After Reincarnating as a Villainous Male Supporting Character, the Heroine Won't Leave Me Alone

Current thoughts: The genius swordsman girl Tokyo Arnold, Peter who was violated by the glory of humanity, the gravity-based weapon master and the cool girl, the tsundere villain Lucifer (

Fat fat red sun, Exiled with bulging bullets, Thunder transforms into a small road, Three slave heads swayed. A doting jingle bell, If you rub a ring, it will shine. A fake phantom limb marathon, long-distance running is too exaggerated Hee hee, hee hee! Press the sound patiently, Hee hee, hee hee! The snacks that are thrown away will glow. Hee hee, hee hee! We love the old wolf in the backyard the most, Hee hee, hee hee! Soul 5 mecha, return to its position!

The current score is 79, not reaching the 8th turn, but the peak of the 7th turn. Be proud of the author, you are very strong. There are some things that need to be told to everyone first. The person who makes weapons for the hero is male, but looks female. His personality is roughly that of an autistic homebody. I don't know if it will be accepted. I feel like it should be. Because the protagonist said a lot of ambiguous words. If you can accept that this book is pretty good at the moment, if you can't accept it, then... (Playing machine sound) 20 points The plot is that the protagonist enters a game, which is very classic. The protagonist is a family dude and faces a military challenge at the beginning. The protagonist wins the challenge by finding someone to make magic fire guns, purchasing and finding props. Later, due to family problems, in order to solve the money problem, he accompanied his second daughter, the proud daughter, on an adventure. During the adventure, the male protagonist leads to a large dungeon through the contract elf. It hasn't been updated since. The plot is reasonable, there are no mistakes so far, it is very smooth, and there are no embarrassing plots. There are currently some flaws in the rationality of character behavior. The protagonist is a playboy, and his reputation in school is very bad. It can be said that he is responsible for all bad things. The pink-haired heroine at the beginning had a big conflict with the protagonist because she stood up for someone else, leading to a duel. After the duel, the way the male protagonist and the pink-haired female protagonist get along can be said to be sympathetic, or just bickering. Slightly unreasonable. There's nothing unreasonable about the other characters' interactions with each other. The plot between the hero and the daughter is good.

It's very interesting. If you can understand the author's plot, it will be a masterpiece. For example, BS2's pocket watch, various elements of Dark Souls, the Lei Ninja Sect, etc. Basically, I can get everything the author wants to do. It's very interesting.

I have just read chapter 100 so far. Pink Hair is adorable, Lucifer is a proud and arrogant older generation, the little boy is the most sensible one, and Peter is like a human being. Overall, he is thriving. Then there's the cat, who helps save Peter and Lucifer at the beginning, helps Luke advance the plot, gives Peter some small hooks, and gives Peter some goals for progress. And then he doesn't overwhelm the protagonist, which is actually pretty good. (Maybe evil has invaded this world, and at the cost of some help, let the male protagonist help solve it) But in recent chapters, this cat wanted to take the initiative to deal with a clone on the opposite side (and went there without consulting Peter). However, the opposite side was stronger than it and became weak. The human Peter took the clone over while he was still in a meeting. No, buddy, you asked Peter to help solve the evil, but you went to solve the clone without telling Peter. In the end, you brought the big daddy back. The final result was to learn information that Peter had guessed a long time ago. It's hard to be honest, brother, this cat currently looks like a guide elf or a system existence (the presence is not high, but the effect is not small). Although it is good to have some subjective initiative, it is not a good idea to directly hit the opponent, which is a dangerous behavior. After all, Peter and the cat have little interaction. Although they are strongly related to each other, they have no emotional basis and have to cover up his impulsiveness (yes, it is not a mistake or misjudgment. I feel that regardless of whether he has the strength to solve the clone, he should tell Peter. After all, it is about saving the world). The impression is not good. However, the current shortcomings are limited to this cat's behavior. Generally speaking, the flaws are not concealed, the plot and text are not bad, the characters are very interesting, the author can draw, and the story is very interesting, not bad👍🏻.

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The writing is good, and the author can draw character pictures, which is really a plus [admiration]. It's just that the new book has a little less words. No, what's the use of this dead cat? 🙂

I thought it was abstract, but it turned out to be surprisingly good-looking. To be honest, at the beginning, I always substituted the face of the protagonist as Pete from Birth House.

I hope there is a big cock. When Pete encounters it, his stats will automatically explode and then they will fight each other.

It's okay, there are no big logical mistakes at the moment. The character of the protagonist is also quite special and very distinct. But the shaping is not enough. When appropriate, the protagonist can be made to eat and hold back. If he is the joker for a few episodes, it is not surprising that he is Peter anyway. I just like the protagonist's unyielding spirit [Admiration]