My System Didn't Finish Loading Until After I Died of Old Age

It's very well written and I like it very much. It's a slow-warming Western fantasy. A high-quality story requires various foils, logic, and detailed descriptions. Once a lot of content is omitted, it will become like some pure and mindless cool articles. It may be large in volume, but it will not fill you up. I feel that many good articles and stories require a lot of preparation, just like many big things need to be well prepared in advance. Small things don't require too much preparation, but there is no sense of accomplishment after they are completed. So, take your time, fast or slow, follow your own pace, and just write a good story.

The writing is quite detailed, but unfortunately, reincarnation is completely random, and so are talents! This feels like not a novel, but a collection of short stories! ! ! [Smile]

There are too few, and some plots feel boring. In about ten chapters, I feel that the characters are all dead, not vivid enough, and it is difficult for people to be involved in it. It needs improvement, but overall it is okay, and the subject matter is okay. In the big theme of Western fantasy, rebirth is rare. For now, it can be read. For readers who want to read this relatively new type of novel, it is worth a look. Come on, author.

Who knows, Jiba! I stayed up until three in the morning reading this book. I could barely keep my eyes open and couldn't bear to put it down! The plot is exciting and intensive, making you laugh and cry. The protagonist upgrades and fights monsters all the way, which is very interesting. The supporting characters are also super cute. There is no messy bloody plot. It is a pure treasure story! The author's update speed is also very fast. It's super fun to follow the updates. I've already given it to my best friends, so we can update together! If you haven't seen it, hurry up and hit me if it doesn't look good (no), it's really good-looking! It's too bland, with no exciting points. It's a bit like a composition that makes me want to sleep. There are traces of using AI to expand writing.

Any person or fictional person in the world should have his or her own values ​​and goals. The story cannot always be dull. If you want to stay popular, you must capture the readers. The subject matter of this book is Western fantasy magic, so its main audience must be the young people of the Z era, so you need to add a little passion and inject your soul into the article. I think people who keep reincarnating will eventually see through everything and become a "fun person", and the protagonist becomes the creator (recommended to watch I Am God)

Not bad! At least compared to some simulation articles, system articles should be more realistic and down-to-earth. As I get older, I don't like mindless cheating articles. The only problem is that there is no content I want to read. If you hadn't asked me to leave a review, I wouldn't have bothered to comment.

I thought it was the setting of constant rebirth, but I didn't expect that each reincarnation was written in such detail. The author put his heart into it, and it was not a brainless text. I read it in one sitting. I didn't expect that I would start a business after this reincarnation. I thought I would just brush it off, but it ended up being so long. I would have chosen to watch the urban genre when watching Business Wizards. I was very disappointed and gave up.

It is recommended to skip the third game and just take a look at it. It is really a bit different from the previous ones. I can only say that the only shortcoming of the current game is that the third game is too disappointing. If the fourth game is well written, I will review it. It's a pity that I can't read it any more. Maybe it's because of the character issue. I like the character of the protagonist in the early stage and I basically skipped through the later chapters. I have no patience. This is the author's first book and it's already very good, but the pacing is not well controlled. I'm looking forward to the next book. I still like the style. I just hope that the character of the protagonist doesn't change so much. This later character basically has nothing to do with the early stage. It's very uncomfortable to watch. It feels like changing the protagonist. Come on.

Damn, it's all AI. I can only hope that the quality of the novels written by AI is higher. For example, this novel is very good, and maybe the author has done a good job. There is currently no obvious change in style. It is probably that the AI ​​is integrated and the prompt words are leading.

Multiple rebirths are indeed a hot topic recently, but there are gems in the works. The key is to write unique features. Has the author found that this kind of books with multiple rebirths are usually very fast-paced, quickly laying out the world view and setting, and usually have their own power system, and a social environment that can be described in detail. But I took a look and it felt like a classic Western fantasy adventure. If the pace is too slow and the progress is cleared after rebirth, it will make people bored. The power system that is too popular will not have the novelty of climbing the tower, so there may be tedium and boredom in the later period. This is the inevitable result of the conflict between the setting and the world view. Of course, this is some self-comparison after reading many books. The most important thing is to write according to my own ideas. But I would like to remind the author that if you want to make this book very popular and want many people to read your story, then maybe you can think carefully about the aspects I mentioned, focusing on the contradiction between the setting and the world view, and this kind of rebirth theme will consume a lot of character description. If you change the birth point every day, the later characters will definitely become flat. Just say whatever comes to mind. Wish the author good luck writing the book I gave my own opinions on the author's previous questions and I look forward to writing a good work.