The Heirloom Ring Opens a Portal to Another World

The writing is smooth, the plot is twists and turns, and the emotions are delicate! Nice! Nice!

When I tell stories, I do so step by step, not mindlessly, forcefully pretending to be a slap in the face, and not the kind of extreme pull that is unreasonable just for the sake of good-looking data and pursuit of pleasure. I am a storyteller, not a data writer. If you like that kind of fast food, please go next door and please be merciful and be kind. I am a professional author who makes a living by writing. I work more than ten hours a day. It is not easy to make money without asking for rewards. But I hope you can share a good-sounding and beautiful story. I will try my best to make the story more reasonable. Some comments said that my writing pace was slow, and they talked about the three golden chapters. Lin Qingyao, who first appeared, was an important female supporting character. It was necessary to set the stage. Otherwise, if she suddenly liked her, she would have to marry the male protagonist. Is it reasonable? This story is about the protagonist's journey from the mortal realm, to the practice market, to the holy land of immortal cultivation, to the tribulation and ascension, to the fairy world... The writing outline is three million words. Listening to stories and reading books is a pastime. You have been busy all day. I think you should calm down and relax yourself, instead of reading in a hurry that does not explain the process and just laughs at the beginning. Life is meant to be enjoyed slowly, why rush? You hurried to the front and saw that it was still the same. Of course I love the foreplay process, and there is nothing wrong with you just wanting a few seconds of extreme pleasure. Please read another book. I won't say you are wrong, and don't scold me. Thank you in advance. However, the step-by-step approach I am talking about does not mean grinding and grinding. There is no ambiguity in making changes, there is no moral kidnapping, and there is rarely any frustration, and most of them are tough. There are some who assess the situation, accumulate strength and then fight back, but not many. Thank you for your support and wish you a happy life, smooth work and good health.

As a man, you are more naive than a woman. This kind of double penetration text must first have power, power above power. Don't underestimate the blood of capital and the petty willfulness of power.

The technique is unique, the writing is very humane, the fantasy also has basic logic, the storyline is fascinating, I will never forget it, thank you editor for your hard work! Teacher editor, why is it like this little by little every day?

It's quite intentional, the plot is relatively vulgar, the writing is decent, and the writing is quite detailed. I read more than ten chapters in one go.

Living Bodhisattva pig's feet, let the light of humanity shine on this other world.

Five-star support, it's not easy [laughing and crying] I don't understand but respect it, although there are many flaws 🌚 and it looks too warm [laughing and crying] The protagonist is too kind, not suitable for me, the kindness of the protagonist is incompatible with the times 😂 I don't understand but respect it , the author is also a kind-hearted person of the times, free novels, all are poor, and the poor are not embarrassed. Normally, I would give five stars, unless it really disgusts me [laughing and crying] Come on ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧I ran away [laughing and crying]

The writing is good and the story is well-written.

The fantasy novel is very good, with unlimited space for imagination, and it is beautiful. Come on!

It's okay, I just read a dozen chapters. The writing is good. It feels like a small bridge and flowing water.