The World Became a Game, but Forgot to Generate the Players

The early stage is good, there are no logical flaws, but the middle and late stages are a bit boring. Considering it's a free Tomato book, I'll give it five stars. The actual level is probably barely four stars in my mind. It is worth watching, but it is not a five-star masterpiece. The advantage is that the setting is very detailed and novel, the logic is flawless, and the step-by-step plot in the front is eye-catching. However, as the pace of the plot is getting faster and faster later, the protagonist is busy with a large number of dungeons and piles of values, and there is almost no detailed plot development. The story is too boring, and the protagonist himself does not have a three-dimensional and full personality and pursuits, so it can hardly be called a masterpiece... At least there were some detailed descriptions of the plot in the early stage. After the protagonist started to switch between multiple identities, it became a simple copy and opened so many vests without any scruples. As a result, the main content was seriously scattered and the protagonist's action trajectory became fragmented and confusing. The author was obviously unable to grasp this complex narrative structure, which made the entire story progress quickly and boring. The content was not elaborated and could only be piled up... It's a pity. If it can maintain the previous rhythm, this book will be a masterpiece if not a masterpiece. To be honest, the further you look back, the more boring you become...

Treasure Story, the pace is a bit slow at the beginning, but becomes smoother and smoother later on. Although the title of the article is "Breaking the World", it is not a mindless article. Instead, it exudes a righteous air of knowing the world without being worldly. The author has a high level of cultural literacy.

It is really one of the rare masterpieces in Tomato. The logic is smooth and the character description is very good. Because I didn't look at the name carefully several times, the more I looked at it, the more I liked it. I can only say that it is highly recommended [like] [like]

Not mediocre, but too dull. As I kept up with the update progress, I found that the protagonist did not have any strong emotional fluctuations, and the journey was smooth. There were no bad things, and there were no people plotting against him. Of course, you can also explain that there are no emotional fluctuations because the protagonist has always been in the perspective of the game. There are no bad things and no people plotting against him. You can also say that people in this world are generally more idealistic, high-quality, and more intelligent. But as a novel, there still need to be some stories with strong emotional fluctuations and impressive memories as readers' memory points. Although the author's writing style is very good and his knowledge is rich, but as I read it, I felt that I was using the writing style and knowledge reserve of a top scholar to write an advanced version of a running account composition. I am not here to write a black book, but to raise some issues that I have seen with the author. Whether I can see it and adopt it all depends on fate.

At first I thought the title of the book was very abstract, and it felt like a mindless piece of writing. But the actual content is very interesting, all the characters' actions are logical, there are basically no loopholes, and the writing style is very good, not the kind of pure and simple novel. For example, everyone will understand. For example, if there is a plot paragraph that violates logic, in a normal Tomato novel, everyone will basically question the plot here, but in this novel, many people guess whether the author has any deep meaning in writing this way. The summary is that it is a cool article but not brainless. Don't be fooled by the name. You can tell from the first chapter that it is different from that kind of assembly line article.

It's a good read. The content is very solid and detailed. I read it for a long time before I got to Chapter 20. It's very engaging and interesting. The supporting characters described so far all have normal intelligence, and the protagonists also have their own interests. I'm surprised to see a novel with this kind of writing on Tomato. The protagonist's strength has been constantly suppressed. If it were a normal person, he would have already maxed out his skills. The protagonist's skills are all provided by others. The author seems to particularly like to use this feeling of middle-level combat power being involved in many parties. In the past few dozen chapters, the upper limit of combat power has not moved at all, and it is all about cultivating the body and mixing forces.

It can be seen from the characterization of the small characters that the author has great writing skills. At the same time, he has abandoned the tediousness of traditional online games and focused on simplicity. Moreover, the plot progresses smoothly and logically, so you won't feel uncomfortable watching it. It really beats 99% of the works, with a bit of serious literature.

The author of this book really makes me love and hate him. What I love is that his setting is very novel and unconventional. It can even be said that he deconstructs the game-type online articles, and his ideas are also clear. What I hate is that after the excitement and freshness in the early stage has passed, in the middle stage, it starts to procrastinate a lot and repeat descriptions, just like playing a game and constantly brushing up on repeated materials. If it's a simple game, the protagonist will go around worshiping him all day long. As a super Yuan person, the main plot is not even clear. This is not a game like Luan Keqiyuan. You should let us know what the protagonist is going to do. He just pretends to be cool all day long. Use a clone to show off, use a puppet to show off, and see that the purpose of the protagonist is even missing, and it is not clear how strong the protagonist is. It all depends on the opponent. Anyway, I hope the author can come back, and I also hope that your creations will get better and better, and your literary thoughts will flow like a fountain.

It's very good. It's an eight-point score if it doesn't have any poisonous points in Tomato. There are no poisonous points in this book. There is no heroine. The supporting characters are intelligent and the villains are normal. The setting is good and the writing style is good. The interweaving of vernacular and classical Chinese has a good look. Moreover, the skill introduction of the wearer makes the whole book look high-end.

Good, good, good, not like a book that could be published by Tomato. It is well organized and logical. It tells the story of a young boy who traveled to a strange world and grew up step by step. The best thing is that there is no rush to explain the world, all the clues are integrated into the story, and the protagonist slowly discovers it.