Wuxia Online Game: From the Start, Three God-Tier Traits

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Overall, it's good, but what I read should be the version revised by the author. It doesn't have any bad points. In addition to the problem that other readers mentioned that the plot crisis is too dense, there are two small problems. One is why the protagonist's use of skills does not increase the level. [Tiangong Kaiwu (Cai): When you use an item, you can increase its effect by one level. , Either I understood it wrong, or the skills are not items, and the protagonist's emotional control every time he encounters a crisis. If the protagonist is not afraid of crises, or can resolve crises well, I believe no one will say that the crises are too intensive, and the protagonist will regret it for a long time. Even if the problem is solved in the end, there will always be a feeling of dissatisfaction, but these problems will not affect the viewing. Recommended reading, it is a rare good book [Send my heart][Send my heart] I'm really speechless. Killing random people on the road has a background, and the protagonist can be found in all the backgrounds. It doesn't stop for a moment.

In the early stage, a group of mini-bosses were famous, but in the middle stage, they were not as good as a passerby.

It's okay. It's a pure upgrade flow, but it doesn't feel exciting enough. The main reason is that the information is more comfortable, and the emotional line is also very in line with the standards of online games. It's too pure. It's really hand-made. The plot is relatively coherent. The outline should be complete. It's just that the start of the park is a bit awkward. After all, it's easy to block this thing if you write it randomly.

Goodbye, author. I have no choice but to make this decision. I hope I Let's meet again by chance. Because something unexpected happened Love has a greater impact and blow on me, so I want to formally talk to you. Don't. I really miss you guys. It's really nice to get to know you. Happy. I came across your book a few days ago and I feel like it is really a treasure. I have been reading your book for so long, but the joy and joy you bring me It's touching but unforgettable, but there's nothing I can do about it, isn't life like this? Yes, full of helplessness. I hope you can always stick to your original intention like this Keep going and persist until the end. Thank you again for bringing me so much. So happy and touching, angry and sad, thank you for your continued support these days Stay with me. The main reason for leaving this time is because I am sleepy Now, I'm going to bed. I'll come back tomorrow and remember to update.

Up to now, I feel good. I hope that the pit dug in the early stage can be rounded. The growth type protagonist can suppress the protagonist's development. However, there must be clear limits for each realm stage. It cannot be like other novels, where small cities go to big cities, and the masters can travel everywhere. Regarding the early environment introduction, high-level masters must have opportunities, talents, and talents. They are not randomly refreshed like those wild monsters to act as cannon fodder, because in the early stage, the antagonistic leader of the Demon Sect has been there for decades. The level is only so high. If there were a big city like that, and any young man could catch up with their level, then it would feel like the combat power would collapse faster, and there would be nothing to see. I hope the author can figure it out.

It's good for the author to listen to advice, but the poisonous points can be changed. You can follow your own way of plot outline. The editor of Qidian said a few days ago: For novice authors, writing about a harem is the best route, and 95% of people voted for harem. Of course I'm not asking you to write about a harem, but if all your books are crowdfunded, how will you write your next one? Also crowdfunding? So how can you have stable readers? If you look at the authors of Qidian, not only readers are screening their works, but the authors are also screening readers. Good emotional drama is a bonus, but if it is not well written, write less. Follow the outline. There are indeed things that many readers think are poisonous. You can change or delete them, but don't crowdfund to write a book.

It feels pretty good. I feel like I didn't pay much attention to the bad reviews in the comment area. First, the reason for being tied to the park is mainly because the author's specific national conditions do not allow the protagonist to play this game, and then he was tied to the park to play. Second, when it comes to abusing the protagonist, in the game the protagonist is living a good life, but in reality he was beaten at the beginning, but nothing happened after that, and even ran away in the latest chapter. Third, I really have nothing to say about licking the second-generation female in the park. Does this count as licking? Doesn't the protagonist have a normal attitude? Then use her

It's very interesting. At the beginning, she was caught playing death martial arts in Myanmar. The yandere lady of Big BOOS entered the game with her own body. The protagonist challenged all the forces alone at the beginning. It's a very interesting masterpiece with a score of 9 or above.

Currently reading 86 chapters, it's okay and worth reading. It's just that the upgrade is relatively fast. At this speed, it feels like it takes less than a year for the protagonist to complete the four major realms. And there are also reasons for the fast upgrade due to the tight plot. There is also the fact that the map and background explanation are not clear. It is easy for a new realm to appear later, and then it may start to cultivate immortality. This is a bit poisonous. In addition, there is the issue of the real world line. There are some sensitive topics and embarrassing issues about force value. If a sensitive topic is not handled well, the book will be blocked or it will cause poisonous points and cause the book to be abandoned. The force value is embarrassing. Generally speaking, except for the rule level that the protagonist has cultivated, the force of normal people cannot compare to the firepower, and the writing is not that exciting. Also, the background of this kind of power-gaining game is usually either aliens or gods. It is awkward to have a martial arts training system that is not as good as ordinary firepower. If the combat power suddenly increases later, it is poisonous as I said before. I hope the author can set up a big framework early and show it. There are definitely some poisonous points in the plot. Although there are many small problems, they are problems of proficiency or writing skills, and it is not easy to solve them if they are raised. In addition, I suggest authors get more free gifts, because I heard that it is really difficult to make money on Tomato. Even if you read tens of thousands of books, the salary is less than 1,000. It is still too difficult to get free. The author's market will be impacted, which will lead to many authors cutting books.