Adventurer’s Log: My Livestream Comes from Earth

How to put it, friends who like traditional Western fantasy should understand this evaluation. Although this book is run by AI, you can tell, but the author is very good, at least his outline and details are very good. This book writes what a Western fantasy should be like, what a brave person should be like, what an adventurer should be like, just like a fairy tale, you guys Do you understand? This book gives me the feeling, or the feeling of a book, like a fairy tale, with thousands of faces. At least in my eyes, he wrote a fairy tale feeling, or a sense of story. I have not encountered this feeling in Tomato for a long, long time. Brothers, it may be the joy of finding gold. This book deserves this evaluation from me, a rare evaluation. There are some poisonous points, but they are acceptable to me. One is because the AI is running, which is a medium-level descriptor. The other is that several small problems in the money system have not been handled well, such as bargaining and currency replacement. There are also poisonous points because I have too many history, I don't care at all, and I haven't found them. So far, these are the ——Written in this book and updated to Chapter 97

Still pretty good. But I think the setting of strength is not very good. Things like calmness are difficult to evaluate. It is better to change it to willpower and spirit. Also, the use of sentence patterns is very abstract. It is not that it is used too much. I saw this use almost ten times in just a few chapters. But all in all, it's a pretty good piece of work

It's pretty cool, but when buying a horse, the protagonists say 5 gold coins, but the boss just says the minimum is 3 gold coins. It's not the boss's reverse bargaining, right? The more he cuts, the lower the price becomes. I laughed to death. After waiting for so many days, I have saved more than 20 chapters. It's a broken cave. If you don't go in, you will instantly lose the desire to read. It's too boring. You can have feelings, but can you have less of them? I thought these last 20 chapters were romance novels.

The writing is delicate, and it is considered a clear favorite among Tomatoes. The plot is also good. The main problem at the moment is that the pace of the plot is a bit slow. It is recommended to reduce unnecessary explanations in the main plot, and these can be put into daily life. The AI ​​auxiliary has been overused, and the main plot is still the same old problem. Too many rhetorics will make people watch boringly. Author, read the article yourself. Do you really think it's a good thing to over-stuff adjectives? Daily use can still make people feel that the writing is good, but the main line is still like this, and the more you read it, the more you read it.

It's so well written, it feels like an immersive read. Inaccuracies and omissions in language and text destroyed the sense of continuous reading. The self-talk during the live broadcast once again broke the reading experience. Live broadcasting to self-talk in front of adventure partners felt completely inconsistent and ruined the immersive reading experience. Summary: Weird chocolate, stale cake, soggy bread.

Brother, give me five more chapters. I'm dying. Please, brother, just one more chapter. I won't touch it again. Please, brother, really, just one chapter. I swear I will never touch this again. I really can't stand it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now. I beg you, brother. Please give me one more chapter. Brother, please give me one more chapter. , I'm dying, please, brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me, I feel like I'm shaking all over, I can't breathe, please, brother, just give it, just one more chapter, I won't touch it again, please, brother, really, just one chapter, I swear I will never touch this thing again [crying] [crying] [crying]

The writing is very good. It is not the old-fashioned Western fantasy style of fighting monsters and upgrading in a hurry as soon as it starts. Instead, it unfolds slowly like an ink painting, and the rhythm is really well controlled. I have a small suggestion, that is, I feel that the interaction mode with the barrage can be appropriately improved. For example, in the future, according to the fan adhesion in the live broadcast room, the top fans will be sent specialties from another world, gourmet food, etc. In the later stage, I feel that it can also open a short-term trip to another world for a few days. Only in this way can the setting of the live broadcast room play its role. Personal suggestion.

I have read more than forty chapters, which is rare. I have read a good book without any mistakes or awkwardness, or the plot can make people immersed in it so that I don't have the heart to find faults. There are no flaws or stupid plots, and there are no flattering jokes that can make people fall into displeasure in seconds, such as being as handsome as the reader Yanzu. I have nothing to say, I am extremely speechless,

Definitely not AI. Such a delicate writing style cannot be simulated by a mere AI. It has a gentle and gentle feeling that takes all the viewers to reveal the face of a different world bit by bit. There is no violence. To be honest, the writing is very good.

The writing is very touching and beautiful, and I can't help but want to go to such a different world. . . Because of the environment, architecture, scenery, appearance, clothing, food, etc., A lot of space is used to describe it, and it is modified with gorgeous adjectives. It really gave me a feeling of yearning. . . It's a pity that the brain cannot respond to these detailed descriptions. Many words are written in one glance and ten lines, and there is relatively little effective information entering the brain.