Naruto: Leaving Konoha to Build a Shinobi Nation

Pretty good. It's a farming genre. But adding that whirlpool heroine didn't feel good. After all, Hinata was so good to the protagonist and was willing to abandon everything to go out with the protagonist before he showed his strength. In the end, he had to share it with others.

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It's pretty good. It's much better than those villages like Konoha where everyone rejects Uchiha.

Yes, if you like to read Naruto farming stories, you can take a look. Personally, I think it's good. Let's see how it's written later. But compared to the previous farming stories, I feel there's still a gap. How can I put it, there are too few interesting points, and some of the more exciting parts are not written out. Moreover, farming is relatively vague, and there is no detailed division.

Well, although the writing is boring, the general result is the same. Ninja World is still good, but it just lacks some abstract comedy concepts, such as letting Madara and Hasimala get married.

Yes, the dialogue is like a human-computer one. You say something to me, like an assembly line. The plot is a little better than the writing, but there is a lot of room for improvement. I look forward to growing.

It's a pretty good Naruto series fan novel. There's no pretentiousness. It slowly shows the process of development. The changes in people and the environment can be seen as alternative construction literature. I give it a full five-star rating. It's good if the author maintains his status. If it's the opposite, it's just a stalemate.

It's pretty good, but I feel it should have been written by AI and then modified and polished manually. When Uzumaki Suikou spoke to Kyuubi, Kyuubi felt freer than with Uzumaki Kushina. At that time, Uzumaki Kushina was not even born yet. How did you know? But no one said anything, I don't know why. There is also a future daughter who doesn't seem to know Susanoo's perfection. This feeling is also AI. My daughter already has a kaleidoscope. How could she not know Susanoo's perfection? In addition to these two obvious AIs, there are also some other places where the reading is not smooth. I don't know if it is due to AI or manual modification. Apart from these places, everything else is pretty good and can be seen.

I remember that after I traveled through the world without any risk, I was very happy and sang a song called "The Blood Song of the Three Realms". I was discovered by the "Lord of the Stars" and took me to the "Journey to the Misty World" and entered the "Heavens and Worlds". I met the "God of Killing" known as the "Natural Disaster". He sat on the "Throne of the Divine Seal" and wanted to kill me, but was saved by the "Nine Heavens Sword Demon". After they recovered from their injuries, they said goodbye to me. Later, he recommended me to "The Evil King of Another World" and made "Underworld Special Forces" in "Peerless Tang Sect". There, "Galaxy Emperor" taught me "Swallowing the Starry Sky", and "Qin Emperor" taught me how to play the piano. I was developing Final Intelligence there, and I had Clairvoyant Eyes. When I have nothing to do, "The Magic Chef of Ice and Fire" teaches me how to cook, and "The God of Bacchus" teaches me how to mix wine. The most powerful one is the "Emperor". His old man taught me the "unparalleled magical power" of "Unique in the World", and I followed the path of the "Emperor's Supreme". Soon after, I trained the "Immortal" divine body. Under the "Heaven Realm and Firmament", I used the "Destroy the Sky Map" to defeat the world's best master "The Evil God" and snatched the "Throne of the End of the Dharma". However, the world could not bear my power, and the space was shattered. I was sucked into the "Perfect World" and returned to the "Wild Era" Yuan~~~Oh! I am getting old, and now it is your young people's world, but young people, you have to update!

It's very good except that it's too idealistic and everything is too simple. There's no suspense. You know what you're going to do at a glance. There are also a few heroines who don't handle each other well. Others are very consistent with my understanding of farming. Overall, it's very good.