I Am the End of Sword and Sorcery

The writing is worthy of five stars. My expectations for this book were also five stars. Disadvantages: 1. The pace is too slow, in various senses: The slow pace of time is not a problem, but it is not an excuse either. The key is that you must be advancing one of the two worldviews and emotional lines. It is now known that the protagonist is a territorial son on the border of a country in a continent in one of many worlds. Chapter 50 has finally set off to a neighboring territory; on the emotional line, the two maids are still using the authority of their mother to put pressure on the protagonist. The relationship between the elf and the maid is progressing faster than the protagonist. 2. It's still a question of two maids: except when they are babies, do the protagonist and the maid interact with each other? Where is the close contact I'm looking forward to with the cat girl? Are the ears and tail still not allowed to be touched? Can't you rub your head? I don't think this is a rhythm issue. Since it's a noble setting, why isn't the maid's initial intimacy level maxed out? 3. Small problem: Tian Xiaohu didn't feel immersive, so I skipped it directly. 4. A big or small problem: The goddess who sent the protagonist really likes the photos of handsome guys from other heroes. Five stars because I plan to keep pursuing it, hope that the problem can be corrected, and I don't want to sink the book review [Chigua]

Come on, author [crazy] [crazy] [laughing] [laughing], why don't you take advantage of the fact that there are not many people commenting and unify the mother's Elin yarn or Elin yarn? The front and back are a little different.

It's interesting. The author has a lot of dirty talk. I would like to call it the best one this month. Five-star praise sent

It's pretty and quite interesting.

It feels like a different world, and the emotions are well described [please update]

Very good, a masterpiece. I hope the follow-up will be like this. I emphasize that I am not a human and a machine.

It looks so good, I must keep reading more.

The content is good, but I don't really like slow writing. I'll save it first and read it when the book runs out after a million words.

It looks good, I'll give it five stars first. Ai,,,

The book is quite good, and the writing style is better than most novels in Tomato. However, it is too slow to read and has too much writing! It's just not suitable for an impatient person like me [face covering], but if you're short on books, I recommend reading it! Although I don't like reading it, it doesn't stop me from giving this book a five-star rating. After all, most of the books Tomato recommends to me are bad books, which cannot be compared at all [Chigua]