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After careful consideration, I finally came to the conclusion that this book is really good to read, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are also very good.

It's pretty good. I suggest that the protagonist communicate with Orochimaru. I haven't seen such a human-machine protagonist for a long time, and the plot is not ups and downs enough now. How to say it? The author probably wrote it purely by hand, because AI would not be able to write such a plain text. It most likely has many onomatopoeias and adjectives. It is recommended that the author use AI to expand the writing, and then the author writes and refines it. In this case, there will be more updates, and the author only needs to think about where the plot needs to be changed. [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates] 1+1=2×10, or? 1×10+1, According to the author's description, it should be the one in the back. If it is the protagonist in the front, the current physical skills can already defeat the shadow.

To be honest, it looks great. The succubus is as pale as a chrysanthemum, and her human-machine feeling makes outsiders feel that she is as gentle as water and has a light emotion. Can't help but be attracted. The words and knowledge he occasionally speaks make people feel that they are not simple. The development of the plot completely and unconsciously deviates from the original work, changing slowly like water, which is different from the style of other novels.

It's quite beautiful, although there are some parts that don't stand up to careful consideration, but they are innocuous. The main character has a good outlook on life, but Naruto fanfics are considered thin. It can be seen that the author has a deep understanding of Naruto. The supporting characters can be said to be very comfortable to watch. It has changed a lot and the quality has also declined. I don't recommend it as much as I did at the beginning.

The story of an ordinary, insensitive Uchiha who is a silent cheater in daily life, and a little happy Uchiha who slowly changes the people around him is quite interesting [laughing][crying with laughter]

[Eat melon] After reading it, I think it's okay, but the author prefers the word "de" [face-covering] Basically, as long as you need:, the word "de" will definitely appear in places like "" [face-covering] It's a bit uncomfortable to read [laughing and crying] "De" in various tones [face-covering]

I can't suffer the loss alone

It's very interesting, and the protagonist is also very interesting. Unlike AI, typos are common after all, but the details are not right, especially about Orochimaru and science. Naruto's technology tree is modern, although some places are crooked, but refrigerators, electric lights, etc. Are real, and there are trains, and there is electricity after four stops. Car, so I suggest the author to read this part carefully, otherwise it will cause special problems (such as electric motors, refrigerators, etc.). Orochimaru's character goal is to hope that the wind will rise + immortality. Both of these are very important and cannot be separated. I think it is a bit OOC. He can study other things, but he can never give up the study of the physical body.

[Chigua] It's a very novel way of writing, but it doesn't seem to highlight the power of the protagonist's death. It seems to be the effect of 24-hour training at ten times the speed, but others have to sleep. In fact, it should be twenty times the progress of others.

Moe no Moe Keiguchi♡(.◜ω◝.)♡ Hexagram, you are a little human machine (hexagram: bro? I didn't work hard, okay... Itachi is so cute in this book (suspected of being infected by the human-machine divination? Quanhaoqi wahaha kawaii pinch (os: angry Modo Modo This book feels so clear Good review! ! ! ! ! (..›ᴗ‹..) ⸝⸝⸝⸝⸝ ♡