Naruto: Every Word I Speak Is a Forbidden Technique

(Have read the first volume) To be honest, when I first saw the title of this book, I thought it was a mindless cool novel type, and the introduction gave me that feeling. However, after reading the first volume, I found that Shuzhen Aoki is a particularly cute protagonist (｡ì _ í｡) He obviously cares about himself and the people around him, but he secretly hides it in his heart. He is a cute little boy with a cold face (*^^*) The author has a good grasp of the friendship between Xiao Xiu and Naruto, Sasuke and Xiao Li, but sometimes he can also write about other people's psychology. For example, when Xiao Xiu makes Naruto feel deflated, he can not only write about Sasuke's shaking shoulders, but also his thoughts on this, or Naruto's. The little interactions written by the author are really great🤩The awkward emotions are not just for repairing, but the little notes and candies are all cute🥰It can be seen that the author is really not good at writing emotional scenes. There are no scenes of Sakura chasing Sasuke and Naruto chasing Sakura. It is quite comfortable to watch, the plot is relatively compact, and the writing style is generally more cheerful. I was still wondering whether Xiao Xiu's hanging up too much would have an impact, but only five words a day solved this problem very well. It is not a brainless novel. I feel so happy when I see this kind of warmth ☺️ Moreover, the small theater at the beginning of each chapter is also very interesting and makes people smile. The language is humorous and funny. There is no inexplicable h. It is very refreshing. Xiao Xiu's emotional expression and cute collecting habit really poked me. However, the author also has some areas for improvement. I will not praise the author blindly, but I will not belittle him either. In Chapter 27, the note written by Xiu has four words "One more year" but it says three words in front of it. There is also the same problem in Chapter 31, "The Late King" has four words but three words written in the text. I think the author cannot make mistakes in this kind of problem, and in It appeared twice in the 30 or so chapters I read. I am not opposed to using AI to polish the writing. After all, human ability is limited, but the overall feeling is that the AI taste should not be too strong, let alone writing directly with AI, and it is also a novel for readers to read and make money. (If I misunderstood or the author really didn't understand the third and fourth, I didn't say it. I apologize in advance, I'm sorry🙏) Also, I repeatedly emphasized that the little gift Xiu received was indeed cute, but I hope there can be more ways for Xiu to receive care (in my personal opinion). Grandma Milk's Milk and Xiao Li Baicai's writings are really good👍 Finally, I really hope that this book is good enough to write such a long paragraph (this person couldn't help but want to write a book review after reading the first volume (._.)). I hope the author can see that he should maintain the advantages and correct the shortcomings. The potential of this book is acceptable, and the author's attitude is acceptable. Although there is a lot of nonsense, it is of no use. I look forward to the day when it becomes popular (quietly wishing for no cp) hehe (＾∇＾)

Thank you very much for your willingness to read my novel and for accompanying me all the way till now. Let me tell you something first: Even if it is a one-star negative review, I will accept it calmly. If I make a mistake, I have to admit it. If my ability is temporarily insufficient, I will accept criticism and grow slowly. Regardless of whether everyone's words are gentle or fierce, I will carefully look at all voices and seriously correct them. You may have noticed that I have revised this part four times recently. Each time it is not just a small revision, but an entire paragraph is overturned, reorganized, and written from scratch. As a new author, sometimes my ideas are confused, and I also mix up the content of previously revised versions. I can only polish it over and over again, trying to tell the story smoothly and write the content well. For this plot, I even repeatedly changed four versions of the story with completely different directions, just to tell everyone the smoothest and most comfortable story. Since I have opened this book, I will definitely have a beginning and an end, and try my best to write it down. I will try my best to write as well as I can, so as to live up to everyone who is willing to read my book. Thank you all for being willing to tolerate me, a new person who is still growing. Every criticism you have is motivation for me to move forward. [Sending Hearts]

It looks good, I think the protagonist is very interesting, I hope there is no female protagonist (it's not impossible to have two men, of course it's just my own idea, the author has his own ideas and won't interfere)

Now that I've seen it, I think the plot is pretty good and the character of the main character really struck a chord with me. So the author will update more [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

After watching it for a while, the little theater at the beginning of each chapter is very interesting, everyone is so cute haha The teacher's writing style has a touch of humor, and everyone's interactions are very interesting. It can be seen that the teacher really wants to write the story well. I've only read Chapter 11, and I haven't encountered any particularly exciting plot yet. The daily routine is very interesting, and I really like this feeling of a steady flow of water. The current evaluation may be a bit superficial... Mainly because I have a lot to say and I can't hold it back haha I will most likely follow up after seeing this, and I am looking forward to Xiu's story_(•̀ω•́ ∠)_ Chapter 18, Granny Milk I don't know exactly what it feels like, but it feels like eating a roasted astringent orange. It's astringent, but something warm goes into your stomach, which feels a little comforting.

It's okay, it's about three generations of good guys, and I really like the protagonist's character. Do you have a CP?

Not tied yet. But let's comment first. My personal conclusion is that I am not toxic at the moment, and I consider my emotional direction to be very comfortable and delicate... As for my skills, I am also pretending to be cool, which is quite cool, but it is a little less "cool" than some articles in the world, and for some people it is If it can be too bland (?), Then the writing direction will be more inclined to write about bonds and emotions, as well as the changes, personality, and thoughts of the protagonist as he grows up. It is still quite touching after reading it. Readers who are not interested in this and want to watch pure fighting can consider it at their own discretion. I originally came here to read cool articles, hahahahaha, I fought, fought, fought! I admit that I was a little impatient at first, but the more I watched later, the more I felt. In fact, I quite like the tone of it. It feels like the protagonist really exists in the world of Naruto. Carving wood and collecting things given by friends is to confirm the fact that I have existed, even if some things are garbage in the eyes of others. It feels really good, plain and warm. In terms of some settings and plots, they are not actually novel, and some descriptions can only be said to be okay, but the author's grasp of the degree and emotion is really good. Everyone has different perceptions. I can't say that I can make everyone relate to it. I can only say that I can feel the author's seriousness from the text and his affirmation of the bond between the protagonist and other people. Coming to this world alone, he felt like he was drifting in a long and thin river. After six long years, he passed through the mist that could smell the fishy salt and moisture on the sea surface, and finally found the lighthouse he had been pursuing on the edge of the boundless sky, which was the meaning of existence in this world. Keep up the good work, author! ! So far I feel it's okay, at least it makes me feel comfortable reading.

I also spent one night reading the latest chapter of this book, which is close to the first 100 chapters. How can I evaluate it? It is a rare book. As for whether it is a good book, it depends on the angle from which you read this book. This book does not go into detail about the combat power, nor does it explore the politics of Naruto in depth, so you can see the exaggeration of the protagonist's combat power in the article. I even think it can be described as collapse, but this is not what the author wanted to write. I think the author of this book is just writing about the changes of the protagonist. , From a helpless time traveler looking for the anchor of his existence in every detail, to gradually starting to lose his way after revenge, and his emotions began to become indifferent. It is a pity that the author only wrote it here, otherwise I would not know how long it would take to sleep tonight. For me, it is an unusual Naruto fanfic, and it is really good. Of course, there are some shortcomings. The logic in some places needs to be optimized. To be honest, the interaction between the protagonist and the system in the early stage of the article is too much (too many complaints), which is a flaw (almost abandoning the book). But in fact, after seeing the protagonist's emotional disappearance and the interaction with the system, I feel that the previous foreshadowing is necessary. In fact, I am looking forward to the follow-up content, watching the protagonist turn into a weird thing. As well as the necessary criticism, the aesthetic needs to be optimized. If you can't make the protagonist's appearance more handsome, (although after reading it, I feel that the appearance has become the anchor of the protagonist's human cognition), you still have to criticize! Anyway, that's it. I think it's a good book to read. I'll give you some suggestions at the end (if the author can read this comment). First of all, we have planned to write a different version of Naruto. We hope to highlight the personality changes of the supporting characters. At present, it seems that the background role of Naruto in this book is The character has not changed from the original work, which I don't think is a good thing. The second step is to strengthen the logic. The protagonist's system is inexplicably strengthened (it feels not as good as the Sharingan because the emotions become stronger). It is recommended to adopt the logic that the more emotions are stripped away, the stronger they become. This is also in line with the author's current way of writing the protagonist. It's almost done. I hope the author writes better and better. I'll support the book (´-ωก`)

Hahahahahahahahaha, I really like it, super cute protagonist, very powerful, and his little habits are very interesting (what the hell is it like to peel cabbage [laughing and crying], secretly said, I really like eating cabbage [I learned it]), the short story at the beginning of each chapter is super interesting, the system is also cute, the words are nice and interesting [laughing], you deserve it!

Well written The author's character is very real and there are many places that are particularly warm [heartfelt] So far, there have been no surprises. Give me a five-star encouragement! (Be sure not to have CP!!!