Jobless: Forbidden Sword Arts? I Only Know the God-Eroding Style

It's very interesting to see that other Wuzhi fandoms are all about the main character practicing magic, and some also write about how to practice swordsmanship as an assistant. It's the first time I've seen this type of professional swordsmanship. It's quite novel. I guess it's the ancestor who wrote a different style of opening chapter in Wuzhi fanfic. Some people may not like this style, but I often read unofficial fan fiction, which is a novel feeling. The protagonists written by others have indeed written all kinds of dazzling magic, but the protagonist in this book, the kind of close combat is too comfortable. Rudy will never be able to defeat the dragon god in his whole life. Although the upper limit of magic is endless, if swordsmanship really reaches a certain place, it really feels stronger than magic.

This is currently the most interesting of the jobless fanfics I've read, although I've always been resistant to having multiple female protagonists? If the emotional scenes were better written, it would be acceptable. I hope the author can write smoothly. The protagonist is a swordsman, which is an interesting setting. If Luo Qixi is accepted, how will the human god be sealed in the subsequent plot? Rudy and Luo Qixi's daughter Lala is the Guan Jian of Boss Long's seal of the human god.

After reading Chapter 7, let me first say that the summary has great potential, but the details are interesting without going into details. Then there is the catch. Blaser looks very similar to Rudy, and Paul said he was looking for his biological father. Why didn't Senise doubt it, and Blaser didn't suspect that Paul was his father? I remember Graylat's green eyes were very iconic in Jobless ( And Rudy was only 6 years old in Ankylosaurus year 413 There are many shortcomings, and overall there is a lot of room for improvement. I will take a look again.

The writing is quite good, but I have to point out one mistake. The protagonist Ankylosaurus was born in the third year of the calendar year 403, and was only ten years old when he arrived in the royal capital in Chapter 42. According to the setting, Princess Ariel (404) was only 7 years old at this time, and Luke (405) was only 8 years old. Ariel's image should be that of a blonde lolita, not a lady. But her sadism still exists, but it may not be as playful. It can only be said that the author still thought too little when writing it. Also, I would like to remind the author to pay attention to the timeline and age of this article. According to your setting, the protagonist is ten years old, so there is a 2 to 3-year age difference between him and Luke, Ariel, and Isaruti. The protagonist is older than them. Of course, I know that people in the world of jobless reincarnations are very precocious, but I still find it difficult when Luke calls the protagonist a child. According to his character, he should be called "this guy." In addition, Isaruti had a very reserved personality when she was a child. She relied more on her brother Dantoris, and the two of them usually sparred a lot. I really hope that her brother will play a role in the next story. If the author is really too lazy to change the character setting of this article, I will read it as a parallel world. Best wishes to the author! 🤭

Now that I have read Chapter 56, I wonder if the protagonist will join the Dragon God. If so, what will happen to the Water God? After all, he is also a master

Author, please do it faster 😠

It's a pretty good book, but it overwhelms the combat power of Kyrenu, the Water God, etc. The assessment is just like Alice's Sword God. Really, it doesn't make any difference if you take Kyrenu or not.

I think it's OK. It feels like it's the first time the author has written a book and it's already good enough to attract others.

It looks very comfortable, nothing poisonous

Don't break the ball