and God-Zlayer are not too OOC, and each chapter has a lot of words, I personally think it is one of the best mysterious God-Zlayer fanfics in Tomato. The author must continue to write more! ! ! ! I will always follow you! ! ! ! ! ! !

All my comments and complaints are gone, I hope I can add them later (◍ ´꒳` ◍)

There are no big problems with the characters, but I feel that the timeline is a bit messy, and there are differences from the original work of Zhan Shen (for example, Cao Yuan's Black King doesn't seem to be holding a sword and will not tempt him to draw it, although I didn't read the original work very carefully), but overall it's good

The writing is very good, and it feels like it's being told eloquently. However, the number of words in the last chapter is a bit short, and the combat power system of the two novels is not organized together, but it is really well written. I personally like this writing style better.